Book 1: A Law Unto Her Own - Chap. 5-8

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Chapter 5: The Sands of Time
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It was early morning, the sun just winking over the horizon, and the Bitter Sea was anything but. Its waves were calm, not their usual malevolent selves but pitifully weak, as though afraid to attract the attention of that which sailed their waters.

A shape slipped smoothly through the rising mist, quiet as the dead. The barque was of Nehekharan design, but was far from typical of any other to be found in the ports of the Great Kingdom. Huge chunks of gristly bone served as the mast pole, and adorned the rigging. Tendon, rubbery and dry with age, bound the macabre ship together, and moth-eaten banners hung, resplendent nonetheless, from the sides of the soundless vessel. Their insignia was unmistakable.

The sleek ship cut through the water as true and straight as an arrow, although the deck was deserted. Gone were the bustling sailors, heaving, sweating, at the oars. Gone were the slaves, who drenched the deck in salt water, and fed the hungry belly of the ship with cargo. Gone was the Sea Master, his bellowing voice replaced by the sighs of the wind.

The living had no place aboard this monstrous vessel.

Uneven ruins rose into sight on the distant shore. They stood, black and jagged, against the fiery red of the rising sun, a deathly silhouette, serving as a reminder for all foolish enough to sail these waters of the evil that once festered there, corrupt and corpulent. Only those with a death-wish made port at that cursed place now. Only those who sought to die, mad and alone, amidst the haunted ruins of Lahmia, walked those bloody sands.

The ship sailed closer, as softly as a dead man’s sigh. Wreathes of mist snaked out, keeping pace with the rotting barque, never seeming to move but always behind it, trailing. Once they almost caught up, threatening to swallow the wood and bone, and envelop it in their chilling coldness, but the ship slid smoothly, unscathed, from their grasp.

Waves lapped pitifully against the hull of the ship, as though loathe to touch it, yet desperate to encourage it on its way. Had they known what dwelled within, waiting patiently to dock, and rejoin with land once more, they would have left the ship to its own devices. Even the wind was quelled, reduced to a whisper on the air, quiet and impotent.

Passing through the ruined sea-gates and into the Lahmian bay, the graceful ship began to slow. As the broken heights of the Lahmian docks rose up, cracked and burned, around it, the ship became two, then three, then a dozen, as more and more of the macabre vessels slipped from out of the concealing mist and into the bay.

A score, then two dozen, then three, the mist regurgitated the unnatural barques. The slim, decaying vessels slid into port alongside each other, directed by some greater will. Freed from the horror that had transfixed it, the Bitter Sea slapped ineffectually at the now creaking hulls of the ships. Stay away, it seemed to say, do not take to my seas again.

The first figures staggered from out of the gloom below deck, stepping awkwardly onto the wooden boards. Their bleached bones clicked, and empty eye-sockets stared unseeing at the carcass of once mighty Lahmia.

The fleet of Nagash emptied itself onto the bloodied flagstones of the cursed city.

Time. It had done little to ease the anguish that poisoned Maatmeses’ heart. As she stood in the blackened ruins of the Temple of Blood, the revenant shades of men long dead met her gaze. She watched them as they strode across the temple antechamber, their insubstantial figures wavering in and out of consistency, trapped in a re-enactment their final moments for all eternity. They were like shadows, wisps of memory given some semblance of form. Their lips moved silently as they walked through toppled statues and flame-charred walls. She could not tell whether they were products of her imagination, shades called back from the grave to haunt Lahmia’s broken streets, or a mixture of both. Her ancient eyes glistened.

The time for vengeance was upon them. Now, at long last, the Nehekharans would pay for their war crimes. Maatmeses had learned much in the dripping, stagnant bowels of Nagashizzar, their dark god himself teaching the surviving vampire masters the twisted intricacies of necromancy. It had been difficult beyond comprehension, and she had been slow to learn, but every day she had devoted to practice was a grain of sand in the right direction, and now her arcane knowledge was more than a match for anything she could remember the priests of the Great Kingdom being capable of.

The ancient vampire pulled at the straps of her breastplate, tightening it, and stalked from the despondent temple. She had been much changed by the time spent in Nagashizzar. They all had.

For one, Neferata had been stripped of her rank. The cunning bitch was no more a queen than Maatmeses was now, and instead her husband Vashanesh had risen as their captain. Nagash himself had appointed the Lahmian king as their master, and against his incomparable will not even the Queen of Lahmia could contest. That alone had brought her deep-seated satisfaction, in the early years of their arrival. She had found nothing quite as rewarding as watching their once glorious queen rant and rave her displeasure.

Neferata was as powerless against the Great Necromancer as the mortals were against her.

A grin split Maatmeses’ face, the expression all the more daemonic for her years in the company of Nagash and his ilk. Her mouth was a mesh of needle-like fangs, and her once bronze flesh had faded slightly in the absence of the Nehekharan sun. Her cheeks had become sunken, giving a strained, feral turn to the once High Justice’s face.

Perhaps it was the years of exposure to the Great Necromancer’s precious warpstone, she mused as she strode from the shattered maw of the Temple of Blood and into the light of day. It had certainly corrupted the visage of their lord, transforming him beyond all recognition, turning him into a reeking, rotting horror the likes of which she had never before seen. It was no stretch of the imagination to believe that the corrupt substance had affected her own appearance in some way.

Her delving into the necromantic arts was another possible explanation. W’soran was a walking example of what prolonged use of Dhar could do to one’s body. The previously malnourished vampire had grown ever more emaciated since his extensive experiments into death and necromancy. He rarely left Nagash’s side, like some Khemrian hound, eager for any scraps of ancient lore or prophecy that was tossed his way by their master. That his extensive efforts had proved fruitful, she could not deny; the scholarly vampire was by far the most proficient of their number at spell casting. The innermost secrets of necromancy were at his discretion and he gave little away, jealously hording what macabre knowledge he accumulated and sharing only a little of that with his own priests.

He had also paid the highest price for his potent skills. With leathery flesh and skeletal limbs, his withered corpse of a body said it all: toy with the wind of Dhar, and suffer the consequences.

Outside it was still morning, but already the sun’s heat was intense, searing the vampire to her core and cooking her insides. She walked down the long flight of cracked stairs, to join the rest of Nagash’s lieutenants, her bronze armour winking in the sunlight. This is what is must have felt like to be condemned to the desert, she thought. It was a punishment she had frequently heaped upon the murderers and thieves of Lahmia, driving long spears through their limbs and pinning them to the desert sands. The lucky ones were devoured by carrion, their innards ripped out and consumed by the ravenous birds. Those less fortunate were left there, driven mad by the heat, until their desiccated corpses were removed and replaced with fresh criminals.

Grim nostalgia drew laughter from the vampire, a dusty hiss escaping her throat.

She missed the old days. She missed the authority and satisfaction that came with being High Justice. Now she was a Dark Lord. A lieutenant of Nagash, captain of his unholy legions. Rewarding, yes, but it was not the same.

She needed her vengeance. It was a long time coming, and the years had done nothing to diminish it. If anything, the desire for retribution had taken root in her, unmoveable, revenge as much a part of the woman as her blood-thirst, or her very name.

“You are finished in the temple, Maatmeses?” It was W’soran. She nodded, and his lips split into a tight smile. “Then we are ready. We have taken Lahmia uncontested, but the rest of Nehekhara still awaits our attention! From the eastern shores to the furthermost reaches of the Great Desert, the mortals cower in their petty kingdoms. Lybaras, Mahrak, Quatar, Zandri, Numas and Khemri, all are soft and weak and afraid. They must die.” Vashanesh interrupted, his own voice belying an aura of majesty and authority that W’soran could never hope to achieve.

“This day we mark the beginning of the end for the priest kings and their subjects. They will fall before our limitless hordes and deadly magics and like a plague of locusts we will descend on them and devour them, in the name of Lahmia, and Nagash!” The six master vampires snarled and laughed, their hearts swelled with confidence and hunger. The deserts will run red with the blood of mortals. Their corpses will turn the seas themselves crimson and stagnant. All of Nehekhara will be theirs, and the glory of Lahmia restored!

“We have waited so long…” said Harakhte, his ruby eyes turned skyward. Ushoran laughed, a cold, hard sound, devoid of human emotion.

“Too long, my brothers and sisters. But now we are set free, unleashed upon Nehekhara to do our lord’s bidding, and none shall stand against us! The blood, just think of the blood!”

“For Nagash!” shouted Vashanesh, his bestial rage carrying far into the sky. The Great Necromancer had taught them the ways of necromancy. He had promised them their Lahmia, resurrected to its former glory. He had shown them the light in their time of darkness. As one, the vampires began to chant.

Their tongues spat corruption; venomous words that had no right to be spoken aloud filling the air and turning it thick with dark magic. A fierce wind raced through the decaying city, unsettling ruins and scattering sand to the skies.

Above all their voices, one sounded stronger and more powerful, harnessing the winds of magic and bending them to his will as slaves to a king. W’soran screamed and chanted, incantations flying fast from split, bloody lips. He raised his hands, long black robes buffeting his frail form.

And all across the desert graveyard that was Lahmia, the dead stirred. Skeletons that had sailed down from Nagashizzar with their undying masters stood side by side with the brittle bones of those long buried beneath the shifting sands. Generations of ancient nobles woke in their mausoleums, reborn as wights - fathers, sons and grandfathers, they strode slowly from their tombs, enchanted blades clutched in mailed fists. Even the ghouls, degenerate men that on Nagash’s command had accompanied the vampires, crouched and leapt and howled their fury at the dark winds as they swept the city.

Thick grey clouds converged on the clear blue sky, concealing the blasphemy that was wrought below from the eyes of the sun, and the creatures of the night, the ghouls and ghosts and ghasts, screamed with triumph.

Then the vampire lords themselves stirred, breaking from the casting of their unnatural magics to lead their armies across the golden desert and into battle.

Maatmeses flushed with decades old excitement. Anticipation flooded her ancient veins. The time for vengeance had come. It was now. It was here! A thousand bitter memories came swarming back into her mind: of her murdered children, Gehb, Eshe, Khait and the others, of friends lost, Abhorash first and foremost, of her laws flaunted and disgraced, and of her home - her city - torn down from around her. Desperation welled up like a desert spring inside the vampire, soulful and earnest.

“Beware, men of Nehekhara,” she screamed aloud, “for I am Maatmeses, and I come to claim my blood debt!”
 
RE: The Sands Of Time - Ch. 2

wow... anyone ever told you you're an amazing writer? :grin: really do need to figure out a way to rope you into TVC
 
RE: The Sands Of Time - Ch. 2

His chest burned. His vision blurred. Something splattered against his face and he smeared it away, crimson staining his forearm. Fear enveloped him and the Nehekharan captain stumbled back, slipping in the sand.

Another orc charged, its yellowing teeth rotten and slick with the blood of his regiment. As the green behemoth bore down on him, he hurled his sword arm forward. Words escaped his lips, tearing his throat raw. Everything seemed to slow down.

The orc grimaced, its tiny red eyes glinting furiously. It swung back its arms, great green ham fists clutched around enormous cleavers. The weapons were brutal in their simplicity: They were no more designed to cut flesh as they were to mash it to pulp.

A flurry of white-fletched arrows smacked into the monster and it
stumbled forwards. Green-black blood spurted from its eye where two of the wooden shafts had entered, boring into its brain.

With an unintelligible gurgle the orc fell and died.

All around him, Captain Ammon’s men fought for their lives. Spears lashed out, impaling the thick-skinned monsters and drawing their unnatural blood even as their axes and cleavers wrenched the Khemrians apart. They were only men. Thin-skinned. Lean. They were like children stood next to the massive bulk of the orcs.

The sun scorched their flesh, dazzling off the bronze-gold armour of the Nehekharans, and the slimy red of the orcs’ tusk-like teeth. The battle had been raging for hours, and Ammon’s men were at their wit’s end. They had no energy left. They were spent. The walking dead.

He had to end it, soon.

Another cloud of arrows descended into the fray, the guttural cries of the orcs drawing some small respite from the captain. He had fought their kind before, on many an occasion. They swarmed down from the mountains, the green hordes burning and pillaging all they encountered. More than one tomb had been ransacked by this particular force, and such looting could not be tolerated. The necropolises were sacred, and ancient, and not for the depredations of the green ones.

It had been easy to locate them. Their stench carried far on the desert winds, a mixture of sweat, blood and faeces. It was unmistakable in its nausea, and it had taken only days to track them.

The orcs had been waiting.

Darting forward, Ammon came face to face with another of the beasts. Sweat clung to its green flesh in a translucent sheen, and a myriad of skulls stared vacantly back from around its waist, reminding Ammon of the fate that awaited him, if he so much as slipped. There was no room for mistakes.

“Djaf watch over me,” he muttered, invoking the feral jackal god even as he brought his sword stabbing upwards. It sunk into the orc’s throat and stuck fast there, a stream of unclean blood dripping down its silvery blade.

It was an economical blow, playing to both Ammon’s speed and his enemy’s weakest spot. If the man was anything, he was an efficient killer.

The orc grunted and took Ammon in its mighty arms, crushing him, breaking bones and bruising flesh even as it choked its last. Something snapped inside him and the captain screamed, pain exploding throughout his body. This was not how it was supposed to be. He wouldn’t die at the hands of some green-skinned barbarian! He would not!

Tears of pain stung at his eyes and he gasped desperately for air. Blackness crept over his vision, shadows growing in the corners of his eyes. The sounds of battle stretched out.

Almost instantly the orc’s bear hug loosened and he slipped, helpless as a new-born child, onto the sands. His battered breastplate rose and fell as he gulped great mouthfuls of fresh air. He hated the orcs, he thought bitterly, as though thinking it might banish them all suddenly from the face of the Great Desert. They came, and then died, and a year later they came again. They were as numerous as the tombs of the dead, and like the tombs, there were always more. Always.

Ammon rolled over and struggled to his knees.

“Give me swarms of scarabs any day.” He hawked and spat, to clear his throat. Redness trickled from his lips, and it felt as though the River Vitae itself was rushing through his head.

A keening cry went up, but it was not the scream of a dying soldier. It was the wail of the wounded, the sound that men made when the battle was over and they actually had time to stop and look at the gaping cuts and purple flesh that covered them. He had heard it a hundred times before. It was the sound of realisation, of shock, as the men felt for the first time their ravaged bodies. He scanned his surroundings.

The orcs all lay dead, mounds of green muscle and fat At least three score of the green ones’ corpses covered the sands, limbs askew, their flesh already spoiling in the fierce heat of the sun. He resisted the urge to gag and rose shakily to his feet.

“They are numerous this year. I have not fought against such numbers of the green-skinned ones in living memory, Ammon.” A man strode up behind the ungainly captain, his olive-skinned flesh green with the blood of their enemies. Talamanke had known Ammon since their days as youths, when they had both joined the city guard together. It had not been long before they had risen through the ranks, eventually joining the glorious army of King Alcadizzar. Their affinity with all manner of weapons made them versatile and deadly opponents. Ammon himself had only been made captain over Talamanke on accord of his more affable personality: the man loved to smile, loved to laugh, loved to drink, and it had won him over in the eyes of his comrades. Talamanke was too quick to criticise. He was not a detestable person, but his sharp tongue had earned him more than one black eye.

They were as opposite banks of the River Vitae, both part of the whole, but different sides of it. Ammon nodded to his closest friend.

“You are right, Talamanke. They are stronger too, more desperate. I thought, for a moment then, that I might be walking from the fight down the ways of the underworld.”

“Perhaps you’re getting old, my friend,” said Talamanke, his eyes glittering. Ammon grinned. He was getting old! That did not stop him from outmatching those half his age in kills. With age came skill. Experience, he noted, counted for a lot.

“At least your sense of humour survived the encounter.”

“It would take a lot more than some foul orc to slay that,” said Talamanke, also smiling. It lasted but a moment before his face reverted to its stony self. “Something must be driving them down from the mountains, pushing them into the desert.” It was a disconcerting thought. Anything that could possibly drive the war-mongering orcs out from their lands was a threat to Nehekhara, for sure. The beasts lived to fight, to battle and to die. In that they were as predictable as the rising sun.

What in all the Great Desert could drive an orc to flee, and not fight?

The groans of the wounded had subsided into a low murmur, and as Ammon watched, his men began helping each other to their feet. The injured sagged against the shoulders of their comrades, the battle having taking a vicious toll. Over half of his regiment sported wounds. Their blood stained the sands.

“Come on,” he said, his voice heavy. “Lets head back to Khemri.”

“What’s the hurry, Ammon?” Movement caught the corner of the captain’s eyes, and before he could so much as shout a warning, a bloated vulture had descended from the skies onto the bodies of one of his men. It’s cruel beak rent at the dead man’s flesh, ripping great strips of it away to sate the mangy bird’s hunger. Within seconds two soldiers had seen and run at it, swords waving, and with a hate-filled glare the bird took flight. Ammon frowned.

“I am tired. The men are tired. We need to return, and rest. I will feel much better once we are safe behind Khemri’s walls.” Talamanke did not argue.

Within three days the Khemrian regiment had made it back to their capital, the city rising out of the horizon long before they reached its gates. It was an uneventful trek; this close to the Nehekharans’ city, the only threat was that posed by the punishing heat. Even the deadly scorpions and snakes that concealed themselves beneath rocks and under the very sand were of no concern to the Khemrians. They had grown up in the desert. They knew how best to avoid them.

Despite this, the men were weary. The battle with the orc warband had taken it out of them; the creatures had fought with a ferocity that was rare, even in their green-skinned kind. Fear had driven them into a frenzy, which, coupled with the maddening effect the intense sunlight had on their psyches, and the orcs’ natural tendency toward battle-lust, had made them brutal and monstrous opponents. The manner in which over half of the survivors hobbled and limbed their way across the undulating dunes made this much obvious.

Even before their glorious city rose into view over the golden sands, Ammon saw it. They all did. It’s presence was like a blight on the landscape, unmoveable, impervious to harm, a tumour at the heart of Khemri that none could remove. Its mere sight cast a chill shadow on their souls.

The Black Pyramid of Nagash.

The blasphemous edifice towered over the heights of Khemri, fifty times the size of even the Great Pyramid of Settra. Nothing could compare to its vastness, the sheer magnitude of the pyramid was breathtaking. It was a monument to tyranny, to betrayal, to murder and black magic. Everyone who saw it trembled, for they knew the atrocities that had been committed in the lightless bowels of the ancient structure, far from the blazing heat of the sun.

Far from the eyes of the gods.

It was an eternal testament to the priest Nagash and his immitigable evil, an all encompassing evil that had matured on a diet of fear, hatred, jealousy and loathing. The priest had been mad, and dangerous, and had abused his position in the king’s court to his own ends. The very gods had trembled as the disillusioned liche priest had perverted the secrets of the mortuary cult, warping them into something altogether more horrifying in its sacrilege, or so Ammon had read.

He suppressed a shiver and, with a last, wary glance at the ancient monument, walked off toward Talamanke.

There was a quiet knock at the door. It wasn’t so much a knock as a thud, as something soft and heavy fell against it. From the imagined safety of his bed sheets, Ammon waited. His chest neither rose or fell, the man’s chamber a motionless silhouette in the moonlight.
Then, quietly, a scrabbling, as someone or something sought to gain entry. The man was reminded instantly of the many cats that filled the city, coming and going from houses, temples and even the palace as though they owned it all. That’s right. It was probably just a cat. The revered beasts cared little for the sanctity of night, so long as they were fed and lathered with attention.

The scrabbling got louder, more desperate.

Slowly Ammon rose from his bed and approached the door. It was just a cat, he convinced himself, repeating the sentence again and again through his mind. It was just a cat. It was just a cat. There was nothing to fear here, at the heart of mighty Khemri itself. He was as safe as King Alcadizzar himself, protected from their enemies by the towering city walls and the countless guards posted there. He swallowed the lump that had matured in his throat and took the last few steps toward the door. It was just a cat. It was just a cat.

“Ammon.”

He froze.

“Ammon…let me in.” It was Talamanke. He could tell from the voice. He had heard it pronounce his name a thousand times over, and recognised it instantly. The man sounded pitiful. There was an edge to his voice that shouldn’t have been there. Was he hurt? Anxiety flourished like a sickness in his heart, nurtured by the night breeze that decided then to play with the balcony curtains. They billowed into the room and assumed shapes from Ammon’s darkest fears, taunting him.

He reached out for the door. If Talamanke was hurt, he needed help. Ammon shook his head to clear them of his irrational thoughts. He was captain of one of Khemri’s finest regiments, for Ptra’s sake, not some cowardly street trader! Such unnatural panic was not becoming, and far from professional. He reached out and opened the door.

The thing that spilled into his arms was anything but Talamanke.

It half fell, half pushed Ammon, and the two tumbled over. It was heavy, and stank of sweat and blood. In the darkness he could not properly make out its features, but its clothes were ragged and torn to shreds. Putrid breath washed over him and he coughed violently.

“Ammon…” it crooned, managing awkwardly to right itself. Ammon’s limbs were pinned by a strength far greater than his own. It was unnatural strength, bred of desperation and eagerness. This…thing was not letting him go.

“Talamanke?”

“Yes, Talamanke! Talamanke, Talamanke, Talamanke,” it said, breathing its foetid breath again. “Talamanke is hungry…So very hungry.”

It leaned in suddenly, and in the spot of moonlight Ammon could make out the features of his friend. They were scarred, and grimy, and a crusted redness trailed down from his lips. Several of its teeth were missing, and an expression of hunger marred its face.

Then the captain looked up, and his shout of surprise filled the chamber.

Talamanke had no eyes. Two gaping holes were all that remained of them, black and bottomless. He could not tear his own gaze away, even as his friend’s face descended, jaws open, ready to savage his face.


Ammon leapt up from his bed, the thin sheets falling about him. A sheen of perspiration covered the captain, plastering his slick hair to his forehead. His breath came in ragged bursts.

It had been a dream. Just a dream, nothing more.

“Thank the gods,” he said fervently. Collapsing back into his bed, Ammon waited for his heart to catch up with the realisation that he was safe. It was racing faster than the king’s wife, Khalida, when she rode her chariot, and rightly so.

The ghoulish image of Talamanke lingered in his mind. It had seemed so real, down to the stench of the beast’s breath and the deathly hollows of its empty eyes. Never had he seen such a monster before. It was detestable in its resemblance to his friend, his stomach turning at the obscene parody. The thought of it repulsed him. There was nothing so grotesque in all the Great Desert, and he of all people should know. He had lead the armies of Nehekhara against their every foe, from the vile green-skinned ones to the treacherous desert nomads, and even the stunted ones, when they despoiled the necropolises with their hammers and their gold-fever.

Why did the gods mock him with such morbid and monstrous creatures in his sleep? Ammon did not deserve such nightmarish taunts, of that he was certain.

A quiet sound pricked the captain’s ears, and the hair on the back his neck stood up. His nightmare resurfaced, screaming violently back into his head.

There was a scratching at the door.

It was only quiet, but in the silence of the night it sounded like every spirit of the underworld was raking his door with their ancient claws.

Any calm that had settled over his heart was lost as it exploded back into action. It beat so fiercely that he was sure that whatever it was outside his door could hear it, slamming over in his chest.

The vision of eyeless Talamanke leered up from the shadows, grinning, starving, desperate to bite at his face and eye and mouth and chew on his flesh, and Ammon started. His mouth felt like the Great Desert. Fear was not something the captain was familiar with, and it gnawed away at his resolve.

The scrabbling got louder, and something bumped softly against the wall. He heard the muffled ‘thud’ as it knocked against it.

Fire flashing in his eyes, Ammon jumped to his feet. In three large steps he snatched up his spear, and stormed toward the door. His veins boiled. No nightmarish ghoul would get the better of Ammon, Captain of the Third Asp Cohort of Khemri. Courage smouldered inside of him.

“I am coming, Talamanke.”

Reaching out, he threw open the door and lunged forward with his spear, his only protection from the nightmare made real. A snarl spat from his lips.

He stumbled forward. There was no-one there.

The cat slipped idly through his legs, rubbing up against them as it passed. A deep purr rattled from its throat as it melted into the shadows of his bedchamber. Then it was gone, and Ammon was alone again.

Slowly, the fire faded from his eyes. A protracted sigh seeped into the corridor, and his chest, swelled with bravado, sank wearily down. Talamanke’s words from the other day in the desert came back to haunt him, and an exhausted smile crossed Ammon’s features.

His friend was right. He was getting too old for all this.
 
RE: The Sands Of Time - Ch. 2

how many times can i say 'great' before i sound like a stuck record? :grin: i cant wait to see how this develops.
also, do those questions you were asking about spider vampires have a bearing on the story? (spoiler! spoiler! spoiler! :lol:)
 
RE: The Sands Of Time - Ch. 2

Chapter 6: Dead and Lost
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Dark magic crept slowly around Maatmeses, four small strands of it slithering like black asps through the air. They encircled the vampire, inquisitive, drawn to the undead woman as moths to a flame. She lifted her left arm, allowing one strand to coil sinuously around it, and shivered as it made contact with her flesh. Her skin prickled, and a darkness crept over her eyes. This was power unlike anything the men of Nehekhara could wield. Nagash had taught her well. He had taught them all well.

She whispered something, the word lost on the necromantic breeze that swept suddenly through her robes and armour. The winds were hers to control, hers to manipulate. Her mastery of the arcane had not come easily, but once she had realised that it was, at its most rudimentary level, a set of laws, of guidelines, she had quickly caught up with the others. Even surpassed the likes of Harakhte and Ushoran, much to their chagrin.

The winds were bound to laws, to behave in certain ways at certain commands, and through careful manipulation of those laws, she could do anything.

The dead were her slaves now. For those that had wronged her, those pathetic mortals who had despoiled her city and slain her kin, penance was eternal servitude. It was justice, cold, dead and hers to command! She flashed her reptilian grin, every inch of it revealing more sharp fangs.

Taking a deep breath of the hot desert air, the Dread Lord of Nagash began to chant. The words came slowly at first, the blasphemous syllables almost too much for her lips to form. They were deadly words, malignant and cancerous, a blight on the very air into which they were uttered. The plumes of dark magic grew fatter, swollen by the unholy incantation, and smaller, slender tendrils began to creep away from them, furrowing into the eyes, ears and wounds of the bodies at her feet like ethereal corpse maggots.

Somewhere inside the thick storm clouds, thunder growled.

Maatmeses felt a thrill of exultation pass through her. She was at one with the winds! They were hers to mould into whatever purpose she saw fit, and they would obey her faultlessly, such was her command over the incantation that guided them. She had raised the dead many times before, in the dark belly of Nagashizzar, under the watchful gaze of the Great Necromancer, but the intensity of the experience never ceased to surprise her.

Slowly, awkwardly, the dead began to stir. They shook, their limbs twitching like the tail of a rattlesnake, and some flopped feebly over. The unwholesome stench of disturbed flesh rose from the blanket of spasmodic corpses.

A snarl snapping from her jaws, Maatmeses chanted louder. The dead would rise! They would! She may have lacked the deft skill with which W’soran and Neferata so easily re-animated the slain, but what she lacked in graceful mastery she more than made up for in raw power. The words tumbling forcefully from her now black lips, Maatmeses pushed the winds into the recently dead. The pressure she exerted was immense. She forced the tendrils of magic into any available orifice; eyes, mouths, gaping wounds and headless necks were all the same to her. They all served as points through which her magic could infiltrate the corpses. Subtlety and caution were thrown to the tumultuous winds.

Still she cried out, her voice as stone, her willpower undeniable and, as she snarled again, the first of the zombies staggered unsteadily to its feet.

“Come to me! Rise! Walk again my children! Rise! Rise! Rise!”

All around her, the undead clambered over each other to stand. Bale-fires lit, one by one, in their once vacant eyes, shimmering with supernatural light. Soon, Mahrak would be theirs, she thought triumphantly. The city would fall, its palaces despoiled and its temples torn down - a fitting retribution for the wrongs that the men of that kingdom had inflicted on Lahmia. Its dead would rise again in servitude of her and the other Dread Lords, and in the name of Nagash, the city would be theirs. Then she could turn her attention to that which mattered most.

Mahrak guarded the quickest and safest route through the mountains. With the city in their possession, the petty Nehekharan kingdoms would be divided, cut clean through the centre. Their strength would be halved. With Mahrak secured, she and her brethren could once more return to Lahmia and begin the slow process of healing there, just as Nagash had promised.

It would be rebuilt. It would be restored. Her city would shine again! Lahmia would live, and she would prosecute all who stood against her!

Neck taut, head raised to the heavens, she screamed her incantations, and the thunder joined her.

Issa watched from the front rank of some skeletons as his mother raged, her voice calling the dead back from the underworld to walk again in the name of Nagash. Those that resisted she plucked violently from Usirian’s realm, her magics trapping them in their ruined bodies. His vampire eyes could see the tendrils of necromantic power as they went about their work, invading corpses and re-animating the rotting husks. Such sight was a gift, one of the many that had come with joining the ranks of the undead. Before his ascension, he would never have been able to see the magic. He had been blind, and ignorant.

He had been mortal.

Another soul came hurtling back, dragged by a smoky tendril and encased in a prison of flesh, blood and rot. The sound of clicking bones and wet flesh filled the ears of Issa and, beside him, Ptoleme’s, Odji’s, Nebtawi’s and Shepsit’s too. The five children of Maatmeses stood and regarded their mother as she chanted, drawn and held there through a mixture of dutiful loyalty and macabre fascination. It lurked in the heart of every vampire, there was no escaping it.

Issa marveled at the confidence with which Maatmeses manipulated the winds. There was no style to her movements, betraying her lack of inherent skill, but she more than compensated for that with blunt strength and willpower. It was no stretch of the imagination to believe that now, after decades of tutelage under the Great Necromancer himself, she could help him. He was trapped in a vicious cycle, one that had grown monstrous over the decades, bloated on a diet of fear and loss, until it had consumed his every thought. She was his last resort, and would do her utmost to carry out his request, of that he was sure.

The woman had always been determined, and self-assured, he noted, as she wrenched more spirits from their resting places. The years spent in Nagashizzar had done nothing to diminish that. They had been hard, yes, but he and his kin had emerged the better for it.

Another of the bodies shuddered and rose, its arms dragging it across the sands. It moved with a hellish vigour that Issa had seen before, in the ghouls and ghasts that inhabited the lands to the north. It was hungry, for the soft flesh and hot blood of the living. Such an expression was alien on the still-fresh face of the Nehekharan, making it all the more abhorrent to behold.

Issa raised a hand to his own face, feeling for the smooth skin and beneath that, the marble hardness that made him so strong. He knew that he had changed. All things changed with time, even immortals.

Especially immortals.

He had no qualm with killing now. He had done it a hundred times since fleeing Lahmia. In that single day of anguish he had transformed into something else, something bitter and angry as dangerous as the hungriest crocodiles of the River Vitae. If only they hadn’t stolen Eshe from him!

Fury flushed instantly through him, his brow darkening and his heart turning sour with poison. Something bestial growled in his throat. A part of him felt guilty for embracing the monster within so easily, he did not fight the feelings of hatred and ire that had, over the years, consumed him. He did not even try. They gave him strength, and power, and a bloodlust unlike any he used to feel. For the past four decades he had lived with the festering guilt of Eshe’s death, weighing on his shoulders, and every day it had poisoned him a little more. Her death had not been fair! He should have done something. She should have done something. Anything! The accumulated pain had transformed him into something deadly, and angry, and few now could match his savagery in battle.

Every enemy was Eshe’s unknown murderer, every cry of pain was Eshe’s voice, and every body wore Eshe’s face, a mask, mocking his loss. He was barely recognisable as the vampire who had fled with Maatmeses from the ruin of Lahmia.

Would Eshe still love him, were she here? The thought hit him like a chariot and immediately he felt the beast subsiding. Guilt had that effect on him. It was pacifying in its gravity.

Yes, he had changed over the past half-century. They all had, it was unavoidable. He took a deep breath, steadying himself.

The last of the zombies lurched awkwardly to its feet, and at some silent command the legion of living dead shuffled forwards. The power the Great Necromancer had invested in Maatmeses had made her stronger. With the secrets of necromancy at her fingertips, she was as a dark goddess. Nothing could stand before her, or any of the other lords of Lahmia, for that matter. She could do practically anything now, and it was this knowledge that he clung so fervently to.

The stench intensified as the zombies staggered away, a trail of blood in their wake. They had not yet stopped bleeding from their natural deaths, and already they were bound in servitude to Maatmeses, he realised with a glimmer of awe. Necromancy was a potent art. It would deliver him from his grief. It had to, or else he was as damned as Eshe herself.

As the Dread Lord finished her rites, Issa turned and began the short walk back to their encampments. He would rest, and be fresh when he approached Maatmeses with his request. He would show her how serious he was, and she would see his pain, and she would understand. Their bond ran blood-deep, closer than any mortal mother-son could ever imagine.

A breeze brushed his face, and it was a natural one, the supernatural winds having guttered and died. He relished its touch and the soothing effect it had over him. A sigh escaped his lips and his hand slipped automatically to a cord around his neck, feeling for something attached there. Up ahead, their tents fluttered into view.

Ancient eyes watched the lonely figure of Issa as he vanished in the direction of their camp. They saw the painful memories that tore at his sanity as easily as they saw the sands at their feet, or the clouds in the sky, and they creased with sorrow, for they saw what Issa wanted, they saw the hope that he harboured like a precious stone in his heart, and they knew it was impossible.

Maatmeses walked slowly toward her remaining children, sobered from the intoxicating effects of the dark magic in light of Issa’s wishes. For a moment she was overwhelmed by her own memories, as scenes from that last fateful day rose up hauntingly from the confines of her head, but it was pain, not vengeance, that filled her, because for the first time in decades, she felt dread, genuine dread, at the prospect of the day when her broken son came to her for help.

Mahrak’s efforts to ride out and stem the tide of undeath, at the heart of the Eastern Desert, was truly pitiable. Their meagre army, with its chariots and horsemen, had been quickly overwhelmed by the sheer number of walking dead that Maatmeses threw against them. Speed and manoeuvrability were useless against the tar-pit that the Great Necromancer’s legions represented. The skeletons did not flee. They did not quake from crippling flank attacks that would have crushed the spirits of living forces, even as the steeds of Mahrak crushed them with their sharp hooves. They were indomitable.

Those that fell Maatmeses raised again, whether the broken bones of her own skeletons or the bodies of their recently deceased enemies. Their corpses were fresh, still hot and bloody, with all the traits of life about them, but Maatmeses cared not. She called their restless spirits back to life all the same, back to the desert, back into servitude of her and her iron will. It was her black sorcery that animated the undead creatures and granted them a semblance of life, and through those necromantic rites they were tied to her.

Their souls were hers.

They obeyed her every command without question, something that tickled Maatmeses. In their undeath, the Nehekharans were bound at long last to her laws. She had found a way to bring them into line and ensure their eternal obedience. It was satisfying, to say the very least. Her laughter carried far on the rushing winds, mocking and jubilant.

“Vengeance!” she screamed.

“You are enjoying yourself, crone?” It was Ushoran. The vampire strode up next to her, easily a head taller than the woman, if not more. His heavy armour shimmered with gold and lapis-lazuli, ever the picture of affluence. She threw him a smile, her thin lips failing to contain the rows of needle-teeth within. It was as menacing an expression as it was a greeting.

“Every man that dies here belongs to us, Ushoran. Either they supported the priest kings in the march against our city, or they partook in the destruction firsthand, or else they carry the blood-debt in their veins, passed down from their dead forefathers. They are traitors,” she said, the last word dragging into a hiss. Then, as an afterthought: “Yes, I am enjoying myself.”

“Just as you enjoyed your law-mongering, in distant Lahmia. I always knew that you gleaned a certain… satisfaction from your work. You concealed it, of course. Disguised in routine and righteousness and labelled as ‘justice,’ you turned it into something acceptable, necessary even. But I could always see it in your eyes. You love to watch them hurt, to suffer.”

Ushoran had been tame of late, his barbed words few and far-between. The change in character was not unwelcome; ordinarily he was as irritating and arrogant as the priest kings themselves. Maatmeses did not dignify him her attention as she spoke, instead watching as her sinew-bound chariots burst through a line of bowmen. The crimson carnage set her stomach rumbling. It had been too long since she had last fed, and she could feel the Red Thirst awakening. It pushed a the back of her eyes, in her gums and her hollow gut, a dull ache.

“You pretend to know things, but I can see through you. Your transparency is embarrassing, my Dread Lord. Large words do not account for a large mind, just as a quick tongue does not account for a quick one, either. Do not assume that because you revel in the suffering of others, that everyone shares your grim sentiments.”

“How can you stand here and say that, when your eyes grow sharp and hungry at the bloodshed unfolding before you? I see the slight turn of your lips, the rise and fall of your chest. You love to hear them scream,” he said definitively, tongue flashing out to moisten dry lips. Something akin to confusion flickered in his eyes, then went. Maatmeses did not notice.

“I see Lahmia, smouldering and destroyed, in my dreams every night. Every night, unfailing. The screams of my dying children haunt my very soul, an eternal stain on my being that I do not think I will ever rid myself of. Not all the waters in the River Vitae could cleanse me of its corrosive taint. When the smell of hot ash carries on the wind, Lahmia burns all over again, forever engulfed in a fiery conflagration within the confines of my mind. Can you begin to imagine how that feels, forced to endure these torments for the rest of my existence? I will tell you, Ushoran, it is torture in its vilest form. For all these crimes of war and more, I would see every man, woman and child in the Kingdom of the Great River dead. I am justified,” she said venomously, spitting the words like poison from her lips, “I am justified in the relief their deaths bring me. It is owed me.”

The conversation lapsed, Ushoran’s mouth clamped shut. His silence warmed her. For a minute, the two stood and appreciated the din of battle. Screams, primal and stark in the face of such unnatural foes, pierced the air, intermingled with the moans of the wounded and the clash of blade on blade as every one of the men ahead fought for their very lives. It was a futile effort.

Maatmeses struggled to control herself, her rage like a coiled cobra, just waiting to burst out in a flurry of sudden movement. Tension knotted her muscles and she stood, stock still, unsure of whether she would be able to control herself, if she so much as moved. Her memories of the fall of Lahmia were inciting. They inspired savagery, and tugged at the strings of her sanity. To dwell on Lahmia was to see blood, hot and red and gushing.

She took a long, deep breath.

“Why are you here, Ushoran? I am assuming it was not to exchange pleasantries with me. Return to your own forces, and prepare to resume marching south. This slaughter will not last much longer. Their very gods have abandoned them to our depredations. ”

“I come on Vashanesh’s request, to inform you that you are not to kill them all.” Maatmeses face creased up, a map of wrinkles and shallow grooves.

“What?”

“He was quite explicit that you should not slay all of the Nehekharan fools. They could have valuable information in those brittle skulls of theirs. He would use this to our advantage in the war.” Ushoran’s words were strained, as though he was struggling to remember the simple message. Maatmeses cast him a derisive glance. There was little respect in her eyes.

“What is the matter with you?”

“I am fine, I do not need your false concern,” snapped the vampire lord. “Follow his wishes and ensure that you detain some prisoners.” With that, he stalked back to his army. Maatmeses shrugged and returned to the battle at hand. Thunder growled quietly overhead, rolling across the killing fields and striking dismay into the men there. She could feel the forlorn emotion festering in their hearts as easily as she could feel the wind on her neck. It was a gift, a gift of her ancient blood. She had made no promises. She would make no special effort to preserve the lives of traitors and criminals. If Vashanesh wanted prisoners, he should take some himself.

Barely an hour had passed since they had stumbled out of the night and into combat, a mass of creaking bones and empty sighs, rank upon rank of gleaming skeletons and shambling corpses for as far as the eye could see. The very clouds had darkened as they neared, clouds that had followed them since Lahmia, products of the Dread Lords’ dark magic. Thunder tumbled from the heavens, a subtle growl at first that quickly turned into great roars of anger, which shook the very foundations of the desert itself with their resounding fury.

The thick clouds turned day to night, hope to despair, and concealed Nagash’s unholy legions from the pantheon of Nehekhara, hiding the atrocities that they committed from their godly wrath.

And they did commit atrocities. The dead were sacred throughout all of Nehekhara. Their houses outnumbered those of the living; towering marble edifices and ancient stone tombs, some dating back as far as the first king, mighty Settra himself. The Land of the Great River was a kingdom of the dead, but for the servants of the Great Necromancer, the necropolises served an altogether difference purpose.

They were reinforcement points.

Every time they passed one of the cities of tombs, Maatmeses, W‘soran, Arkhan, or one of the other Dread Lords would walk its empty streets, and call out the incantations that summoned the dead from their graves. Ancient skulls shook, and bones that had lain undisturbed for centuries stirred, rising obediently from their tombs to do battle for Nagash’s lieutenants.

Maatmeses would snarl as she awoke the sanctified tombs and cry out, her voice thick with righteousness, for she was exacting just penance on the men of the desert. They despoiled the streets of her fair Lahmia! They unsettled the balance that she fought so hard to maintain in her city, and this gave her every right, by all the gods, to claim her vengeance! They had befouled her thoughts, her memories, her life, when they had torn down the walls of her homeland, without a care in the world for the atrocities they were committing.

They were vermin, lower than vermin, they were criminals, and they would bloody her blades to temper the raw hatred of her heart, if such a thing were possible. This was retribution at its most literal, she thought, as the creaking skeletons and bandaged wights stumbled from their death-beds into the grey light of day.

The sun had risen, although it was a glimmer of silver through the dense storm clouds. Another regiment of the fleshless warriors stalked across the desert toward the Host of Mahrak and the men stumbled back. The action was involuntary, their legs twitching of their own accord. Their urge to flee was palpable, thought Maatmeses. She could taste it on the air, mingled with the sickly-sweet stench of spoiling flesh, and the hard, bland smell of grave dust. The stench of the mortals was rank, and fresh, and hinted at the terror that lurked in each and every one of their hearts. They were cowards.

The stench was familiar. It was the same that had saturated the streets of her Lahmia, nearly four decades ago. The smell was vivid and pungent, teasing unwelcome memories from the depths of her mind. She dwelled on them, and turned them into something useful, something terrifying. Her anger rose with every remembered moment of Lahmia’s last days. They would die, she promised. Every last one of them. She would see to that personally. Ushoran’s message was drowned amid a tumultuous sea of vengeance.

Her brow darkening, the ancient vampire infiltrated the minds and souls of the remaining Nehekharan resistance. There was roughly three-score of them left, but their numbers were irrelevant to her. They were mortals, weak and soft, easy for her vengeful will to penetrate. The horrors she saw and felt within them brought a crocodilian grin to her face, as much an expression of joy as one of hate.

The dead were coming for them. They were coming to stab them and kill them and make them their own. They were relentless and would not stop - could not be stopped. When they broke and died, the unclean light in their eyes did not fade, and moments later they would rise again, with rusted weapons that bayed for their blood. The blood of the living.

The lights in their eyes…The lights!

And always grinning, that toothy, fleshless grin, as though they took true delight in the cold slaughter they wreaked!

They were pathetic. Powerless. Where were their priests now? Where were their gods? Ptra was banished behind the murky storm clouds. Phakth’s falcons filled the skies, yes, but the lack-lustre light of undeath shone in their carrion-eyes. Geheb birthed rank after rank of ancient skeleton warriors, and the Asp Goddess’ poisons were useless against their decaying armies. The deities that the Nehekharans revered were as powerless as their worshippers. Maatmeses laughed, a husky sound, a dry, hard whisper that slid from between thin lips, and if a python could have laughed, that is how it would have sounded.

Then she struck, with the speed and savagery of that very same serpent.

She tore through the soft minds of the men of Mahrak. The attack was brutal in its savagery. It bordered on the psychotic. She splintered sanity and unshackled the foulest nightmares, tearing down the walls of reality before the mortals’ very eyes and reducing them to gibbering wrecks. Snake-headed daemons crawled from the darkest recesses of the men’s imaginations, to devour their souls. Thick, black swarms of flesh-eating tomb scarabs erupted from the sands at their feet, intent on stripping the flesh from their bones. Many took their blades to each other, seeing orcs, traitors and skeletons where there were only friends.

All the while Maatmeses stood there, lips moving noiselessly, her eyes fixed, unblinking, on the Nehekharans.

Most died from the shock, their thoughts a torrent of fear and darkness, but a handful survived. Their screams were chilling, and, broken from the inside, they made easy prey for the skeletons. The ancient, battle-worn blades of the undead warriors sliced forward, silencing them and putting them from their misery.

Only a few remained, the strongest-willed, those that had the inner fortitude to resist Maatmeses’ vengeance, if only slightly. She continued to laugh, exerting her will and directing the skeletons against the last tiny pocket of resistance. There could not be half a dozen men left.

“Kill!” she commanded. Her silent instructions were as simple as they were final.

“Kill! Kill! Kill!”

“Stop,” said the clear, calm voice of Vashanesh, the vampire appearing suddenly behind her. He was an imposing figure in his armour of gold-black lacquer. In his hand he clutched a large, golden khopesh, inscribed with glowing hieroglyphs that shone despite the absence of any real light. It was an heirloom, a weapon of the kings of Lahmia. He must have taken it from his treasury in the city’s last days.

Maatmeses heard him, and obeyed.

“Do not kill them…yet. We have use for the mortals, and the knowledge contained in their heads. Take the few survivors captive.” His voice rang with the authority of leadership, and something else. Something familiar. Something impeccable.

Maatmeses obeyed. Her legion lowered their weapons and the undead abominations surrounded the last few living souls, rounding them up into a tiny group.

A hand rested on her shoulder-plate, heavy and strong, as Vashanesh leaned in to whisper in her ear. His breath was heady and rich, betraying the nature of his recent activities, if the single stain of blood on his lips did not already.

“Good, Maatmeses, good. That was not so hard now. You would do best to appreciate my orders in future; I do not make them lightly.”

Everything was wrong. She felt like retching, but was frozen to the spot. She wanted to run, far away, to move and speak, but she could not. Her limbs were not her own. Her muscles unresponsive. She was trapped, like the spirits she had forced into the carcasses of the slain: a consciousness bound to another’s will. A tasteless concoction of confusion, panic and indignation seethed within her.

Inwardly, she screamed.
 
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Just caught upto date, Well written from the mortal point of view as well as the vampires, also nice addition with expanding on Issa's feelings, too many people portray them as mindless killing machines.

In regards to the TVC, there is a summary in the OOC sub-forum that should help bring you upto date, if you need any help or anything feel free to ask in the OOC thread or PM, it would be great if someone with your writing skill joined us.
 
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yes-yes, you must join-join quick-quick! i want more inhuman vampires in TVC :grin: though that would rely on you using the spider vampire
anyway, great work, as usual

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good enough for you? :grin:
cant wait to see what happens next
 
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Great development of both story and character. I like the little details you add in to enrich the environment and really place the story in the Warhammer world.

Well done! I'm eagerly awaiting more. :)
 
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I don't have any vampires who would have been around at that time but I do have a wraith called Nar-Zuul who hung around with Vlad in Sylvania and now hangs around with my vampire who has angelic wings and is thousands of years old perhaps he could appear serving Vashanesh in a similar manner.
 
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Again, nicely done! Some excellent writing in there. It was very good as a whole, but certain lines were sheer poetry! "...they would bloody her blades to temper the raw hatred of her heart."

Good! :)
 
RE: The Sands Of Time - Ch. 2

what do you honestly expect me to say that I haven't said already? :grin: fantastic work as always, I eagerly await the next installment.
 
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Chapter 7: A Goddess Reborn
IC -1163


The crooked priest stepped out into the path of the golden sun, savouring the kiss of the daylight on his leathery flesh. A more accurate word could not be found to describe his skin; time had taken a terrible toll on its condition. Where once it had stretched, now it pulled taut. Its healthy olive tan had dirtied and darkened, the breeding ground of liver spots and scabs, and the muscle beneath had grown thin and wiry, such that his flesh hunk slack at his bones.

That he could still feel the sunlight on the husky parchment of his skin at all was a miracle, from both Basth herself, and from the mortuary cult’s timeless efforts.

“Blessed Ptra,” he muttered, for it was a glorious morning. He walked toward a contingent of spearmen, moving with surprising speed for one so old. It was one of four regiments that filled the central plaza of the Temple of Basth, rank upon rank of flashing bronze armour and glinting gold weapons. They were magnificent, he thought with a glimmer of pride that more than matched the dancing sunlight on the men’s armaments. Each warrior was as well versed with their spear as he was with his rituals, and they were just as deadly. Not once in the temple’s history had it been breached, not by the orcs that swarmed down from the mountains to the east, nor the desert raiders that charged out of the dunes at first light.

Under the watchful eye of Basth, the temple guard were both fearless and protected. She inspired them, filled their veins with vigour and courage even as her priests invoked her name and uttered the incantations that would bring about Basth’s protection on her servants. A smile split his features and his lips in equal measure. They did not bleed.

Walking closer, ignoring the sand that sunk into his sandals, he scanned the front rank of the first regiment. His rheumy eyes watered under the sheer intensity of the sun but he ignored them; it would not last long. There wasn’t enough water in his desiccated body for any serious tears.

“Priest Nebankh, it is good to see you.” He paused at the mention of his name, searching out the culprit in the row of unfamiliar faces. The soldiers came and went so quickly over the years, it was most difficult to keep track of them all.
His hollow gaze settled on one particular man.

“Greetings to you, Captain. You look well, the goddess Basth must be watching over you.”

“Either that, or the regular meals I’ve finally been getting under my belt!” he said with a chuckle. Nebankh smiled weakly. Who was he to turn aside an invocation of their goddess’ name by one of the temple’s head priests? The man had served here as captain for a number of years now, but despite that, he could not for the life of him remember his name. Not that it mattered, in the grand scale of events. Given a decade or two, and he would be replaced by another just like him, and Nebankh would have another name needlessly occupying space in his head. Perhaps sooner than a decade, going from the tales he had heard of the Abominations’ advances from across the mountains.

Anyway, he thought, his mind returning to the matter at hand, he recognised the man’s face. That was the important thing.

“Indeed, forgive my bluntness but there is much to arrange, and little time.”

“Of course,” said the Captain with a curt nod. Nebankh continued.

“Your forces, they are mobilised?” It was this man’s responsibility for organising the military might of the temple. The priesthood had far more pressing and demanding tasks to attend to, and did not need the distractions of such mundane tasks as rousing and equipping all the guard.

There were far more ancient and terrible beings that needed rousing first.

“All four regiments are arrayed before you, waiting only on High Priestess Istnofret’s command to march.”

“Excellent. She will be most pleased to hear this.” They did not have long to act. The undead legions of Nagash swarmed across the deserts toward Mahrak, unimpeded by sleep or sandstorms, or hunger, save that of their sickening appetite for the flesh of the living. Several smaller armies had reportedly broken off, like malignant cancers, spreading their foul contagion across the lands. Nothing could withstand the tide of living bone as the skeleton armies of the Great Necromancer advanced on the people of Nehekhara, under the leadership of his fell vampire captains, and that cursed bastard Arkhan the Black. The priest clutched at a talisman about his neck, his lips moving in silent prayer. Just thinking the name of that treacherous sorcerer made him feel unclean.

The dead rose in the wake of Nagash’s unholy armies, blasphemous and unnatural incantations bringing movement and pretend vigour to their broken limbs, and his numbers swelled with every victory. Nebankh could not imagine the horror of facing down the hordes of skeletons, revenants, spirits and corpses as they shambled toward him. The thought of it quelled his heart. He hoped that when the time came, he would not fail his goddess.

“I will go now, and relay your readiness to our most revered High Priestess,” said Nebankh, something of an eagerness shining in his otherwise lacklustre eyes. The captain bowed, leaving the priest free to return to the temple, where he knew Istnofret waited. “It shall not be long before we march, and bring an end the blight on our land, in the name of Basth, and all Nehekhara.” A ragged cheer went up from the nearest soldiers, their voices strong and brave, and young, thought Nebankh, his face twisting into a grimace after only a handful of steps. The pressure on his knees was nigh unbearable. He might as well have been carrying an Ushabti on his back, for all the pain he endured without the aid of his staff.

Guilt tickled his atrophied insides, and not for the first time the priest remembered that there were others in a lot more suffering than he. What were aching joints, compared to the loss of one’s family, the ruination of one’s home, or an axe to the skull? He had it easy, this side of the mountains. They all did. Across the eastern deserts, it was a very different story.

The meagre forces thrown against the tide of undead were hastily assembled and ill-prepared, and did little but bolster the Dark Lord’s ranks, their rotting carcases trapped in eternal servitude and forced to march against their once friends and family.

It could not be allowed to continue, and under King Alcadizzar’s leadership, it would not. The greatest army ever assembled was coming to be, regiments from all across the Kingdom of the Great Desert coming together to battle the underlings of the once-Usurper. The Sphinx Legion of Quatar, the Sun Cohort of Prince Imrathepis of Numas, even Khemrian’s charioteers, under the leadership of the legendary Captain Ammon, all and many more besides were united in their desperate cause.

If that despicable priest Nagash and his vile acolytes wanted a war, Alcadizzar would bring him one, and it would be the greatest war the world had ever seen.

The air was filled with the methodical chant of the liche priests, their monotonous tones carrying far into the belly of the temple itself. They spoke in perfect unison, and had been now for nearly ten minutes, concentration etched on each and every one of their drawn faces. They were as dedicated to the Incantation of Awakening as they were ancient, and that was no small feat. A few of their number were old enough to have overseen the construction of the very temple they stood in, centuries ago. The chanting went on, heightening in intensity, in strength, as if the priests were trying to shake the very heavens with their voices.

They would awaken the guardians of the temple, the immortal servants of beautiful Basth herself, and with their aid lay the dead to rest once more.

The cohort of priests stood in a half-moon arrangement, and at their centre, her arms outspread and her eyes closed tight, was Istnofret herself. The High Priestess stood out clearly from the assembly of wrinkled, time-worn faces, for her own was untouched by the long years of their existence. She was over a century old, and yet her bronzed desert skin was as fresh and smooth as it had been when she had first dedicated herself, body and soul, to the graceful cat goddess. It was her blessing, an undisputable sign that Basth watched over her, her keen amber eyes fixed always on her favourite disciple.

Her throat burned from the power of the syllables that leapt, graceful as a cat, from her tongue, but she did not stop. None of them did. Even when they reached the end of the tedious incantation, they began anew, the two chants running seamlessly into each other. They would not stop until their efforts were rewarded, until the towering denizens of the temple of Basth stirred from their sleep of ages.

Time stretched and elongated, losing all definition to the priests. They stood still in concentration, their brows furrowed, as much statues as the monstrous constructs before them, for it had been many years since they last had need to rouse their loyal guardians from their slumber. Despite the priests’ best efforts at maintaining their unblemished glory, dust had settled subtly in their servants’ joints and about their godly faces, proof to all of their prolonged disuse.

That would all change, soon.

Outside, the sun bore mercilessly down, her rays bringing warmth and joy to the assembled soldiers and dispelling the growing darkness in their hearts, but within the depths of the temple complex, they were far from Ptra’s gleaming influence. It was cool, the only source of heat the dripping candles that had been placed, purposefully, one before each priest. The fat melted, dripping like sweat down the candles’ bodies and anchoring them to the floor, as the greasy tears grew solid again at the base.

The candles’ flames danced hauntingly at the whim of some invisible touch. They were far, far from the desert breeze outside.

Istnofret was shouting now, but it was a voice of confidence and determination and righteousness, a sound at odds with her slight figure. She was the High Priestess of Basth, and she was invoking the favour of their most gracious and fickle of goddesses. She would heed her call!

Then they were all shouting, their unified voice echoing about the chamber and bouncing back, two-fold in strength, again, and again, the arcane syllables building in concentration. The depth of their focus was immense. The incantation finished, and began again, with not so much as a pause for breath. The liches were too wrapped up to breathe now. That was a luxury they could indulge in at a later time.

As one, their eyes flashed emerald, innumerable green slits shining like jewels in the shadowy vault.

It had begun.

From out of the gloom the first of the temple’s immortal guards stepped forth. It leapt down from its dais with a crash and onto the sandy ground, to join the priests. Bone clicked and wood moaned as the construct took its first steps in decades, wickedly curved claws leaving fearsome grooves in the sand. It towered over its priestly audience, ten feet tall and built around solid rock, metal and bone.

Emeralds glinted from the recesses of its face as the unliving sentinel regarded the liche priests. Their eyes shone back like tiny mirrors, reflecting the glory of their goddess. Emanating it.

They were awakening. They were awakening!

More of the haughty guardians stepped from their platforms and into the glare of the priests, who were still chanting, their throats cut raw, voices savage. Within minutes, a score of the artificial monsters had assembled. Creaks and clicks peppered the ears of the priesthood as the heads of the constructs swiveled to regard them. Each bore the visage of blessed Basth herself, in her war guise as The Lioness, their cat-like death masks and feline features both beautiful and terrible to behold.

With a deathly sigh, Istnofret fell silent, and in seconds the rest had followed suit. A handful, the oldest, sank to the floor, or else leaned heavily on their gold-headed staffs. The lurid jade died from their eyes, becoming a glimmer, and then but milky white once more. The gods were not their servants, and their blessings did not come easily.

Nebankh had not felt this tired in living memory. It was as if every ounce of his essence had been drawn out, stolen, used to power the godly machinations that stood, subservient, before them. Even Istnofret, their High Priestess and Grand Hierophant, looked gaunt, her usually flawless cheeks wan and drawn. It would not last. The goddess would restore her beauty, she always did, but that did not deduct from the evidence of their excruciating efforts. His lungs might as well have been scorched with lightning, for all the searing grief they gave him.

Seeing Istnofret now, leant against the wall for support, he might as well have walked back into the past. He had only been an acolyte then, but the memory was as clear to him as the sky outside was blue. Her trembling lips, those eyes, full of fear but behind that, a steely determination too. In the first seconds of meeting her, sprawled against the temple wall, her chest heaving with the exertion that only the endless desert can bring, he could not tell whether she wanted to thank him, or rob him.

As her supple body had slipped, prone, to the hot sands, he had found his answer, and so Istnofret had come to reach the sanctity of the Temple of Basth.

The groans of the constructs as they tested their limbs drew his attention back to the matter at hand. Wood creaked. Metal sang. Rock growled.

“The Ushabti are awoken,” he hissed. Let the undead come. Let them face the walking incarnations of Basth herself! Their brittle bones will grind and break beneath the undeniable strength of the Ushabtis’ monstrous khopesh. He cared not for the potency of the Abominations’ revolting magics. They could not raise the dead from dust.
 
RE: The Sands Of Time - Ch. 2

I'm going to have to agree with the above.

If you're taking a vote, I say you post the next installment now. :)
 
RE: The Sands Of Time - Ch. 2

Chapter 8: The Eyes of a Crocodile
IC -1163


Sand, like rocky grain beneath his feet. Pressed into his cheeks, his arms, hard against his flesh. White stars, flickering torch lights in the oily blackness of his sight.
An explosion of pain.

Voices this time. The tongue of the desert. Heavy with accent and…sensuality, intoxicating, even in their ambiguity. They slid into his ears, a background murmur…sleep.

The empty blackness of his vision slowly cleared, a dull greyness seeping from the corners of his eyes and banishing the black. It was like peering through a dense mist, as cloying and impenetrable as smoke. He struggled to make sense of the shapes that emerged from the grim veil.

Spears of pain lanced into his head, stabbing at his consciousness and threatening to kill it to the world. Stab. Stab. Stab. He’d never felt a headache like it. Fighting back against the agony, he concentrated on his surroundings. It was all he had. All he could remember. His surroundings were his anchor to reality.

There was greyness. A lifeless colour, interrupted with smudges of movement, black and white. Figures…people? Two of them. He tried to move, to sit up, but his limbs were leaden. The ghost world shifted around him, a sea of shadows and mist.

His heart began to race. He felt like a new-born, helpless and vulnerable. Weapon-less.

He was naked without his spear.

Smoke crept into his nose, an unmistakable smell if ever there was one. Someone was burning something, nearby. He clung to the hot, tangy stench, used it as leverage to secure himself from the abyss of unconsciousness. He would not slip away, not again. Why was there smoke? Was he back in Mahrak?

Realisation hit him like a sandstorm in the face and he groaned, the sound loud and dull in his own ears. The battle. The Dead. Their grinning skulls, always grinning, and then the nightmares…

He shuddered bodily, his arms and legs trembling, and scrunched his eyes tight in the hollows of his face. Husn had taken a blade to the chest, one of the abomination’s rusted swords slipping behind his battered breastplate and burying itself into his heart. He could still see the blood, could see it erupting in a stomach-churning spray of salty redness. Sekhet took an axe to the face, the ancient weapon splitting his features as easily as if he were a piece of chopping wood. His expression crumpled under the brutal wound. He was dead before he hit the sand.

Even Morak, brave, strong Morak, he who could wrestle, bare-handed, with the lions of the southern plains, had not survived. He had clawed out his own eyes, screaming terrible things about the voracious tomb scarabs that hunted in the depths of the city’s necropolises. He had watched helpless as his friend’s fingers plunged into his own eye sockets and scooped out the gelatinous contents, crushing them beyond all recognition in his steely fists even as the twin holes of his face poured blood.

The stench was nauseating, of rotten flesh and fresh, rich blood, the kind of smell that invades your nose and sticks on your tongue, so that every second the taste of death grows thicker, more putrid in your mouth.

He balked at the memory of the smell. He could still taste it, behind his lips, smeared across his gums. The sickly-sweet flavour of death.

Muscles clenched tight and sick raced suddenly through his throat. He rolled, his body convulsing, and splattered the sand with red-green bile. He relished the bitter acidity of his own stomach as it filled his mouth. It was a thousand times better than the previous taste.

The physical trauma was sobering. Flecks of colour flourished into existence, and the ghosts began to solidify. The edges of their figures grew more distinct, more real before his eyes.

“Help…me,” he croaked. At the sound of his voice, the ghost-men froze, becoming as grey statues. He could make out armour now, monochrome breastplates and silver greaves. He concentrated, ignoring the thumping inside of his head, and squinted hard. The pieces of armour shone bronze and golden, the greyness fading like shadows before the rising sun. His breathing was hollow, husky.

“I said…help me…”

The voice that replied penetrated through skin, muscle and bone, resounding in his very soul. It screamed to be obeyed, respected, feared.

“Silence.”

The vehemence of the word was shocking. He twitched under the aural assault, writhing into the sand and sending a spray of it into the air. All around him the tent fluttered, a plaything of the wind, and the enthralling voice spoke again.

“Your affinity with the mind is as potent as Lady Neferata’s is for the senses. Where she creates lust, you create nightmares. Where she shows hot-blooded men exactly what they want to see, the burning desires of their loins, you reveal unto cowards the darkest, most intimate and shocking of terrors.” The statue moved suddenly, a blur before his eyes. The bronze-black figure darted behind him, the smell of decay wafting in its wake. It had moved so fast…

An ice cold finger ran across his head, slowly and purposefully. Then a second, and a third. Every second of contact reviled him. He wanted to scream out, to shout and cry in loathing. Something small and hard - a ring - snagged his flesh, drawing a single drop of blood, but all he could do was shiver under that chilling touch.

He knew now what it was that hovered over him like some gluttonous carrion bird. He could sense it in his soul as much as he could smell its rot on the air, and feel the stoniness of its dead fingers. It was the Enemy. It was the Enemy and it had him.

It had him.

After a moment’s pause the unnatural monster’s voice resumed, unperturbed by the lack of any reply. It had not expected one.

“The mind is a thing of beauty, so perfect in its intricacies, and so integral to a person’s existence, yet infinitely delicate at the same time. To touch it, even slightly, is to risk undoing it, and it is so very precious.” The harrowing touch of his captor did not break, as though he were an expert physician, carefully examining the skull of his patient for signs of damage. His voice, dark but sweet as honey, continued.

“Within its twisting pathways, there lies one’s dreams and desires, their loves and hates, their plots and their schemes. Every little parchment of knowledge they have ever read, and every skill learned, is housed there, protected and hidden. It has the capacity for hope, and courage, fear and despair.” He ran his fingers over the mortal’s skull one last time, as though savouring the touch of the man at his mercy, and then turned to fix his gaze on the second figure.

“Tear it all apart.”

A strangled gasp rose up from beneath him.

“Scour the crimson depths of his head for the knowledge I seek; knowledge of the Priest King Alcadizzar and his attempts to resist us. I would learn all there is to know, so the Great Necromancer, in his infinite wisdom, can better guide us against the armies of the desert people.”

The figures shifted again, his captors changing places. The monstrosity at his back strode confidently from the tent, disappearing into the shadows outside as silently as a desert rat. He had but a moment to himself before the second figure was upon him. Its grave-breath filled the air, and the hairs on the back of his neck stood tall. His teeth chattered, reminding him all too suddenly of the skeletons that marched under the veiled sun outside.

The atrocity stared down, eyes filled with hatred, pain, and an omniscience that he found deeply unsettling.

Then all he knew was darkness.

He was stood in a room. Huge stone pillars surrounded him on all sides, massive supports that were engraved with hieroglyphics. They depicted ancient battles, and ritual ceremony, and one glyph in particular was repeated over and over along the winding scripture: that of the great god Sobki. It was a simple emblem; a seated man with the head of a crocodile, and yet its recurrence was enough to inspire a sickening anxiety in him. The hieroglyphs seemed alive, and ancient, lit by the erratic torchlight that burned in a dozen braziers about the chamber.

No, not just a chamber, he realised. A sanctum. The heart of a temple, dedicated to the fierce crocodile god and all his worldly servants. His repeated emblem proved as much. A cold sweat settled over him.

He turned, and found himself waist deep in water. He could not remember stepping into the pool that sat, still and clear, at the centre of the inner sanctum, but somehow he was there. The water was cool, and refreshing. He scooped a handful of the crystalline liquid and splashed it to his face, to cleanse it of the sweat.

Lilies floated decoratively atop the still water, their green leaves enhanced by the enchanting blue flowers that rested on them. They drifted randomly on the calm surface of the pool, some clumping together at the corners, while others floated alone nearer the middle. He could not deny their appeal. They were beautiful, especially lit by the subtle orange of the torchlight.

His gaze rose from the surface of the water to the far side of the pool, and a figure met his gaze. It was a woman. She was seated serenely atop a throne, between two of the massive pillars, and her eyes were closed. He took a step nearer, careful not to disturb her.

Her skin was pale for a Nehekharan, yet she was without doubt a woman of the desert kingdoms. It was evident from the shape of her eyes, and her high cheekbones. She looked almost regal, he thought with a glimmer of awe. White robes of office hung from her shoulders and about her waist, and he recognised instantly that here was an official. The more he studied her, the more apparent it became. She held her head high, and proud, and her shoulders were squared. She clutched the arms of the golden throne, as though about to rise, but instead remained seated, unmoving.

What was he doing here, and how had he come to be here? He couldn’t remember, his memory a hazy wash of names and places. Who was he? He took a step back, uncertain of his surroundings. Anxious.

“You are The Survivor,” said the woman on the throne, as though to answer his doubts. Her eyelids shot open, revealing eyes that looked as ancient as the very temple he stood in. They did not so much pierce him as strike him round the face.

“Why am I here-”

“You will not talk out of turn.” The tone of her voice was unforgiving, and his words died on his tongue. “You are here to answer for crimes against Lahmia.” Her eyes held him rooted to the spot, locked in the pool as though it were packed full with sand, and not water. Crimes against Lahmia? Confusion clouded his thoughts while he waited, helpless, for his sentence.

“You fought under the priest king of Mahrak, and with his guard bloodied the streets of Lahmia. You despoiled our Fountain of Basth, that which is sacred to the noble cat-goddess. You torched the offices of law here.” Something in her eyes flashed, fiery and condemning. She bore no scrolls, the charges coming straight from her lips, drawn from the air, and yet he could not deny that he had been there, barely a man, and had fought against the traitorous, blasphemous monsters that called that cursed city home.

“Punishment for these grievous charges is the death penalty. Death by Sobki. That is my decree. What do you have to say for yourself?” His stomach knotted, and he fought the urge to gag. The feeling was strangely familiar, but he could not think why. He stumbled over his words in his desperation to spit them out.

“Lahmia was cursed! It was the lair of godless beasts, taken to worshipping The Usurper, that foul, monstrous being! The secret shame of Khemri… We fought for the good of the Great Kingdom, we fought to remove the taint-”

“That is no defence. No excuse.”

“This is not fair!”

“DO NOT TALK TO ME OF FAIR.”

A pair of golden scales was suddenly beside the judge, two shining bronze discs held aloft on a thin rod by delicate-looking chains of gold. One the left side, there was a fresh heart. It beat slowly, a trickle of blood spluttering from the fatty, purple canals that emerged from it.

It was balanced on the other side by a pendant. The small, sun-gold artefact glowed under the flickering torchlight, and was outweighed by the throbbing heart, the offending organ sinking slowly but inexorably down so that it almost touched the table. His breath caught in his throat. He understood the severity of what he saw.

“You had no right to undertake the illegality of that which you are accused. There is no justification! I find you guilty of murder; murder of my people, of my home, of my life’s work and of my city. You are guilty. Guilty.” Her lips parted, as though struggling to contain the exultation that flushed her veins. “Guilty!”

“You are obsessed!” he shrieked. She ignored his pitiful cries, repeating the word over and over, till it burned into is brain and was all he could think of.

“Guilty! Guilty! Guilty!”

“No! No, please, I am not guilty. Please, not Sobki. Not Sobki…”

“How dare you utter such blatant lies, when it is your own corrupt heart that has revealed these damning truths to me?” Realisation struck him like a thunderbolt and he looked from the tilting scales to himself. His eyes travelled down from his collar bone, to his bare chest, to the gaping hole in his flesh where his heart should have been. His jaw went slack and he brought his hand around to tentatively touch the hollow chasm in his torso. It was soft, tender, a jolt of pain jumping through his chest.

She had his heart. She had his heart. A moan escaped his throat, deep and forlorn.

“Justice will be done,” she snapped, and for a second her head was that of a monstrous crocodile. Thick, gnarly scales coated her snout, and her leathery throat bulged as the monster gnashed her jaws. Yellow, speckled eyes fixed onto his own, accusing, vengeful, hungry, and ropes of saliva slipped from between her teeth.

Then he blinked, and as quickly as the face appeared, it was gone again.

“You belong to Sobki now, and to me, Survivor.” Reaching over with her right hand, she removed his rapidly-cooling heart from the scales. They did not tip. She lifted it to her bronzed lips and, with the nonchalance of eating an apple, took a great bite out of it.

He balked. He couldn’t move, couldn’t flee, was forced to watch with wide eyes as her needle-fangs sank into his soft heart, forced to watch as his blood ran like juice from the corpulent fruit that was his heart. She shuddered as she tore into the organ, satisfaction rippling through her undead body.

Then she was gone.

He sobbed, his chest heaving as if he had been running through the desert, and fell suddenly backwards. Whatever constraints held him still had vanished, and he overbalanced, falling with a splash into the lily-pond. Water crashed over him, submerging him in its coolness. He rose choking.

He had to get out. He had to flee this place, before the judge returned with her punishment. He had been deemed the property of Sobki. He belonged to the god now. He knew what punishment that entailed, it was one of the more infamous means of reprimanding the thieves and murderers of the desert kingdoms.

Even as he thought it, a ripple pierced the still surface of the pool. The small break swept closer, growing as it did so into a seam a metre long, then two. He took a slow step back, afraid of attracting its attention, but knowing already that it was too late.

An eerie silence filled the inner sanctum. Even the braziers, that had previously crackled and spat their burning contents onto the temple floor, fell quiet, waiting, knowing what was about to occur.

A lily lifted and upturned, the fuchsia flower vanishing beneath the surface in the wake of the advancing ripple. It was barely four metres away now, and a row of stubby scales broke the waterline, green and grim. In seconds it would have him.

He flailed in the water, tried to turn, to outrun the purposeful wake, but his legs felt leaden, impeded by the water. A whimper burst from his mouth, echoing in the confines of the temple of Sobki.

He was a dead man, and he knew it.

A surge of water washed over him, The Survivor, and he had time for one more step through the pool before a gigantic pair of scaly jaws burst from the water and clamped shut around him. Knife-long teeth sliced into his skin and, driven by the iron muscles of the crocodile’s jaws, tore his body apart in an explosion of ruby droplets.

“Vengeance is mine,” whispered the crocodile, as it ravaged what little was left of the man, reducing him to ruined strips of tattered flesh.


Maatmeses stepped back from the stiff corpse of the man in the sand, and headed toward the tent flaps. His knowledge was hers now, devoured in every sense of the word. She would return to Vashanesh and pass on that which she had learned.

With an awkward grace she stalked from the tent and into the cold, starless night outside. A storm was coming. A storm to rival all storms, so fierce that the Great Desert itself would melt away before its tenacity, its almighty wrath.

And she would lead it.
 
RE: The Sands Of Time - Ch. 2

Again, very nicely done. Parts of that were creepy or horrifying, but all of it well written. Very vivid imagery.

Good job!
 

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