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TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!
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TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Three days had passed since Simon's return to Nexeternus not that anyone there would have noticed as it had been under dark clouds all that time. Repairs on the fortress's main entrance conducted by skeletons and zombies were nearly finished. The Sylvanians were still experiencing the grief over the deaths of their fellows and had been burning effigies of Magneqrox on their fires and sacrificing slaves to Simon like worshippers to a god begging him to take revenge on their invaders. Of Simon himself none of the Sylvanians had seen him though it was rumoured that he was preparing a terrible revenge.

Simon stood at the window of his study looking over his lands. His people wanted war and they were going to get it. He had spent the last few days resurrecting the Brethren it had taken a long time as he had not been prepared for nearly all his gets to be slain in his absence indeed if it hadn't been for the gets of Milosh: Rowhaine and Rayla it would have taken longer. Aurelius and the others were now fine and had revealed that Magneqrox had the Crown of Sorcery in his possession. Another reason to hunt down Magneqrox and slay him Simon thought to himself. There was still no word from the Violet Citadel and Simon didn't have time to investigate nor did he want any help he would deal with Magneqrox himself whether the council approved or not.

He gathered everyone together and then spoke "I have decided that it is time for the hosts of Nexeternus to begin their attack we will begin with Magneqrox and the Feldenhaus's we will wipe out both of their lines forever." "Rowhaine, Rayla I will not command you to come with us you may return to your're master if you wish."If you choose to return then inform Milosh that Magneqrox is hiding at Castle Gor'Drok in eastern Sylvania according to Nar-Zuul's information." "If Magneqrox thinks he'll be safe being so close to Mannfred he will find himself sadly mistaken."

Lord of the Dead Lord of the Earth
You cannot hurt me I AM IMMORTAL!
"Without you're Humanity you are nothing but an animal."-Vlad speaking to Simon
You've nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
You're village will burn
like the heart of the sun
with infinite glee
its going to be ME!
that slaughters the world
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RE: TVC - Chapter 13 - Vengeance will be mine!

The feast had been a success according to Finelle. She had eaten more than the rest of the Vampires combined and quadrapled, yet only a few hours later before she and Magneqrox enjoyed the night in privacy, she couldn't resist the urge - nor did she want to - to eat almost everything in the castle. In the end she was approached by Emilya.

''You know, since you love indulging yourself so much, I think I'll show you a surprise. Mannfred is pleased with our progress, and so he sent this to us.''

Finelle smiled, and they walked to an old, rotten door. The stairs that were now there lead down, presumably under the earth. Finelle was almost too big to fit through the door, but its size was immense. When they arrived, Finelle's greedy eyes were greeted by an amount of food and delicious sweets that surprised even her in its endless amount. The cellar was seemingly endless, and this amount of food would take years to eat even for her vast gluttony.

''In fact he was so pleased, that he decided to send triple the amount. You are welcome here whenever you feel hungry, friend.''
''I don't know what to say... this is what I've always been waiting for Emilya, Slaanesh will grow stronger now.''

Emilya chuckled and left Finelle.

''So this is the reward... I'll have to let Magneqrox know how much I appreciate his efforts tonight.''

And then she gorged herself, resting momentarily before eating more and more. She was even bigger now, and very noticeably so. The door was way too small now.

''Oh well, I'm sure they'll understand, I had to get out in some manner'' she thought to herself.

Thankfully, the rest of the castle didn't seem to have this issue. Soon she was back into her and Magneqrox's chamber and.

''You've grown I see, wonderful. And your lips and hands are covered in food too. I guess Mannfred is generous then...'' said Magneqrox.
''Yes, and I'm going to let you know how much I appreciate you tonight.''

It was a good night indeed at Castle Gor'Drok, but Magneqrox's dreams were haunted by a vision. A vision of his dear Finelle being taken from him yet again, but this time with dark purposes.
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RE: TVC - Chapter 13 - Vengeance will be mine!

Rayla stepped forward "If its alright with you my Lord we would like to return to the Violet Citadel." "I think the master would want to know about and take part in this endeavor." "So be it." replied Simon "but not a word about this to any other council members." "The less people to know about this the better." Rayla nodded and with Rowhaine left the room.

Lord of the Dead Lord of the Earth
You cannot hurt me I AM IMMORTAL!
"Without you're Humanity you are nothing but an animal."-Vlad speaking to Simon
You've nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
You're village will burn
like the heart of the sun
with infinite glee
its going to be ME!
that slaughters the world
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Meanwhile in Dorgya, Glyre was taking account of all his forces. He had been away from his home for a long while, and he hoped that he would not be leaving again any time soon. Emilya decided she wanted to spend a few days spending time with Finelle. While Emilya did not share the same self-indulgence of Finelle, they both enjoyed torturing slaves and prisoners, and they were both equally spoiled and vain.
Eventually, Glyre decided he desired a new, more impressive mount than his Nightmare, and decided to go on a hunt for a dragon, which he and his chief necromancer, Aramaeus, would raise to undeath, he summoned for Aramaeus, and the two set out for the Plain of Bones in the Feldenhaus's black coach.
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

''I'd like to do something special today, Emilya. I'd like to collect every last one of our slaves, and gather them in front of me standing on a pillar. Then they walk up one after one, and I eat the food they're carrying up to me on the stairs on the pillar and really enjoy my glorious self, right in front of them. And then, you'll whip them to get more and more until they collapse - then you whip them until they get more! hahaha! what do you say?''
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Night fell over castle Gor'Drok and as it did a mysterious and thick fog began to surround the castle and the ruined village. A small herd of wild deer grazing looked up and then ran as vague silhouettes appeared in it. The silhouettes grew larger as they became figures moving closer to the castle. Simon stepped out of the fog followed by Nar-Zuul, Aurelius and the Brethren they were closely followed by a horde of Wights, Skeletons and Ghouls plus several wraiths and lesser spirits. Simon stopped at the wall. "Nar-Zuul take half the troops and take the battlements eliminate the guards without giving yourself away" "The rest of us will enter from the cellars and make our way up."

Nar-Zuul nodded and cloaking himself led the wraiths and spirits through the gates where they opened them to let the others in before heading up to the battlements. Simon and his group headed down into the cellars.

Lord of the Dead Lord of the Earth
You cannot hurt me I AM IMMORTAL!
"Without you're Humanity you are nothing but an animal."-Vlad speaking to Simon
You've nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
You're village will burn
like the heart of the sun
with infinite glee
its going to be ME!
that slaughters the world
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Simon glanced round the corner and watched Finelle and Emilya playing some sort of game with their slaves which seemed to involve Finelle eating and Emilya whipping them. Lucius looked round the corner "Thats her!" he said through gritted teeth "That the bitch that tried to eat me." Aurelius and the others joined them "We've got to kill that fat trollop!" he said venomously. "Patience Aurelius she will die." said Simon reassuringly. "I will rest until I have ripped her apart and forced that husband of hers to eat her" snarled Marius "Interesting point Marius I'll make a note of that." said Simon "but we've got to go upstairs first and find that crown." They continued upstairs followed by the rest of the undead Nar-Zuul appeared "The outside is under our control now young master all the guards have been dealt with." "Good" "start moving in Nar-Zuul." ordered Simon.

Lord of the Dead Lord of the Earth
You cannot hurt me I AM IMMORTAL!
"Without you're Humanity you are nothing but an animal."-Vlad speaking to Simon
You've nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
You're village will burn
like the heart of the sun
with infinite glee
its going to be ME!
that slaughters the world
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Simon stepped on to a balcony over looking the Banqueting hall where Magneqrox and a white haired vampire seemed to be in conference. Simon's troops were slowly manouvering to surround the room. "Got you you son of a bitch!" thought Simon to himself.

Lord of the Dead Lord of the Earth
You cannot hurt me I AM IMMORTAL!
"Without you're Humanity you are nothing but an animal."-Vlad speaking to Simon
You've nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
You're village will burn
like the heart of the sun
with infinite glee
its going to be ME!
that slaughters the world
[Image: voncarstein.gif]
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Suddenly, Kerel turned around.
"Ahh, we have a guest, did you think you could surprise me?" Kerel then drew out his axe, as Magneqrox readied himself for a fight. "How you made it past my defenses is beyond me; but, I am sorry to say your little raid ends here. Kerel then ran up the stairs followed by Magneqrox, when he was about halfway up, he saw his path was blocked by skeletons.
"Honestly, you forget where you are, Grave Guard, to me!" Kerel shouted, severing the head of the nearest skeleton, Magneqrox followed suit, and seemed to be enjoying himself.

Meanwhile, Glyre and Aramaeus had just reached the Plain of Bones, they saw several of the Dawi-Zharr on their way, and Glyre was considering to ask them to forge armor for his dragon, whenever he would attain it. The Coach hit the ground, and its ghostly driver took them to the bones of an ancient Dragon.
"Aramaeus, I have a good feeling about this beast, let us begin the summoning." Glyre said, taking a book out of the coach.
"Yes, my lord, perhaps I will be granted with the fruits of unlife if all goes well?" Aramaeus asked.
"Perhaps, Necromancer, but regardless, do not fail in this summoning."
"Yes, master." Slowly, a fell wind began to blow all around the two, and suddenly, the skeletal remains of the dragon began to rise out of the dirt. The creature was a horrifying mass of muscle, bone, and dark magic, and its body gave off a sent of decay.
"Perfect, you will be called Ferdrusk!" Glyre shouted, as the zombified creature let out a great roar.
"My...Master...We have succeeded!" Aramaeus shouted.
"Yes, now come, let us find some Dawi-Zharr so that this noble creature may be armed."
The two then set out towards one of the many Chaos Dwarf camps, hoping that Ferdrusk would bring them into compliance.
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

As Kerel battled his way through the skeletons he noticed that despite his shouted command no grave guard had emerged. Simon laughed "I'm terribly sorry but with regards to the garrison here nobody's coming to aid you" Looking over to Magneqrox who was wearing the Crown he said "I love the head gear Magneqrox it really suits you unfortunately it doesn't really belong to you does it?!" "Perhaps its time to take it off before your swollen head gets any bigger." said Simon seriously "Its mine until someone takes it from me Simon but it won't be you." sneered Magneqrox. "You're so right" smiled Simon sensing something was wrong Magneqrox felt his head where the crown should have been resting to find it was gone. He looked around the room panicking slightly and then saw Aurelius, The Brethren and other undead standing there Maximillian was holding the crown grinning he hurled it up to Simon who caught it and examined it "So this is what everyones been after" "I think I'd better hang on to it don't you!" Magneqrox growled and started moving up the stairs towards Simon "Whats wrong Magneqrox don't agree well here's another idea." Simon smirked and tossed the crown to Nar-Zuul "Secure this somewhere safe." he ordered Nar-Zuul nodded and with the crown vanished.

"Now then I think that brings you back down to our level" said Simon. Kerel reached him and struck at him with his axe but was seized by the vampire lord and thrown down on to the banqueting table. Simon was not smiling anymore "You went too far Magneqrox didn't Aurelius warn you about the dangers of angering me?" "Of course he did you just chose not to listen" said Simon answering his own question. "Not only did you kill my get Aurelius you also killed my grandgets Sariah's children she has been traumatised by what you've done and believe me what I'm going to do to you is going to make your actions seem like nothing in comparison!" Simon's face went bestial as he slowly descended the stairs towards Magneqrox "and of course there is also your actions against Milosh and Lesa who I suspect could be my until recently unknown Uncle and Aunt not to mention my allies against the oncoming storm." Simon reached the bottom of the stairs and continued walking towards Magneqrox slowly. For the first time Magneqrox felt real fear unlike Milosh Simon's rage was silent and confident. Simon stopped in front of him "You have forfeited your right to exist Lord of the Draconids." he said with no anger just statement of fact.

Lord of the Dead Lord of the Earth
You cannot hurt me I AM IMMORTAL!
"Without you're Humanity you are nothing but an animal."-Vlad speaking to Simon
You've nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
You're village will burn
like the heart of the sun
with infinite glee
its going to be ME!
that slaughters the world
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Kerel looked at the scene, knowing that he should find Lady Emilya and ensure her safety above Magneqrox's, he ran out of the room, cursing himself for ordering the guard to disperse for the night. Eventually, Kerel made it into the courtyard, where he saw Finelle and Emilya playing some strange game.
"Lady Emilya; come! The fortress is under attack by several Vampires...Lady Finelle, your Magneqrox is in the war room, I suggest you aid him!" Kerel shouted, beckoning for Emilya to come. "My lady, we will be safest in your room, I will guard the door."
Kerel and Emilya made their way up the castle's great stairs and halls, which were disturbingly absent of the regular undead rabble. Upon reaching her room, Emilya called for Sylvia, Kaitelyn, and Amie, 3 of her friends and gets.
"Kaitelyn, Sylvia, you two stay with me, Amie, go find Glyre, tell him i'm in danger, along with his entire castle."
"Sure, i'll do that as fast as possible." Amie said, as she turned into a bat and flew out the window.
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Magneqrox trembled slightly before swinging out with his fists and leapt at Simon. Simon stepped back to avoid him before leaping forward and striking him on the jaw. Magneqrox grabbed Simon by the front and hurled him into the air. Simon somersaulted through the air and landed on all fours before running forward and slamming Magneqrox into the wall he struck Magneqrox in the face "FOR LESA!" he shouted he struck him again "FOR MILOSH! he shouted he struck him again "FOR MY FAMILY!" bringing his face close to Magneqrox's ear he said "and this! This is for me!" Then using a great deal of strength hurled Magneqrox into the centre of the room where he was quickly surrounded by Aurelius and the Brethren as one they raised their weapons and began burying them into Magneqrox's flesh as he screamed with an inhuman roar.

Lord of the Dead Lord of the Earth
You cannot hurt me I AM IMMORTAL!
"Without you're Humanity you are nothing but an animal."-Vlad speaking to Simon
You've nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
You're village will burn
like the heart of the sun
with infinite glee
its going to be ME!
that slaughters the world
[Image: voncarstein.gif]
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Amie flew to the Plain of Bones until she saw a small Chaos Dwarf outpost with several Dawi Zharr gathered around what appeared to be a large dragon. "Perfect." She thought. She descended directly infront of Glyre, and returned to her regular form.
"Glyre, Gor'Drok is under attack, the Grave Guard are dimished, and Emilya is hold up in your quarters." Amie said.
"Damn it!" Glyre shouted, "Gilgaramesh, how fast will Feldrusk's armor be ready?"
"I told you already, my artisans have completed it, bring that beast into the Temple of Hashut and we will arm it." The chaos dwarf said.
"Perfect, you better have it prepared quickly, and about those immortals that would come to bolster my forges?"
"Ahh, yes, they are ready, they all agreed to ride in your Black Coach."
"Perfect." Glyre said. "If what Amie says is true, we will need a diversion, I will draw the attention to Feldrusk and myself, while you, Dawi Zharr, with get into Dorgya from Ghoul Cave."
"Very Well, by Hashut, we will not fail you!" Said Gilgaramesh, as Feldrusk was slowly armored. After several hours, the beast was ready, and Glyre, Amie, and 8 Chaos Dwarf Immortals set off toward's Dorgya.
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Glyre and his allies came to the Castle, with Amie turning once again into a bat to speak to Emilya, and all the others, except for Glyre, making their way to Ghoul Cave. Glyre dismounted Feldrusk, and strode into his Castle. He made his way through the fortress, until he came to the sounds coming from the War Room.
"I see Magneqrox was no match for you." Glyre said, glancing around the room and smirking upon seeing Magneqrox.
"Now, you, VonCarstein, How does an end to this war sound, and an alliance between you, and Dorgya?" Glyre asked, while he could here several ghouls and Gilgaramesh moving below the fortress.
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

"Sorry but I'm afraid that wouldn't be very convenient for me." "I already have allies ones who are a bit more trustworthy." said Simon surveying Glyre "With you as an ally I wouldn't be able to turn my back or relax for a second not to mention the fact that you declared war against me and it can only end with your death or surrender." There were sounds of a struggle outside and Emilya was marched in by Aurelius. "Good work! Aurelius any trouble?" enquired Simon "Her handmaidens didn't quite see eye to eye with me but they should recover after a few days." said Aurelius pushing her over to Simon. Simon grabbed her and held her close "Magneqrox has had part of his punishment now its your turn." "Wait!" shouted Glyre "You said this could end with our death or surrender!" "Did I?" said Simon "sorry a slight slip of the tongue I meant to say your deaths and surrender" with that he buried his fangs into the struggling Emilya's neck and drank deep as she whimpered.

Lord of the Dead Lord of the Earth
You cannot hurt me I AM IMMORTAL!
"Without you're Humanity you are nothing but an animal."-Vlad speaking to Simon
You've nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
You're village will burn
like the heart of the sun
with infinite glee
its going to be ME!
that slaughters the world
[Image: voncarstein.gif]
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''EN... ENOUGH!'' Magneqrox was covered in fire as he rose up and an inferno enveloped his viccinity. It scorched the brethren, staggering and driving them back. With Phantasmagoria being solidly held by both of his hands, Magneqrox leapt forward against Simon. The brethren's coordination had been dispersed by the fire, and they were recovering. Simon raised his weapon to parry but it was of no use, for upon seeing this Magneqrox breathed fire at the hilt of the weapon, forcing Simon's burnt hands away and the blade with it. Simon desperately stepped up several steps in the stairs as Magneqrox's blade made a musical sound in the air, as it always did. Realising that momentum was essential, Magneqrox feinted a strike at the chest but cut down, almost severing the feet from Simon's legs. In return, Simon struck at Magneqrox's hands as they were still open.

''GRARH! why won't you DIE?!'' Magneqrox swiped from the right, forcing Simon's blade back with his strength. A big crater was formed in Simon's shoulder and he recoiled in pain, trying to counter with a thrust to the breast but Magneqrox side-stepped and knocked him down. Simon lay open now, his weapon laying a good two metres from him and his body wracked with pain. Magneqrox grinned, slowing his pace down to walking, laughing at Simon who was reaching for his weapon.

''You thought you had the capability to defeat me, fool?''
''You know Magneqrox, your tongue would fit a lot better as a decoration in Nexeternus''

But Magneqrox was as always slow to truly anger, and he merely walked onwards. Simon at last grasped the weapon and so did Magneqrox, raising it behind himself, preparing to swipe downwards.

''For Sariah and the brethren...'' he whispered. Magneqrox grinned wider at hearing it and struck. Pure black energy was rising out of Simon's eyes as Magneqrox's blow was parried effortlessly with one hand. Magneqrox was terrified.

''What's... you... you...''

There was no answer. Simon rose up, but Magneqrox was still thinking clearly. He saw the opening in Simon's left and breathed fire at his right. Simon was forced to withdraw his blade once again and Phantasmagoria became engraved in his flesh, tearing open a great hole. Magneqrox was almost done for however, the brethren had damaged him badly. With one last push of will and strength, Magneqrox was aiming to impale Simon from the left to right, catching his heart, as he was lying down on his left side.

''Your end is he-'' Magneqrox was cut short by Aurelius, who was so infuriated that he had taken Marius's sledgehammer, run up the stairs and hit Magneqrox in the head. Before he hit the floor however, Magneqrox threw Phantasmagoria while turning to lay on his back. It hit Aurelius in the middle of his chest, where he had been impaled earlier. Aurelius didn't move, but then suddenly fell back down all the way to the floor. Magneqrox and Simon were both exhausted and could impossibly continue to fight.

Then entered Finelle. The brethren were too shocked to do anything, having seen both their own Simon, Magneqrox and Aurelius crush eachother.

She slowly and sensuously walked up the stairs.
''Mmmm... I told you Simon, I'd eat you sooner or later...'' It was deathly quiet, except for the drool that was dropping to the ground.

Simon struggled but he was practically decapitated and Finelle's grip was tightening. Now her mouth was wide open, her tongue encircling Simon's body to strengthen the grip.

''I'll eat you slowly, so you suffer. See it as... mm... delicious food... as repayment for starving me...''

Simon's face twisted and he feared for his life, wondering what could possibly save him. Now, struggling was useless, he was being held tight by Finelle and steadily moved closer.
''I demand a feast!'' she said briefly, before moving him closer again.
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Simon tried to laugh but over come by pain "Fu..... Funny! so do they!" he said pointing Finelle looking puzzled turned ghouls were all over the room surrounding her licking their lips she turned back to Simon "you brought me food how kind" she said "funny!" smiled Simon weakly "thats what they said to me when we arrived" Finelle frowned and turned as a ghoul hurled it self at her and bit her savagely on the arm she hurled it back towards the others normally this would be enough to scare them but the ghouls only jumped back slightly before moving forward as one "No! they can't I'm at the top of the food chain" wailed Finelle as she was covered by them tearing and biting at her. Lucius came over and knelt by Simon's side "hold on my lord!" He placed a hand on Simon and used his necromantic powers to begin healing him. "Marius! quick get Aurelius" he said Aurelius was brought over and healed too. Simon staggered to his feet "Tell all troops to retire we're going we've got what we came for." Aurelius do something about this place would you." Aurelius nodded eyes glowing he created a skull of fire and hurled it into the interior the fire spread quickly as they left ignoring Finelle who was still struggling with the ghouls who didn't seem to care the unconcious body of Emilya and the badly injured Magneqrox "you can't leave me here" he rasped "Don't worry you'll soon be joined by Mannfred and your wife" said Simon as he left "SIIIIIIIMMMMOOOON! roared Magneqrox as the fire got closer. There was no sign of Glyre or anyone else outside as Simon clambered aboard his coach wearily "lets get out of here" he said "Take us to the Violet citadel.

Lord of the Dead Lord of the Earth
You cannot hurt me I AM IMMORTAL!
"Without you're Humanity you are nothing but an animal."-Vlad speaking to Simon
You've nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
You're village will burn
like the heart of the sun
with infinite glee
its going to be ME!
that slaughters the world
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

Suddenly, as Simon's Coach departed, the massive form of Feldrusk rose from the Fortress. It began to give chase to the Coach, but stopped when he heard Glyre's summons, immediately he returned to the courtyard, and awaited Glyre obediantly.
"Damn that Simon!" Glyre shouted, hearling a candle into the wall. "Gilgaramesh, you imbecile!" The chaos dwarf had just crawled out of the hole in the floor.
"Look, the Ghouls started going rabid...I...I couldn't stop them!" The Dwarf pleaded.
"Fine, Finelle, Magneqrox...do something, Gilgaramesh, take your Immortals and put out this fire..i'll get Emilya to safety." Glyre said, as he picked up Emilya.
After a long walk, Glyre took Emilya to the Hall of Spirits, and set her down on a chair, caressing her injured neck and head in his hands.
"Emilya...I promise you, we will have vengeance against Simon, and all his brood, and my love, whatever you wish, you shall receive it."
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RE: TVC - Chapter 12 - Vengeance Will Be Mine!

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Disciple of Nagash, the perverted master,
The more you struggle, the more he goes faster.
Give him breast, and give him bust,
The more you give the more he thrusts.
And as you all shall soon see, there is nothing that he will not conceive
Whether dark or whether weird, its guaranteed to make you real
But in the end we all see, he is the forum master and perverted seed.
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