Legion of Nagash Background and Fluff for Army Choices

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Disciple of Nagash

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The Body and Spirit of Nagash - Need Fluff
Arkhan the BlackFluff in progress by Aspiring Necromancer
The Nine Dreadlords of Nagash (Arkhan is one of these) - In discussion so leave until last
The Crone in the Black Pyramid - Need Fluff

Zenith Lord - Need Fluff
Disciple of Nagash - Fluff Complete
Revenant - Fluff Complete

Zenith Prince - - Fluff Complete
Nagashi Captain - Need Fluff
Mortuary Priest - - Fluff Complete
Reaper - Fluff Complete


CSkeletons - Need Fluff
Nagashi Infantry (0-1 per captain) - Need Fluff
Zombies / Zombie Launcher - Need Fluff
Cultists - Need Fluff

Special
Black Riders - Need Fluff
Pinnacle Knights - Fluff in progress by Marcus
Pinnacle Guard - Need Fluff
Elite skirmishers - Need Fluff
Wraithwisp - Need Fluff
Bone Thrower - Need Fluff

Rare
Black Shards - Need Fluff
Spectral Cavalry - Need Fluff
Ancient Warrior - Fluff in progress by DoN
 
Ahhh fluff writing, i'm rubish at writing fluff,

Sorry, won't really be able to help that much.

P.s don't forget to write the pages and pages of storys that go at the front of the armybook xD
 
Ok, so do you all want me to assign you a unit / character or something?

@CRD - well we still have the Dreadlords to finish yet! So you can still help out with rules.
 
OK, well I think the best way is if you all choose one. Once that's complete you choose another etc.

So I choose for first - Disciple of Nagash. I will post the fluff up it tomorrow for you all to read.
 
Alright, I finished the fluff for the Mortuary Priest. Excuse any spelling mistakes, as I haven't had a chance to proofread the piece yet. So, if it's okay with you Disciple of Nagash, I'm going to do Arkhan next. Also, feel free to tell me what you think guys, a little constructive criticism never hurts. :)

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In ancient days, in the long-forgotten lands of Nehekhara, lived a people obsessed with death and eternal life. At the centre of all of this were their lords, the kings of Nehekhara, who desired to reign eternal in the undying splendour of the afterlife. However, Settra, first and greatest of the kings of Nehekhara, resented terribly his role in the great scheme of things and he wished to escape death altogether, so that he could forever be master of great temporal power, of the kingdom of Nehekhara. To this end he commanded that his priests should find a way to stave off death forever, so that he could become an immortal, and rule for an eternity. Thus was founded the Mortuary Cult. Each successive generation of priests took up the quest for immortality, and their combined knowledge pooled, so that it grew ever greater over the ages. Eventually the later generations of priests did achieve immortality, although Settra was long dead by this time, so that they became liches, little more than preserved corpses, but maintaining the entirety of their intelligence and freedom of will.

Then came the birth of Nagash, now infamous and feared throughout the Known World as the Great Necromancer, the one who spawned the evils of the Black Arts and the fiendish undead created through them. Even more-so than most of Nehekhara’s people, Nagash had a morbid fascination with death in his youth, and joined the Mortuary Cult of his native city of Khemri at an early age. He eventually resolved that he would not allow death to steal existence from him, although he did not settle for the half-life of lichedom, at least not initially. Of course, Nagash eventually seized the throne from his brother, King Thutep, and, with the help of a captive Dark Elf sorceress brought to Khemri as a slave by chance; he learned much of Dark Magic. Now high priest and king of Khemri, Nagash distilled an elixir from human blood that perfectly restored and maintained the imbiber’s youth. Many ambitious and corrupt priests of Khemri’s Mortuary Cult sought favour with Nagash in order that they might partake of his Elixir of Life. The other kings of the various city-states of Nehekhara were disturbed by the happenings in Khemri and waged war against Nagash, crushing his armies and slaying his myriad followers and forcing him to flee into the desert-wildernesses of Nehekhara.

This was not the end for Nagash’s followers, however, for in time Nagash returned, having crafted his own magical lore and mastered it. He had become the Great Necromancer and achieved true immortality independent of the gods of his people. His followers he raised up once more, as liches preserved not by the power of the Nehekharan gods, but rather through the dire potency of Nagash’s formidable Necromancy. Now resurrected, the undead Mortuary Priests who had served Nagash in life gave up the ritualistic incantations of their folk in favour of the unholy magic of their master. As such the practices and tenets of the Mortuary Cult, which they had once abided by, were warped and twisted into the worship of the god-like Nagash, and the near deification of the state of undeath. These Mortuary Priests followed Nagash and served him in all of his wars, becoming masters of Necromancy in their own right. In modern times, most of the Mortuary Priests reside with the Great Necromancer in Nagashizzar, forever studying the Black Arts under the direction of the most powerful of their number, the Disciples of Nagash, in preparation for the day their master sends all his vast armies forth once more to conquer and despoil the lands of the living.

Though most of the Mortuary Priests are ancient beyond reckoning, it is not unknown for new members to be inducted into their ranks, for many aspiring necromancers of great promise are drawn by the lure of the libraries of lore held within Nagashizzar and by the notion of being taught by one of the mighty and learned liches that serve under Nagash himself.
 
I think that is great! Enjoyable to read and informative. I'll leave it another day to see if anyone else has any comments, if not I'll add it to the main thread. If you could so Arkhan that would be great.

Disciples of Nagash

Amongst the most powerful of Nagash's servants are his loyal Disciples. To become one of the chosen few is an honour reserved only for the Mortuary Priests who possess the power and skills to become masters of the necromantic arts. Such skill only comes from hundreds of years of training and practise, they are all ancient beyond belief, a rare few even as old as the Great Necromancer himself.

Each is taught personally by Nagash himself in the ways of death, though none possess all the evil Liches knowledge. However even just part of the Dark Lords knowledge makes the Disciples terrible foes, able to lash flesh from bones with just a look, or command an army of dead that none can match save Nagash. They are also granted access to the remaining books of Nagash except the ninth. The secrets and power these books contain combined with the Disciple's already vast knowledge makes them truly unstoppable.

Once a Disciple has truly proved his loyalty and Nagash is assured that he will not be betrayed, a choice few are sent into the world. Masked by potent amulets they walk unnoticed in the lands of men, elves, dwarves and other creatures. Here they work as the shadowy agents of Nagash, working to create events that will benefit their Lord, whilst at all times ensuring any knowledge of the ancient Liche is destroyed. Thus the world has been lulled into a false sense of security, believing the stories are just that, little knowing the the Great Lord of Undeath is slowly growing in power once more, and when he marches to war once more he will do so with his trusted Disciples at his right hand side.
 
This is mine

(If reapers arent made like wraiths then this really doesnt work)

In the ages and centuries past many men have toyed with the art of Necromancy when they die however their spirits do not rest easy. Nagash summons the spirits of these men and binds them to his will arming them with deadly blades that cut both the victims soul and their mortal flesh theses ethereal assassins are the vanguard of a Nagashi attack cutting down the enemies leaders and strategists before dissapearing into the wind leaving only dead in their wake.

It probably isnt that good but i just thoguht you would like a general jist of what im working towards.
 
Across the Old world and beyond, there are tales throughout history of the rise and fall of ancient civilisations. These long deceased empires were only small compared to what exists today, but each had warriors of power and skill, and when these champions fell they were buried with all the regalia of their leadership and exalted position. Weapons, armour, and all the gold and wealth accumulated in their life was placed into burial mounds and these sealed over my potent magic’s and charms, to allow the dead princes to slumber throughout the ages.

However, not all of these tombs remain inviolate. Many have been broken open and ransacked, their riches stolen and spread throughout the world. However, some would open these tombs for far darker purposes. In the Worlds Edge mountains, many of these mounds were erected, and Nagash soon noticed them from his throne in Nagashizzar. Using the dark magic at their command, his servants opened these tombs and raised the princes from death. These princes are filled with all the pride and arrogance of their former lives, and wish for nothing more than to rule empires anew, though the land they once had be little more than dust and memory now.

However, they are bound to the service of those who raised them. They are commanded by Nagash, and when he demands they lead his regiments to war. The Princes stride at the head of an undead horde, resplendent in shining armour, and wielding wicked weapons forged in ages past. Although they are long dead, these champions still feel the thrill of battle, and will slaughter all who stand against them. Facing one of these undead champions in battle is a terrifying experience; as they hack around themselves with brutal strokes, severing limbs and cutting open vital organs, while incoming attacks bounce from their bronze armour, or just sail through the gaps in their bones.

In life many of these princes were the champions of ruling Lords, their chosen man who carried their standard before them, leading the elite of the kingdom to battle. Nagash often uses them in the same way, but rather than heraldry and fanfare, these princes now carry dark banners, reeking with death and malice, as they lead regiments of the dreaded Pinnacle guard to war.


There you go, Zenith princes.
 
Great, I have added the complete ones to the main thread. Doombunny, yours is looking very promising.

I have amended my first post to make things clearer. So once you have completed one, choose another!
 
I personally think it needs to be a bit longer but if you say it looks promising then I know I have a good base this forums members are very picky when it comes to details in my opinion!

In the ages and centuries past many men have toyed with the art of Necromancy in vain hope of gaining immortality, few succeed however and when they die their spirits do not rest easy. Nagash summons the spirits of these men and binds them to his will arming them with deadly blades that cut both the victims soul and their mortal flesh. On the battlefield they are rarely seen but when called forth strike with a otherwordly strength and speed that few can match. These ethereal assassins are the vanguard of a Nagashi attack cutting down the enemies leaders and strategists before dissapearing into the wind leaving only dead in their wake.

Do you think it needs to be longer I cant really think of much else to say about them???
 
Heres an idea of what I'm working on.

Their will defies death itself, and though their bodies have long since rotted away, leaving not even bone, the souls of these heroes live on, trapped to the material realm.

Without a tomb to lay them at rest, they wander the world, perhaps haunting places of their slaughter, perhaps simply observing the world, or guarding artefacts . In form they appear as an insubstantial cloaked and robed figure, floating two feet above the ground, their faces the only remnant of their former visage. They are armored with metallic plate, hovering around their 'skin', this armor shifts to accommodate for blows, giving excellent protection. Being ethereal, the weapons they wield flow past armor, biting into the life-force of the victim, in this way they can become stronger, learning from their deceased victims.

A curious tendency to note is that they are attracted to dark-magic, this corrupts them, turning once noble soldiers into parodies, fallen angels. Cripple Peak is an almost irresistible lure and though possessed of free will, the promises of Nagash soon turn them to servants, some willing, the others not. Nagash teaches his favoured the secrets of his rituals, turning these powerful warriors into formidable battlemages.

To face one in combat is to face a soldier of incredible agility and speed, to flee is to watch a creature ignore terrain hazards and move indomitably on, scything down from the air, and turning ones fallen comrades against you. A vehement anger drives them on, a jealousy of freedom, or contempt of lesser races. Their presence on the battle field causes magical power to wax, as their absorbed dhar reinvigorates fellow magic users.

They are the Revenants, Lords of the Spirit World, Generals of Nagash.
 
Marcus, I expect to see a lot of detailed descriptions about the Pinnacle Knights' Dead Horses. ;)

Edit: Also, I might be mistaken but I believe that "Dhar" is the Warhammer word for magic. Possibly dark magic.
 

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