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Empire captain on pegasus on commission!
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axia
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Empire captain on pegasus on commission!

Hi here there are another hero of the empire army of averland done on commission! If you want vote for it on coolminiornot!

http://www.coolminiornot.com/292758

For questions and critics feel free!

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12-23-2011 10:03 PM
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RE: Empire captain on pegasus on commission!

The first thing that caught my eye was the highlighting on the neck of the pegasus, it's truly tremendous! The only thing I could offer up as constructive criticism is that the shields on the horse's barding (or whatever that is) looks a bit plain, maybe if you did a little freehand in the yellow sections, it would look a little better. But as usual, fantastic model. Now I'm probably going to go over to your other model and have to comment again, as it's going to be brilliant once again, but I'll try to resist. wink
12-23-2011 10:42 PM
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RE: Empire captain on pegasus on commission!

I love the work, great blending on the yellow.
I know it can be a swine.
However the gap between his legs and the saddle sticks out like a sore thumb, it make need a little correcting to that he is seated properly.

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12-24-2011 02:02 AM
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RE: Empire captain on pegasus on commission!

Looks fantastic, love it when people do yellow and black really well.
Though may I suggest next time posting both the empire commissions in one thread?

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12-24-2011 05:01 AM
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RE: Empire captain on pegasus on commission!

Looks great.

Quote:However the gap between his legs and the saddle sticks out like a sore thumb, it make need a little correcting to that he is seated properly.
I don't think that this is a issue if you consider that the model is in fact moving. It is my understanding that you, while riding quickly, often lift yourself up from the saddle.

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12-24-2011 12:05 PM
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For the way the pegasus/the model is posed, the way his legs/butt are in relation to the saddle is absolutely perfect.

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12-24-2011 01:00 PM
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RE: Empire captain on pegasus on commission!

I'm inclined to think he could be just a little bit further back in his saddle, but that is just nitpicking. Once again you have shown us a paintjob that makes me wish to go out and burn my armies in shame :P

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12-24-2011 01:06 PM
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RE: Empire captain on pegasus on commission!

thank you all for the comments! If you want vote it on coolminiornot! Ok mod I'll post all in one topic next time! For the position of the captain: I've done it as if it was pointed towards ready to give a blow so up on the saddle slightly forward!

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12-27-2011 04:05 PM
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