Nice intro Sanai - will be interesting to see how you RP a female character :tongue:
The only thing I would say is try to space and paragraph your posts. Makes it much more easier to read. For example here is your post spaced out a bit more (not perfect as I'm at work):
"DOUBLE-KILL!" screamed a voice, as Alice Tennants on screen character walljumped past an opponents rocket, responding with a sniper bullet to the head. Her Unreal Tournament 3 character, clad in red, then fired once more, being rewarded with the honourific of "WICKED SICK!" Alice's gray eyes focused intensely on the screen, as her character moved rapidly around, dodging yet more fire. A few shots later, and several dead and frustrated opponents, the game shouted "HEADHUNTER!" for a streak of sniper headshots, just before the power suddenly cut out on her laptop.
"WHAT THE FUCK!" Alice yelled in frustration, before looking up from beneath her curls, to see her friend standing there with the power plug in her hand. The two girls stared at one another for a moment, the curvy, fit girl sitting on the bed with her laptop wearing a womans tank top and faded jeans, and her friend, Danica, wearing her barmaids uniform and shaking her head. "Why on earth did you do that for? I was winning!" Alice said pointedly, folding her arms and glaring at Danica.
"You play those games too much. You oughta be working more, maybe do something with your life. What happened to sending off that enrolment to start up your vetinarianary training again?" Danica replied, dropping the power plug on the bed in the small apartment. Alice stood up, and replied,
"I lost it. Anyway, I don't need the money. I’m happy with what I have here."
Danica, with a skeptical look on her face, obviously did not believe a word.
"We will talk about that after work tomorrow."
Alice shook her head, her curls flying through the air.
"I don't have work tomorrow silly, its one of my days off...wait, you didn't go and organise work for me again? I hate it when you do that!" Alice replied. Danica reached into her pocket, and pulled out a flier, handing it to Alice.
"What? Some science thing? Looks pretty stupid, and you know those eggheads won't tip." Alice said as she read the pamphlet. Danica sighed, and then replied, with her hands on her hips
"The boss was asked for someone to fill a vacant bar position at the convention, and you are going to do it. I know you need the money, and you need a boyfriend. Those "eggheads" make good money, and there are some nice guys over at that science centre. Just please, be open minded, okay?" Danica replied, with a hint of pleading and worry in her voice, before sitting next to Alice.
"Well, I suppose I do need the cash, and I don't wan't to make you have to pay my rent again. Alright Danny, I'll do it for you. But I will not hook up with some silly scientist." Alice replied, with a downcast look on her face.
"Thats my girl. Now, did you hear about Kat? She got the most interesting new tat...."