I already replied in the thread Disciple of Nagash created on the UnderEmpire, but I thought that you guys venture here more often, so I might just as well make my reply here as well:
As a minor point of criticism, one thing I missed was page numbering. It's a bit odd that when you mention these in your index, they're nowhere to be seen in the webmagazine itself, making looking up certain articles a bit of a hard thing to do.
Next to that, what is with the adds in the magazine? Are you guys sponsored, or is this some sort of gesture towards other communities that aided with some sort of service? It puzzled me a bit.
Regarding the battle report, I'm on the same line as Count Flapula. No pictures, no diagrams, no nothing make following a turn by turn description of what happened... vague, to use a friendly term for it. When it comes to posting battle reports in the webmagazine, my honest opinion would be to either do it right, or don't do it at all. (Which is meant as a bit of advice from the experience of doing the SBG, not as an attack on Swissdictator and Skittles).
Painting/ converting articles looked quite well. Good step-by-step pictures and easy to read through... Tacticas is something I can't really reply on, as I don't play VC and as such, can't really comment on whether something makes sense or not then.
Finally, is it just me, or do we suddenly have more and more webmagazines trying to catch up on the coolness of SBGs columnist Seer Squeek?... I can assure you that he most certainly has his verdict ready, should he lay his eyes on that bit of the Invocation. :P ;) (j/k)
Hope this helps.
Greetz