Legion of Nagash Background and Fluff for Army Choices

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Great fluff Arion.

I have added it the main thread. Are you going to choose another?

Doombunny - I would personally say that whilst that is a good start, it needs fleshing out so its length is nearer the others posted.
 
Some would call the Rats of Clan Eshin the deadliest assassins in the world many others would name these as the dreaded Druchii famed for their poisons and swift strokes, all are wrong, all pale in comparison to the dreaded Reapers of Nagash.

In the ages and centuries past many men have toyed with the art of Necromancy in vain hope of gaining immortality, few succeed however and when they die their spirits do not rest easy. Nagash summons the spirits of these men and binds them to his will arming them with deadly blades that cut both the victims soul and their mortal flesh. On the battlefield they are rarely seen but when called forth strike with a otherwordly strength and speed that few can match. Immune to the blades of mortals and nigh unstoppable they hunt the foe remorlesssley until their destruction or their master sees fit to end the chase.

The most favoured of these Reapers are gifted with Rune forged blades capable of shatttering bones and poisoning minds with the slighest cut, truly they are to be feared by all who appose them.

These ethereal assassins are the vanguard of a Nagashi attack cutting down the enemies leaders and strategists before dissapearing into the wind leaving only dead in their wake.


Any Better???
 
Marcus Von Drac said:
Indeed. I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism:
and turning ones fallen comrades against you - should be once

Also, what is dhar? I have never heard that before.

Actually, 'ones fallen comrades' makes perfect sense. To change it to 'once' would actually change the meaning of the sentence.

BTW bunny typos aside that's not bad. Good enough to use I'd say.
 
Some would call the Rats of Clan Eshin the deadliest assassins in the world many others would name these as the dreaded Druchii famed for their poisons and swift strokes, all are wrong, all pale in comparison to the dreaded Reapers of Nagash.

In the ages and centuries past many men have toyed with the art of Necromancy in vain hope of gaining immortality, few succeed however and when they die their spirits do not rest easy. Nagash summons the spirits of these men and binds them to his will arming them with deadly blades that cut both the victims soul and their mortal flesh. On the battlefield they are rarely seen but when called forth strike with a otherwordly strength and speed that few can match. Immune to the blades of mortals and nigh unstoppable they hunt the foe remorslessley until their destruction or their master sees fit to end the chase.

The most favoured of these Reapers are gifted with Rune forged blades capable of shatttering bones and poisoning minds with the slighest cut, truly they are to be feared by all who appose them.

These ethereal assassins are the vanguard of a Nagashi attack cutting down the enemies leaders and strategists before dissapearing into the wind leaving only dead in their wake.

Any Comments?
 
doombunny666 said:
Some would call the Rats of Clan Eshin the deadliest assassins in the world. Many others would name these as the dreaded Druchii famed for their poisons and swift strokes, all are wrong, all pale in comparison to the dreaded Reapers of Nagash.

In the ages and centuries past many men have toyed with the art of Necromancy in vain hope of gaining immortality, few succeed however and when they die their spirits do not rest easy. Nagash summons the spirits of these men and binds them to his will arming them with deadly blades that cut both the victims' soul and their mortal flesh. On the battlefield they are rarely seen but when called forth strike with an otherwordly strength and speed that few can match. Immune to the blades of mortals and nigh unstoppable they hunt the foe remorselessly until their destruction or their master sees fit to end the chase.

The most favoured of these Reapers are gifted with rune forged blades capable of shattering bones and poisoning minds with the slightest cut, truly they are to be feared by all who appose them.

These ethereal assassins are the vanguard of a Nagashi attack, cutting down the enemy leaders and strategists before disappearing into the wind, leaving only death in their wake.


Slight grammar and typographical correction.
 
Look closer. What I quoted is not the same as what you originally posted, in short I have already done it for you. The quoted bit in my previous post is the corrected version.
 

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