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Glad you enjoyed it, lynks! Always a pleasure to hear back from satisfied readers. Of the Seven Sins, I think Envy is my favourite character. There is something about her that really gets under my skin. I understand being Down Under might make getting a copy of either book difficult, but...

Engaging as always, GoW! TPL

Greetings all, So at the end of the month I am releasing a short anthology of seven stories. Dark Fantasy, they follow the decline of a bloodline to the Sins; monsters and spirits that lurk in the night, in the woods, and always in Man himself. England is in a state of upheaval as the Sins run...

RE: Parravon Falling: A Tale of Bartram du Coudray I like it! This is promising writing. My main C&C are that it could have done with a proofread or two, in order to catch the niggling little sentences and inaccuracies. Examples of these are sentences such as the following, which go on a...

This was a refreshing read, very interesting. I say write some more ... TPL

The End His brother’s severed skull stared back at him, its jaw agape, locked in silent scream for all eternity. The degenerate vampire stood transfixed, as though by a blade, unable to tear his own unblinking eyes away from the vacant sockets of his brother. The rest of the desecrated skeleton...

Ahhh, I think I remember Nar-Zuul... Interesting chapter, please continue! TPL

Cheers for the reviews, I'm glad it's gone down well! There is, perhaps, one more piece I could post... However, it's very final. It is the concluding piece of fluff I wrote for the army, after I had given it up for other, more ancient, judicial and crocodilian vampires ;) I wanted a final...

Evening all, Just a very short piece here. As much flash fiction as it is fan fiction. I wrote it a while back and thought it might like to show its face here. It is a very short, succinct piece, which I seem to remember was the introduction of my faction to a campaign. Anyway, it captures the...

This would terrify me. Goes back to the windows / mirrors thing. End of. TPL

Entertaining! Short but sweet. TPL

An interesting topic that I thought I would raise, given the nature of this forum; what is it that makes the members of Carpe Noctem scared? What really gets the hairs standing on your arms, or sends that shiver down the back of your neck? Be as open, broad and honest in your answers as you...

Perhaps the start of something new, if I can find the time to keep working on it. Hope you all enjoy the installment for what it is, and hopefully there will be more to come... TPL * Black Tarn Chapter One World's Edge Mountains, IC 1228 Shouts of defiance echoed around Sakhmet as he...

Uh oh... I have no defence for the clunkiness of the blurb, Lord Fear, except that I've only had positive feedback for it to date. I hope you can look past that! The book is selling well in these initial stages and I'd love if members of the community here could get involved too. Reviews can...

Cheers for the comments MasterSpark, you're right - it really is a very exciting time for me at the moment. I will keep on writing, don't worry! And DoN - will definitely drop you a PM when the book becomes available, the community here will be amongst the first to know about it when it does :)...

Very intriguing story developing! Your writing is descriptive and the characters well presented. Especially liked the subtle conflict between the necromancer and Keladon towards the end of the last installment. One thing niggled me in this latest piece, only tiny though and easily rectified...

Just thought you should all be amongst the first to know... ...I am self-publishing my debut novel, Hell's Water, through a print-on-demand service in January 2011! I am extremely excited by the prospect of my writing being commercially available, for people to read and critique and judge for...

Thanks Onikaigo! You don't even have to read much, I'd just love a rating on there and to hear any thoughts / constructive criticism the esteemed members of this forum have! And DoN...I don't think there is a way to get it in a PDF; I am not a very technical person when it comes to computers...

Hey everyone, It's been a while since I've written here! It's been a massive incentive for me to hear back from people who've enjoyed my Children of Maat series, especially so to see it featured in the site's own e-zine. And while I have not been continuing this series, in light (or dark) of...