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A cry for help

Discussion in 'Tales from the Crypt' started by Unas the slayer, Jan 19, 2018.

  1. Unas the slayer

    Unas the slayer Wight King

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    I'm completing a new short story, which I'm going to use as my entry in a writing competition that's happening on Lustria Online, with "the power of music" as theme (by rules, Lizardmen / Seraphon must be involved, or at least mentioned).

    Anyway, my story is almost finished, and it involves a Necromancer as one of the main characters.... but before submitting it, I was wondering if someone can help me.
    English is not my first anguage, so I would like a proofread review for grammar and terms and, most of all, a constructive review of the piece, to see if there's some unclear passage, or if i can add / subtract something.

    Anyone volunteering? :bowdown:
     
  2. Borgnine

    Borgnine Moderator Staff Member True Blood

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    If nobody volunteers, I can recommend trying out Grammarly (#notsponsored) - it's pretty smart and can help you with the grammar at least. It's not true proofreading, but at least it's something. I won't volunteer because this program has better grasp on the language rules than I do ;)
     
  3. Alabaster427

    Alabaster427 Minister of Thriftiness True Blood

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    How long is it?
     
  4. Unas the slayer

    Unas the slayer Wight King

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    1100 words. Basically very similar in lenght to "Unbroken", the story I have already posted here.
     
  5. Alabaster427

    Alabaster427 Minister of Thriftiness True Blood

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    I can take a shot at it.
     
  6. Unas the slayer

    Unas the slayer Wight King

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    Thanks, much appreciated. I'll send a PM. :thumbsup:
     

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