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RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Hahaha I would prefer to join in the future, when the story here has...developed more. I would never use Maatmeses in it, she would be far too old and powerful to be properly playable by then, but perhaps one of the younger, future Maatmesin might make an appearance...

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The High Priestess of Basth toyed with her gauntlets. A nervous anticipation teased her features, evident only from the slightest crease in her brow. Arrayed before them, a numberless tide of the living dead spilled forth, shambling awkwardly across the uneven sands in a macabre tide of bone and rot.

Istnofret watched the hordes spill closer. She had not been taken aback by their numbers; their armies had staggered the length of Nehekhara, and every victory bolstered their own ranks. It had come as no surprise to her that they were as numerous as the very sands themselves.

What they had in quantity, they lacked in quality. Even as she watched, the graceless corpses tripped and shuffled closer, in retaliation to the Sun Cohort’s sudden appearance. Their limbs shot out before them, legs and arms tugged in a vile parody of the movements of the living. The skeletons were not much better, she noticed, her emerald eyes flashing in the gloom. There was more of a formation to their regiments, more order, but they were thin and brittle. Just bone.

They were less than men in every respect.

By contrast, her own forces were disciplined, strong, skilled, and filled with a passion that the risen dead could never imitate. These men, the Sun Cohort of Prince Imrathepis, were the pride of Numas. They would fight to defend their city, their home, with their very last breath. The dead would crumble before their fearless might, and the brutal strength of their spears and khopesh.

The priestess tugged gently at the gauntlets that clung to her fists, her delicate fingers sliding the length of the talons that emerged, claw-like, from their end. They would tear the soft, spoiled flesh of the enemy, and return them to the sands from whence they came. It was where they belonged. They had no right to walk the deserts, trapped by the dark magics that animated them.

The guardians of Numas advanced, and Istnofret’s priests with them, marching under the clouded skies toward the hordes of dead. The plan had begun. Their fates rested in the hands of the gods now. She took another deep breath, calm and in control. May Basth watch over all of them.

The enemy were repulsive. She could see them in the distance, her keen sight picking out individual monsters as they stumbled closer. Some were the recently deceased, their bodies corrupted by potent magics, their eyes lit like eerie braziers. Others were little more than skin and bone, dry and papery, having long dwelt under the hot, waterless sands of the deserts.

Their awakening was blasphemy! The dead were sacred! She would see to it that they were banished, laid to rest once more, and Numas saved. It was the least she owed the desert kingdoms, for the involvement that she felt. She was born in Lahmia, and the fell captains of their enemy were once her rulers, her priests, her nobles, all those decades ago.

More horns sounded aloud, ringing stark and true under the overcast skies. The noises echoed the honour and bravery that filled each of the men’s hearts. She could feel it in the air, in the grim grit of their teeth, the steely glares of their eyes. These men would fight for Nehekhara, and she with them.

It was her duty to see the once noble Lahmians slain, and the evil that they stood for destroyed forever. She owed it to Basth, to her priests and to the men and women of Numas, but she owed it to her memory of Lahmia, too. It had not always been a city of monsters. There had been love there, her love, and family. Her mother and father, who had died when she was little more than a child, and her sister, who through her irrepressible love she had hurt so much. They were all long dead, but their memories lived on, and she would honour them.

Basth would honour them!

“Forward!” cried a voice up ahead, that she recognised as belonging to Imrathepis. It was strong. True. A voice worthy of a prince. All around her, his legion picked up their pace, a constant march across the unusually grey sands toward their vile foe. She and her own priests kept pace, marching at the centre of the formation, protected on all sides from the depredations of the undead. Their golden staffs shone dully in the lightless skies. Without the sun, they were robbed of their gleaming magnificence.

That would all change, soon.

To her right, trusted Nebankh clutched a talisman and muttered under his breath. She recognised the blessings of Basth when she heard them; they were as much a part of her as her hair, her eyes, or her soul. All around her, the other priests were invoking similar rites, their mumbled blessings and swift incantations summoning the attentions of the beautiful cat goddess and requesting her aid.

They had nothing to worry about. She could feel the blessing of Basth coursing through her body, filling her limbs with an ancient vigour that belied mortal comprehension. Their goddess was with them, and would watch over her most favoured disciples with a keen interest. Of this, Istnofret was sure.

The dead were almost upon them now. She could hear the groans that burst from their broken throats, the grunts and sighs that slipped into the air in a terrifying chorus of deathly noise. The skeletons marched silently, staring through their eyeless sockets and grinning mockingly, that irreversible smile etched on their taunting skulls. They were a morbid reminder of the fate that awaited the men of Numas, should they fall in battle.

They would make sure they did not.

With the unnatural sounds came an even worse smell, of pus, and grime, and the dust of the necropolises. Istnofret recognised the stench of rotten fish, for she had smelled it before, when scraps were carried into her temple by blessed Basth’s cats. Their enemies’ eyes were creamy white, like spoiled milk, and shone with a sick light that mirrored the glare of the dark moon of Neru.

Everything about them was repulsive.

They were metres away now. In a minute, the Sun Cohort would reach them, with their sharp spears and deadly aim. Now was the time to act. Slowing to a standstill, Istnofret turned to her contingent of priests. They looked at her through aged eyes, rheumy with wisdom and understanding.

“Devoted of blessed Basth, begin the Incantation of Jaded Healing! For the graceful goddess Basth, and for Numas!” Her words slipped strong and husky from between her lips, a voice of defiance, and beauty. Her priests recognised the voice of Basth when they heard it, and as one they began to chant. They spoke in unison, their arms upraised, staffs held high, and slowly, with a confidence amassed from decades of practice, their incantation took form.

Even as she chanted Istnofret looked up, and saw the clouds beginning to move. They barely inched across the skies, great black thunderclouds, swollen and thick in the air, but they moved nevertheless, and she knew that back at Numas, safely behind the city walls, the priests of Phakth had begun their own incantations. That left only High Priest Harkhef and the acolytes of the Sun God.

As though on command, a searing flash of light tore into existence, flashing behind her like breaking dawn, and she knew without turning that the Incantation of Searing Brilliance had taken hold. The walls would be safe from the fell attentions of the undead, while Ptra’s priests chanted.

Then all thought was lost to her mind, for with a gut-wrenching clash the forces of Imrathepis collided with the despondent dead, and reason lost all meaning to the screams and butchery of battle.
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Awesome story yet again!

Hahaha I would prefer to join in the future, when the story here has...developed more. I would never use Maatmeses in it, she would be far too old and powerful to be properly playable by then, but perhaps one of the younger, future Maatmesin might make an appearance...

Well thats true :P I have to down play V'azrin and hes only second Gen
Imagine Maatmeses hehe thats scary! ((yet fun :P)) :D
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Oooh very exciting start to the battle, looking forward to see what carnage the priestess causes with the blessing of Basth.

and in case you was interested here is a chapter of the TVC that has just started, if features Arkhan if you want to compare him to yours:

https://www.vampirecounts.net/showthread.php?tid=2712&pid=38945#pid38945
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

I like how our Arkhans seem so similar to me, despite the fact we have obviously written them based on our own interpretations of him.

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Maatmeses stormed out of her tent, Melkhior and V’azrin seconds behind her. Outrage marred the woman’s features. The sheer audacity of the treacherous mortals, that they should dare to make a stand against her forces! Did they not owe her enough already!

Even as she watched, the dead of Nehekhara clashed against the living, bloodied corpses fumbling blindly for the necks and pulses of the soldiers. The men fought back, their shining blades cleaving through rotten flesh and bone with equal ease. The dead were no match for the Sun Cohort, she could see that much. Barely a handful of the hated mortals had fallen in the initial clash, compared to the droves of revenant dead. They were reaping her forces like a scythe through crop.

“What are they doing?” spat V’azrin, watching as the Sun Cohort battled nearer. “They are more stupid than I thought!” Melkhior snickered dustily, and his companion continued. “Let them slay the corpses; we shall raise them back again, and more still, until they drown in a sea of undeath!”

Maatmeses’ eyes flashed like glittering topaz; the foolish men had made her own task a hundred times easier. Without the protection of their tall walls, the mortals had as good as condemned themselves to Usirian’s shadowy Underworld. Her jaw slipped open, as though to savour the taste of death that had filled the air. Blood splashed abound, dripping from the wounded soldiers, and leaking from the broken bodies of her own corpses.

Her hands clenched tight, as, inspired by the rank taste of hot, fresh blood, images flickered through her mind. They vanished the instant they appeared, too quickly for her to decipher, but fuel for the vengeful furnace that smouldered always in her subconscious.

In moments, it had become a raging inferno.

Her face assumed a daemonic visage. She looked as much a woman as a monstrous crocodile, her eyes slits, her nose short, her cheeks askew. The disciples of W’soran took an uncertain step back.

“They set alight to the Temple of Blood,” whispered Maatmeses. “They tore down our statues, they burned my edicts.”

“What are you talking about?” ventured V’azrin, something of disgust registering on his similarly unwholesome features. “None but the oldest amongst them would have been alive when Lahmia burned.” She continued heedless, unhearing.

“They murdered my children, those noble men and women who guarded our city and eased it safely through the decades. They put them down, like animals. Beasts.”

“What-”

“I will have vengeance. I will have vengeance. I will have vengeance!”

There was a subtle change in the air; barely perceptibly, but to the practised senses of the sons of W’soran, it was like watching the few grains of slipping sand that preceded the collapse of a sand dune. Their bottomless gazes shot upwards, in time to see the clouds shift. A hiss of trepidation escaped V‘azrin. Below, the battle waged nearer.

“They are invoking their gods,” said Melkhior, with more than a hint of curiosity. There was no fear in his voice, despite the gravity of which he spoke. “The clouds are shifting, they mutter the incantations of the great god Phakth, he who sees all, and implore to him to clear the skies.”

“Stop them,” said Maatmeses.

“I cannot simply-”

She turned for a moment, locking gazes with both the dark acolytes, and such was the stony coldness of her ancient gaze that their words died on their thin, dry lips.

“Kill them, corrupt their flesh, inflict a thousand tortures upon them. I don’t care, just stop their incantations. They must pay. They must pay!” The vampires bowed and slipped back into her tent, to retrieve the tools of their trade.

They were already forgotten to the ancient woman. She stared down at the battle unfolding before her through vindictive eyes. Blood and screams filled her head, both past and present, and it was only when a sudden flash of light illuminated the distant wall of Numas that she broke from her reverie. She looked down in time to see a wave of chariots, Khemrian in their insignia, crash into the flank of her undead horde. The shambling dead were no match for their speed, and the sudden smash of their impact. Rank after rank fell beneath their rolling wheels, and the hooves of their desert steeds.

She unsheathed the two khopesh that hung from her waist. It was time. Time for vengeance. Time for death. Time for the men of Numas to feel the weight of their crimes. She would punish them for their indiscretions, and the indiscretions of their forefathers. Her children fought down there, the last of the Maatmesin, and she would join them in their vengeance. In their slaughter. She would have retribution!

With a deep growl, that could have come from the scaly throat of a crocodile itself, Maatmeses raced down the dune and into the fray.
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

The build up to this combat is excellent, I really like this installment =]

I especially like how Maatmeses has become quite obsessed with vengenance and won't except the excuses of either V'azrin or Melkhior =]

Very excited about this and can't wait for the next part!


Aka-Moar Plz!!11!!1 :P
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

The crunch of snapping bones as they ground beneath the swirling wheels of his chariot was as endless as the Great Desert itself. Captain Ammon of the Chariot Cohort of Khemri rode thick and fast into the fray, his golden weapon biting deep into the necks of the shambling dead. They were as numerous as the waves of the Bitter Sea itself, but he and his chariots were as the great warships of Zandri, streaming through the water’s surface with unstoppable power and grace.

Screams filled his ears, bestial sounds that shook him to his core; the horses whinnied and whickered as they trampled the Abominations beneath their hard hooves. Moans of despair and anguish rose up from the horde, mingled with grunts and cries unnatural hunger. They were almost indistinguishable in their sounds, something that grated on Ammon’s resolve. Were the corpses conscious? Did they know themselves, their former lives? Or were they mindless animations, that knew nothing but a fierce hunger for his flesh?

Chariots streamed forward to his left and right, his closest comrades and most capable of soldiers. To his left, Talamanke struck out with his mighty axe, the weapon cleaving through the stick-thin necks of their enemies. He jeered as he hewed their heads from their shoulders, the morbid chore tickling his grim sense of humour. A madness glinted in his eyes as he hacked and slashed with his giant weapon, something Ammon had seen many times in the heat of battle. It took a hold of you, spurred you on, held you in its bloody confines so that all you knew was death and pain and sweat.

He brought his own gleaming weapon arcing round, burying it in the spine of a former Nehekharan, and barely dragging it free in time before his chariot carried him away. Pride, and a sick satisfaction at the corpses second death, warmed his heart, and Ammon realised with more than an ounce of certainty that his own eyes were probably just as manic.

Overhead, the grey clouds remained, although he noticed small chinks of light pierced its cover. They were had to discern against the glorious light of Ptra, which shone from the eastern wall, but they were definitely there. Phakth, the hawk-headed sky god, was being invoked. If his efforts, and those of his priests, continued, the sky would soon be cleared, and once more the magnificent Nehekharan sun would bathe the deserts in golden light.

Grunting, he tore into the body of another man, whose eyes were empty sockets. Its flesh was soft, and more like wet papyrus than skin. His blade made short work of the unnatural creature.

Their momentum had carried them thick into the fray. The blood-drinker’s hordes were many, and if they did not meet up with Prince Imrathepis and the Sun Cohort soon, he and his chariots would be stranded, islands amid a sea of living dead. It was not a prospect he appreciated.

Two more of the shambling monsters bounced off the chassis of his chariot. The first vanished beneath the wheels of his mount, but the second grabbed on at the last minute. Groans escaped its ruined mouth, and the terrible creature crawled bodily over the side of the chariot, even as its legs and pelvis were ripped out from under it.

This close, the stench was intolerable. Ammon fought the urge to gag, instead stamping down on the head of the thing. It cracked like an egg under his sandaled foot, its grasping arms falling limp. He kicked it away.

Up ahead, the Sun Cohort carved a bloody swathe through the undead ranks. He watched their impressive blades rise and fall, swatting the corpses and skeletons aside and deflecting their feeble blows, returning with fatal strikes of their own. Heads rolled. Bones shattered. Pus-filled flesh was stripped from muscle. Truly, he noted with mounting respect, the Sun Cohort were a force to be reckoned with. He could see now why they were so fabled, and why they above all of Numas’ other forces were assigned to protect its four main gates.

For a terrible second, he pondered the fates of the other three gates, those to the north, west and south of the city, while their legendary guardians fought here. Quickly he dismissed the thought from his mind, and focussed on the task at hand.

His muscles burned from hefting his weapon back and forth into the ranks of the enemy. They had not been fighting long, but he had been unable to sleep many nights, and was feeling the dull creep of fatigue as it threatened to petrify his heavy limbs.

He couldn’t give in. His life depended on it. His afterlife depended on it, judging by the vast number of freshly raised faces that he lay to rest. Many were barely recognisable as being dead, save the bloodied wounds that covered their bodies, and the pulsing witch-light in their eyes.

It was not a fate he fancied for himself.

“Talamanke!” he shouted, over the chorus of deathly despair. His oldest friend decapitated a revenant corpse with a single strike, and turned to face Ammon. Veins stood out thick on his arms, and in his neck.

“Ride left! We will cut in now, before our impetus is lost!” A single nod sufficed as response, and leading the rest of their regiment, the two veered slowly to the left. The cracks of their drivers’ whips added to the hellish cacophony of sound that assaulted Ammon’s senses.

Gradually, the chariots curved round, their destination the flashing blades and chanting priests of Imrathepis’ Sun Cohort, and the disciples of Basth respectively. Once there, the combined forces of all three would prove a hammer against which the abominations could not hope to compete. The dark shroud that bathed the deserts was slowly dissipating. The lights of Ptra shone ever constant in the background, atop the eastern wall, a beacon of radiant hope for him and his men as much as it was a source of despair for their enemies.

The Abominations would be destroyed, forced back, and the eastern gate completely cleared, until more of the undead shuffled around from the other gates at least.

But a victory was a victory, and it was within their grasp. The captain allowed himself a brief smile, grim but proud. They were so close, and then he could return to his quarters, and rest his aching body. With the legion of Nagash banished, he was sure his nightmares would vanish, and he could finally get some peace.

There was a thud as his chariot’s left wheel mounted an especially burly corpse. It crunched beneath him. More screams, this time to his right, as a wayward spear had taken one of his soldiers in the chest. He could see where it had slipped passed the breastplate, even as the unfortunate soul toppled from the back of his chariot. Ammon turned away. He would not watch the resulting orgy of feasting.

He could hear the shouts and cries of the Sun Cohort now, distant but audible over the groans of the corpses that staggered awkwardly toward him, then passed. They could not compete with his chariots speed. Their leathery fingers raked its chassis.

Yet more slipped and broke beneath his war chariot. Before him a ray of light shone weakly through the cloud cover. His driver’s whip cracked again. Shouts from behind him. The crunch of broken bones.

Then he was spinning, the terrified screams of his chariot’s horses tearing into his gut, and the breeze buffeted his face.

There was a weightlessness. He was flying. Blood ran into his eyes.

With a thud he hit the sand.
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Another awesome story =]

I have to be honest TPL I am currently reading "Nagash the Sorcerer" and am enjoying your little story more than that book :P

anywhos Gief more story!
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Get_of_W'soran said:
Another awesome story =]

I have to be honest TPL I am currently reading "Nagash the Sorcerer" and am enjoying your little story more than that book :P

anywhos Gief more story!

Hahaha I doubt that, but cheers all the same. Next part is here! If people are having difficulty keeping up, let me know, and I will slow down my rate of posting lol...

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The floored horses flailed and screamed, their eyes white, mouths frothing. Maatmeses knew terror when she saw it. Nightmarish visions exuded from her mind, seeping into the heads of any men that strayed too close, and polluting their thoughts. They felt her pain. Her anguish. The agony that wracked her undead frame.

With a cold fury, Maatmeses stepped around from the path of the wrecked chariot, and towards its rider. The risen dead parted before her like slaves before a priest king, her iron will casting them back. This was between her and the mortal. Those corpses that did reach out, fumbling eagerly for her enemy’s throat and blood, she dismissed instantly, their husks falling limp to the sands.

A hoof kicked madly out, striking her abdomen, but Maatmeses did not so much as acknowledge the wayward blow. She had only eyes for the curled figure on the sands. He was the one responsible for Shepsit’s death. She could feel it. Feel him. He had wronged her, and now he would be punished.

More chariots sailed passed her through the thick horde of undead, but none dared too close. Her aura of vengeance was absolute, keeping the mounts of Khemri at bay.

She was metres away now. Her lips parted in silent exultation. Unblinking eyes fixed on her quarry. The criminal. The wrong-doer! He would suffer!

One chariot doubled back, cutting a sharp half-moon through the shambling dead and heading directly for her back. She felt the young, fresh minds approaching, as much as she heard the grind of the chariot itself. Hope and terror engulfed the mortals, soldier and driver, as they neared her, with their large axe, spinning scythes and sharp hooves.

Screams filtered over the din of battle, mingling obscenely with the desperate moans of her dead, and the clash of weapon on weapon as in the distance, man fought skeleton.

She turned then, her eyes ablaze with an icy fury that struck the charging horses dead. Their bestial minds were as two small desert termites against a torrent of boiling water.

The stench of urine washed over her as the dead beasts released their bowels. It was swiftly enveloped by the rotten smell of the dead.

Both riders toppled from the chariot, sacks of muscle and bone, of no more consequence to the vampire. She span on her heel.

“You.” The word was lost in the maelstrom of battle, but it reverberated within the man’s head, chilling him to his very bones. He writhed under her voice, face buried in his arms and sand, legs curled.

“You murdered my daughter.” The words were like hammer-blows, striking his head, knocking him back. With a brutal carelessness she invaded his mind.

“Ammon…Ammon. So that is your name, murderer.”

“I am no murderer!”

The sheer savagery of her response sent him sprawling back again, a dog in the sand, reprimanded by its master’s voice.

“How dare you speak such lies!” He whimpered. “Your deepest, most reviled of secrets are laid bare before me, a testimony of your shameful atrocities, your ill-doings. I see into the inky blackness of your tainted heart, and what I see sickens me!” At this he seemed to gain strength, something of the man’s resolve clawing back.

“I have never done wrong!”

She snarled and a hundred visions swept unfettered through his mind. He saw himself, a small child, stealing coins from a blind man’s street earnings. He saw himself, a few years older, copying answers from his arm onto a sheet of blank papyrus. He saw himself, drunk, kissing Talamanke’s woman, saw himself slipping a pouch of gold from one of the dead into his own satchel. The ravaged memories crawled inside his head like a swarm of tomb scarabs, biting, scratching, gnawing, crawling, and his screams tore his throat raw.

“You must be punished!”

“I have not wronged you!”

“You MUDERED SHEPSIT!” Gone was any of her High Justice’s decorum. Maatmeses spat, her eyes like glowing coals, reaching out toward the foetal man as though to tear him to shreds with her golden khopesh.

“I am High Justice. I am Chief Judge. I condemn the wrong, I punish the criminal, it is my right!”

“Please, have mercy…” She looked disgusted.

“Mercy? I am inconsolable.” He cowered into the sands, as though they might hide him from this avenging monster. Even as he dug, scooping great handfuls of sand aside, he saw himself taking up his blade, staggering forwards, cutting into the two cursed blood-drinkers, and taking the woman’s head. He saw it flop almost casually to the side, heard her screams as though they were here now, screaming, screaming, screaming, never stopping. He backed away, turned, tried to run, found his blade in his hand, stumbling forward to cut at the fell Lahmian’s neck. The head flipped, the screams redoubled, louder, louder, he turned, fled, his weapon found her neck and a third level of screams mounted the first. They shook him to his very core, shredded his soul, chilled his blood. There was no escaping the screaming. No escaping the screaming!

Maatmeses turned from the mewling wreck that rolled, screaming on the floor, its mind a bloodied mess.

“For Shepsit,” she said coldly, her disposition returned. “Justice is done.” With a calm demeanour that defied her behaviour only moments before, she strode back through the ranks of shambling dead toward the hated soldiers of the Sun Cohort.

There were more yet to avenge.

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Her eyes shone like sun-kissed emeralds, glittering with the touch of Basth. The sounds of battle, of death and pain and blood, was barely audible, background noise beneath the constant, monotonous chanting of her priests and she. The incantation was all that mattered. It must be upheld. It must be maintained. The Sun Cohort fought to protect them, and they would return the favour. At the very heart of the Sun Cohort’s regiment, Istnofret invoked loving Basth, and the cat goddess heard her pleas.

Her bronzed lips moved quick and smooth, forming the words that spilled in equal measure from her heart and memory. Her cream robes were unspoiled by battle, her rich skin pristine and her expression flawless. She was every inch the vision of Basth, beautiful, strong, defiant and proud. Her priests took inspiration from her, using her divine appearance as a well of belief, of optimism, of certainty. Basth was watching over them. She would not abandon them to the depredations of the undead.

And Basth was watching over them. Istnofret observed through detached eyes as one warrior took a rusted spear to the neck. It sliced through flesh, leaving a smear of rust and dirt about the wound, but no sooner had the spear-point withdrawn, a miraculous thing happened. The flesh knitted softly back together, joining where moments before it had been viciously undone, and in seconds only a small red patch of tender skin remained of the otherwise mortal wound. She allowed herself a gracious smile. The Incantation of Jaded Healing was a most sacred and potent of rites. None but the favoured of Basth could invoke it. The soldiers of the Sun Cohort were most fortunate for their presence, and to Basth’s generosity. She of all beings knew the capricious nature of the cat goddess.

To her right, one of the Nehekharans stumbled and fell, his head rolling to rest near her feet. Dark, rich blood pooled from the gaping hole in his neck, sticking to the sands in a morbid puddle. A tall skeleton stepped over the fresh corpse, its empty gaze surveying the chanting priests. Something in its bony grin sickened Istnofret. The dead should not walk!

Quickly, another of the Sun Cohort dispatched the monster, its heavy khopesh crashing through the skeleton’s spine, but he in turn took a blade to the stomach. A fresh wave of sweat and decay washed over Istnofret, cloying and rotten.

The wound began to heal, raw flesh stitching itself neatly back together, but another blow slipped through the man’s side, and into his heart. Against such grievous wounds, even Basth could not aid him, and he fell under a third methodical blow. Istnofret took a deep breath, to steady her nerves, as another two skeletons trampled the corpses. She had known this time would come; it was inevitable.

They were breaking through.

With a last, heartfelt prayer to Basth, Istnofret broke from the incantation. For a moment, the rest of the priests’ words slowed, as her departure from their chant increased the pressure on their own ancient bodies, but they did not stop. They would not, until death itself claimed them. They had faith in the goddess.

She blinked, her luminous eyes disappearing for an instant behind long black lashes, but time seemed to drag out into an eternity. Tensing slightly, the High Priestess of Basth raced forward, her long, olive legs slipping slowly from the length of her robes. The dead staggered closer, their steps ungainly, grins unfaltering. With painstaking slowness, she neared them, and they turned to stare at her through the lightless hollows of their eyes. The first raised its weapon, a bronze scimitar.

Then time re-asserted itself. Springing forward, Istnofret ducked and leapt up between the skeletons, twisting in the air as she did so. Her arms flashed out, her body coiled, and with unsurpassed grace she landed on the sands. Behind her, two skulls rolled to the ground, their bony bodies crumbling afterwards.

She felt elated. Heightened. The strength of Basth flowed through her limbs, inspiring her with athletic vigour. Her small chest rose and fell in quick succession, and the many emblems of Basth, the trinkets and hieroglyphs that adorned her, shone with white light.

More undead spilled past the Sun Cohort, their rank bodies and nerveless fingers all around her. They groaned pathetically as they reached for her, desperate to clutch her flesh, to tear it, to rip it and devour it. She had to staunch the wound that had opened up in the Sun Cohort’s ranks. Her priests needed her help with the incantation. It would not hold without her for long.

The first corpse snatched out, its grasp shooting suddenly for her neck. Whatever sick enchantment animated it seemed to grow dark and strong at the promise of blood, but Istnofret was faster still. She stepped nimbly back, her right hand flashing forward even as she did so. The Claws of Basth buried themselves in the bottom of its jaw, sinking deep and smooth into its rotten brain. A confused look glazed its features, and the lights in its eyes died.

Extracting her long talons, she stepped in and past the tumbling corpse, spinning swiftly around it in a single fluid motion that planted her at the heart of the breach.

The undead surrounded her. Their groans mingled with the chanting of her priests. Something yellow and pus-like splattered against her flesh, but she ignored the distraction, instead bringing the butt of her elbow into a corpse’s head. There was a crack and it span away.

Springing back, she crouched and pounced, the motion carrying her into the chest of another of the walking dead. Her feet planted into its sodden flesh and pushed back, sending the abomination sprawling to the ground. A single stamp to its neck ended the thing’s existence.

The remaining three monsters closed in, the desiccated grooves of their leathery flesh and flickering hollows of their eyes all too visible at this distance. Istnofret braced her feet and flicked round in a half-circle, her robes twisting in accompaniment to the graceful movement. The Claws of Basth tore into all three of the cursed ones’ chests, ruining their hearts and dispelling the corruption that gave them life.

The Sun Cohort closed in around the breach, four warriors racing over to intercept any further of the shambling monsters, and Istnofret turned back to her priests. They stared at her reverentially, Nebankh and the others, their faces gaunt, and tired, but nonetheless lit by a sacred understanding of what they had just witnessed.

Basth watched over them. She heard their cries and answered their invocations, and while the Incantation of Jaded Healing continued, wounds would re-knit, and the dead would stay dead.

Istnofret, most beautiful and radiant of the priests of Basth, glanced once more about the immediate battlefield before returning to her incantation. The soldiers of the Sun Cohort fought bravely as ever, and the undead were falling beneath their blades like the corpses that they were. Captain Ammon’s chariots too were making good progress, mowing down the walking dead as they rode back and forth through the decaying ranks.

Up ahead, she could make out Prince Imrathepis himself, recognisable from his rich, commanding tone of voice and glittering armour. His own khopesh, a large, two-handed weapon, shattered bone and flesh indiscriminately, tearing a chunk out of the undead’s forces. Truly, he was a worthy prince.

The monotonous chorus of her priests drew her attention swiftly back to the matter at hand, and Istnofret rejoined her priesthood. Basth would hear her cries, and lay her protection over those who guarded her disciples.
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Yay another part of the story =]
I just love Maatmeses's personality I can totally imagine V'azrin makig fun of her for thinking shes still the Chief judge ((Behind her back ofc ^.^)).

Really can't wait for the next part! *Shivers with excitment*

Hahaha I doubt that, but cheers all the same.
Its twoo XD

and I will slow down my rate of posting lol...
NEVAH!!!! xD
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Trust me, this story is excellent and beats many published novels I have read.

Another great installment, and yes it is good how our Arkhan's are alike. I hope you will keep up with that chapters progress, I would really appreciate your feedback.
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Disciple of Nagash said:
I hope you will keep up with that chapters progress, I would really appreciate your feedback.

I will read through them all again tomorrow and drop you a PM with my feedback :D

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Her khopesh sang a song of death, tearing through breastplates, greaves and helmets as if they were made of wood, and not hardened sheets of metal. Corpses heaped at Maatmeses feet, bloodied and broken, but the ancient woman cared not. Vengeance shone in her eyes. Her tongue spat vindictive words. For over a decade, she had waged war against the people of Nehekhara, marching at the head of Nagash’s legions with her vampire kind, and the years had done nothing to quell her insatiable drive for revenge.

She had been wronged, and for that, there was no excuse. Rather than diminishing, her need for law and justice had soured and turned rotten, corrupting her values slowly but irrevocably. She lashed out, fangs glinting, and dragged her heavy blades in opposite directions. They hooked on a soldier’s stomach and rent him apart in a shower of blood.

Law was certain. Law was definite. Law was right. Drawn to these values, Maatmeses had risen quickly through the ranks, until she had claimed her title as High Justice of all Lahmia. Under her iron rule and irrefutable authority, Lahmia had prospered, and its criminals punished.

Two men raced toward her, their spears clasped tight, aiming for her heart. The points glinted menacingly in the Nehekharan sun. Maatmeses turned her gaze on them and unleashed their darkest fears from the shackles of their mind. The two fell screaming to the sands. Giant scorpions erupted in their mind’s eye, pincers snapping, tails darting forward to poison their thoughts. Maatmeses stepped over their convulsing forms, and deeper into the fray.

Even when ill-fortune beset her, when her husband, that nameless, cursed excuse for a man, abandoned her for her own sister no less, Maatmeses had her law. It was unchanging. Cold. Certain. In her dispensing of the law, she was in complete control, and her work quickly became a necessity. To feel was to hurt, something she would not allow, not after the anguish she had been through. Years of repression lead to a dependency on her work. It gave her life meaning. Drove her to every greater heights of justice. At her pinnacle, Lahmia’s cells had writhed with the bodies of criminals: murderers, thieves, blasphemers and spies, all waiting to be tried, and punished.

Then Neferata, in her vain idiocy, had spoiled everything.

Four more soldiers rushed her, their bravery undone by the terror in their eyes. The first’s head she took clean off, his body falling to twitch in the sands. The second felt the full force of her khopesh through his chest, the weapon forced through, powered by an unholy strength. His ribs snapped and blood drenched her fist.

She dragged the body, still hooked on her vicious weapon, in a wide arc, knocking it into the third soldier and sending them both sprawling to the ground.

The fourth sank its spear deep into her gut.

Something smouldered weakly inside of her, and after a moment she recognised it as pain. Her weapons fell to the sand, and she clasped the spear tight in her hands. Ancient eyes fixed on those of the offending mortal.

“You dare,” she began, taking a step further into the spear, “to defile me…with your treacherous hands?” The man shivered, paralysed by those condemning eyes.

“I will have…my justice!” The spear was almost completely out of her back, and reaching around she plucked the last foot from her body.

In the blink of an eye, she had gutted the man with it, the spear point stabbing out from his open mouth. Those around fell back aghast, horrified by what they saw. No mere woman should be able to do such a thing!

Corrupted by Neferata and her dark, potent elixir, Maatmeses’ role as High Justice became an obsession. It was her sole reason for existing. Lahmia’s upkeep meant everything to her. Everything. Everything.

And the city’s eventual destruction had unchained everything she had sought so hard to keep locked up inside of her.

Maatmeses gasped, her jaw falling slack. Such hatred… A shiver wracked her body, followed quickly by a cracked scream. She stood alone, amid a pile of the freshly dead, but the nearest soldiers shouted and collapsed. Shock registered in their voices as Maatmeses’ anger bore into their brains. She clutched at her head, fingers knotted in her hair.

Her hordes were much diminished. Reduced to a barely a third of their number, the rotting corpses fought on regardless, driven by a cannibalistic hunger for the flesh of the living. Most of her skeletons lay broken and smashed, and without even trying, she could sense the powerful wards that lay over the dead. Protected them. Kept them safe from her magics.

She could not flee, every urge told her to leave this place, to rejoin her kin at the other walls, but she could not. She could not! Magic more ancient and powerful than her own held her fast, obedient, a slave to its will, and she could not break it.

He held her here.

If she was to succeed in her task, she would need to replenish her forces. Briefly, her mind turned to W’soran’s spawn. The two priests stood before her tent, tiny silhouettes in the distance, but she could tell from the swirls of dark energy and the tumultuous skies that they were busy with her prior task. To distract them now would be to relinquish their hold on the bloated black clouds, and this she would not allow. The overcast skies and banished sun were far more potent elements to her cause than a legion of the undead. Fear and despair were ever her allies against the weak hearts of the enemy.

With a sudden jump her head snapped back, and an expression of cunning crept over her face, cold and reptilian. She could muster the dead from their grave-less sleep herself, she did not need the aid of W’soran’s gets for that.

All she had to do was silence those whose stead-fast wards kept her necromancy at bay.
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Penultimate installment for this chapter... Its been a long one! Criticism welcomed, as always.

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Sweat clung to Prince Imrathepis’ forehead. Blood and grime tarnished his once magnificent armour, and several bruises spoiled his rich, dark flesh, festering like corrupt purple fruits. The undead, by comparison, were tireless. They did not sweat, or ache. Even as he watched, one of his men lopped off a creature’s arm, only for it to snatch out with its other, fingers scrabbling desperately for his soft neck, wherein lay his blood, his pulse, his life.

They were every inch the abominations they had come to be named. Blasphemous. Gluttonous. That they should walk was sacrilege alone, sacrilege of the highest kind! The keen edge of his gleaming blade tore into the ribcage of the skeleton. Bare bone cracked, no match for the hefty bite of the khopesh, and the balefires died in its empty eyes. He lashed out with his foot, kicking the crumbling bones aside.

His eyes burning with a mixture of pride and loathing, the prince of Numas stepped forward. His fingers tightened around his massive weapon and with a grunt he brought it arcing around. Sunlight, weak but present, danced off its shining edge as it clove through the abdomen of three of the rotting corpses. They had been Nehekharans, not so long ago. Their flesh still held an olive tint, and their faces stretched with expressions of misery and anguish.

His blade ripped clean into their dead flesh, tearing out their stomachs in a spray of blood.

Not their blood. Not his blood. The blood of his men, that sat, congealing, in their bowels. A commanding shout tumbled from his open mouth.

“Forward!”

All around him, his Sun Cohort, his greatest pride, and that of Numas, fought valiantly, each man more than a match for a dozen of the undead monsters. In their midst, protected from the ravenous, unnatural attentions of their enemies, the priests of Basth chanted aloud, their voices worn, and strained, but relentless and controlled. While they still spoke, he and his men were safe from all but the most grievous and mortal of wounds. His angry bruises were a testament to that; each one marked where the tainted weapons of their enemies had slipped past his guard, and sliced into his flesh.

Basth, in her infinite grace, has spared him the wounds, and reduced them to the mottled purple of his flesh.

A third force raced up ahead, Ammon’s chariots scouring the ranks of their enemy and crushing their bones to dust, even as the Khemrians lashed out with their spears and axes, felling more of the shambling foe.

The only real enemy, he knew, with an anxious glance in their direction, were the blood-drinkers. He could see them even as this distance, a plague on his far left flank. There were only a handful, but their savagery and strength was terrible to behold. Bare fists broke bones. Their sickle-like khopesh cleaved men in two. The wind itself could barely move as fast, or with such purpose, as those unnatural monsters.

Hatred welled up within him like a desert spring. They were single-handedly holding the undead’s right flank intact, and more than a hundred of his loyal men lay broken and ruined at their feet. They were abhorrent, and they must die, soon. If the battle stretched on much longer, who knew how many more of the undead might intervene.

The entire city was surrounded by their sickening contingents.

“Forward! Forward, blessed Sun Cohort!” he screamed, almost choking the repugnant stench that flooded his mouth and nose. Slowly, but with the undeniable strength of the tide itself, his golden host advanced, step by step crushing the undead that opposed them. Skeletons cracked and returned to dust. Revenant corpses fell to pieces beneath the deadly attentions of their blades.

They were as the gods themselves, smiting the blasphemers with an irresistible wrath, divine and mighty.

Movement caught the corners of his eyes. He would have dismissed it; the battlefield was alive with struggling corpses and bitter warriors, but a scream made him turn, just in time to see what looked like a woman grasp one of his men by the neck and toss him bodily into their ranks. He did not rise.

Two more of his men rushed her, their gleaming khopesh dirtied with the black, dead blood of their enemy. She snarled and shouted something inaudible, her hand rising to a pendant round her neck. His soldiers fell limp. Spasms wracked their bodies and piercing screams shot from tortured mouths.

Such harrowing sounds were never meant for a grown man’s lips.

“Blood-drinker!” he shouted out, recognising the woman for what she was. She seemed not to hear him, preoccupied with tearing a gaping hole through his regiment. Another warrior fell at her feet, his neck broken with a single vicious twist of her arm. Imrathepis could not stand it. These men, seasoned veterans and the pride of Numas, were as children before her unholy strength. An unholy strength gained from the feasting on his peoples. His insides clenched tight.

“Monster! Beast of cursed Lahmia!” She froze. All those around her screamed and groaned, as though suddenly beset by invisible enemies. Even as this distance, he could understand something of what they felt, for the air grew suddenly chill, and dark shadows flitted behind his eyes.

Her head shot round to face him, and for the first time he saw her eyes.

Hatred smouldered there. No, not smouldered. Raged. They radiated enmity and fury, and it took all of his resolve not to recoil from that condemning gaze. In his mind’s eye, her head flickered between that of a woman’s, and that of a fierce crocodile’s, its jaws snapping, head shaking with rage.

She walked toward him.

“Today is the day you die, monster, and I shall be the one to do it!” The voice that filled the air sounded much different to the one in his head. It was stronger. Braver. Lacked the fear that clutched suddenly at his heart with its icy fingers. “The clouds part, and Ptra himself shines over us, blessing me with his brilliance, his favour, even as he curses you!”

She was only a few feet away now, and this close, he could see how far she was from the woman he had first presumed. Her eyes were oily pools of shining death. Fangs glinted, exposed behind drawn lips, needle-like and numerous. Even her skin looked hard, and rough, not like that of a mortal’s.

And always, at the back his mind, her head flitting between that of a vengeful crocodile, cunning and ancient and scaly. Then she spoke, and her voice was as stony as her visage:

“I died already, many, many years ago, Nehekharan, but I did not stop existing. I lived on through my work. My city. My fate was tied with that of Lahmia’s.” She paused, watching, staring, seeing more perhaps than he did.

“And now, like Lahmia, I am ruined!” She attacked in a flash, moving with a speed he thought impossible. Her arms flashed out, fingers like claws, seeking his heart, and he barely had time to lift his heavy khopesh before she was upon him. He beat back her ravages with a swipe of the gleaming weapon, but knew he would not last long. Against such a swift opponent, the doubt-handed khopesh was unwieldy. Slow. A hindrance.

She lashed out again, leaping bodily toward him, and his head filled with dark shapes. They swept up into his consciousness, his father, staring down at him, shaking his head, banishing him from Numas. He fought back the despondent moan that lumped in his throat, and suddenly her claws were raking his flesh, and his father was gnashing his teeth, and blood ran like tears from the old king’s eyes.

Imrathepis stumbled and fell to the sands.

“What…what trickery is this…”

“Do not talk to me of trickery, you who are most treacherous,” she spat, and her words might have been venom for the way they infected him. “Your father helped burn my city. My home. Destroyed everything I ever cared for-”

“You, care? You are a beast! Sick, unnatural! You do not know the meaning of the word!”

“LIAR!” she screeched, and she darted toward him. He raised his khopesh, but too late; she grasped the massive weapon, and tossed it aside as though it were matchwood. Her breath washed over his face.

“I cared too much. I cared for my laws. I cared for my city. I cared, and I was wronged! And now, for this injustice, I claim my vengeance!”

In that moment, Imrathepis of Numas knew true terror.

A dull sound, steady and constant, bore into his head, droning on until it was all he could hear. It scoured his mind, abolishing the shadows that festered there, banishing his nightmares and dispersing them like sand on the wind. A weight lifted from his heart, strength filled his limbs, and though he could not make out the sacred words, one in particular was repeated over and over, one that he did recognise:

“Basth! Basth! Basth!”

The blood-drinker seemed to hear it too, for she froze, and her head snapped up again, and then, as though awakening from a dream, she cast herself backwards, rising from above him to stand several feet away. A deep hiss rattled in her throat, and she stared avidly around her into the faces of the soldiers, threatening, daring, promising. It was a look that said:

“I see every one of you, and I know you, and I will come for you,” and they knew that she would.

Something behind Imrathepis caught her attention, and all colour drained of her face. Her expression fell. Eyes shone wide. For a brief, unsettling moment, she looked human again, no doubt the woman she had once been, so many decades ago. Pity stabbed at his heart.

Then the sands themselves exploded at their feet, rising in a storm of grit and rubble that coated their tongues and filled their armour.

When they settled again, she was gone.
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

Chapter 15: A Long Lost Love
IC -1152


Istnofret stared in horror at the spot where, only moments ago, that monster had stood. That monster. That monster of Lahmia. Her hands fell limp by her sides, and the Incantation of Jaded Healing died on her bronzed lips. The priesthood continued, their voices pained, and looks of consternation flew her way, but Istnofret’s mind was numb. The battle faded into insignificance around her, replaced by only one thought. One memory. She knew it had been her.

The chamber was richly furnished. Long, ruddy drapes hung down from the ceiling, separating the room in two, and slow-burning torches were clearly visible, wavering through the translucent cloth like glowing embers. They cast little light about the chamber, just enough to see by, but enough that shadows still thrived in the furthest corners from the torches. The air itself was still, as though daring not to move.

“Don’t leave,” said a tall man, parting the drapes as he stepped through. “Stay with me a while longer.” Rich, red robes hung from his broad shoulders, but he was otherwise undressed. “We have time. Istnofret…”

A woman paused, halfway across the chamber, and turned to him. There was a deep longing in her emerald eyes that her body mirrored, responding to his words as though they caressed her very flesh. Her olive skin prickled sensuously.

“Do not tease me; you know I have to leave, Kheruef. The day is gone,” she said, her eyes sliding briefly to the ceiling, “Ptra flees before the night, and we are out of time once more.”

“When can I see you again?”

“Tomorrow, in the afternoon.” She smiled at some private thought, or perhaps from the desperation that pooled in Kheruef’s eyes. “I will meet you here. Do not miss me too much, in the night…” He walked slowly toward her lithe form, drawn to her like a bee to honey.

“I will always miss you, and always too much. There is nothing in all Lahmia so sweet as your lips…” Upon reaching her, his arms slid round her waist, and she melted under the warmth of his touch. They kissed, and the torches themselves guttered and danced with their passion. They were as an ancient treasure; she the casket, and he the key that unlocks her, and inside was guarded their fiery love, encased in a seal of gold.

The torches swam again, their excited flames leaping higher, and quicker, and Kheruef broke away from her lips. His brow deepened with consternation, although his hands remained at her waist.

“What is it?” she asked.

Voices, distant and echoed, reverberated within the chamber. Her smile died.

“Get out, get out, run!” He spoke quickly, assuredly, the voice of a captain, a warrior. “Go!”

“I will not leave you!” They could hear marching now, the sound of sandals as they scuffed the ground, and the voices returned, louder.

“You must!” His fingers found her face, wiping at the tears that sprang there. “I will find you. I will meet you!”

“Kheruef…”

A terrible bang shook the doors. It filled the room with its resonance. Ominous. Furious. He took her hand and pointed it toward the drapes. They shone a bloody red in the torchlight.

“Go, I know the hidden ways of my own house. The statue of Sobki. Grasp it with all your strength, take the passage that reveals itself.”

“I love you.”

Again, the terrible banging. The heavy doors rattled.

“I love you too, with every part of my soul. I will see you very soon.” They kissed, fierce and hungry, and then she pulled away.

He ran for a chest, to the side of the room, as she vanished behind the evocative drapes. The lid flew open and a spear found his grasp.

She saw the statue instantly. Sobki glared menacingly at her, but she grasped his snout and heaved with all her strength. For a moment, there was nothing, then slowly her weight began to tip it, and from behind her came the sound of grating stone. She turned, seeing as the passage opened up, even as a terrible crash filled the chamber.

The doors had given.

Footsteps pattered across the ground. It sounded to her like a small army. She could hear the leather straps of their armour, see their silhouettes through the drapes.

“Stand down, or feel the bite of my spear!” Terror clutched her heart. Kheruef… Then she was gone. The passage slammed shut behind her, the stone wall crashing down and sealing her off from the chamber and the soldiers.

And her love.

It was dark. Dingy. Hieroglyphs adorned the walls even here, but she did not read them. Could not. Her mind was filled with only one thought, one concern, and all others were meaningless to her. Tears streamed down from the glittering green of her eyes, falling over her pale white robes.

She was alone.


Istnofret stood, overwhelmed by the memory, a splash of white in a warring sea of red and gold. She was as alone now as she was then, all those decades ago. She knew, in her heart, that she always would be.

And the heart never lies.
 
RE: The Heart Never Lies - Ch. 3

A fantastic chapter TPL, this keeps on getting better and better, which I wouldn't have thought possible with how good it started off!

I hope the next chapter is on its way...
 

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