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[Disciple of Nagash]

I have removed your posts out of the sign-up thread as it should be discussed here:

First of all, welcome to the forum, Wraith.
While I like the concept behind your character, I think we should try to stay away from blatantly ripping off other sources, such as Warcraft. It sort of ruins a character's credibility.
Other than that, I think his Speed and Agility could do with a point drop. 5 is normal for a Vampire, and seven starts to get into the realm of Lahmian vampires only.
Also, how did he get turned into a Vampire? You don't go into that in his biography. I know it hasn't been totally established yet, but try to figure that out.

Ty I was hoping to find someone to be my sire and then edit it, I know the warcraft thing sorry im tired its 6:12am here an i need a smoke, ty ill edit, Ive never done a vampire befroe

To be honest Wraith, most of your stats are too high. An average vampire Lord is 5 in most stats. A von Carstein should really not have a WS 7, S8 and T8. I think you need to read through some of the bios, take a little more time and then try again.

 

[wraith]

hows that?

 

[SarcasMagos]

Also The entire point of the Von Carstein bloodline is that they're all the traditional aristocratic vampire, how your guy would be unfamiliar with that is a bit of an issue, considering no VC would just sire someone and not tote him along and teach him the finer things in life.

 

[Knightofni]

Also The entire point of the Von Carstein bloodline is that they're all the traditional aristocratic vampire, how your guy would be unfamiliar with that is a bit of an issue, considering no VC would just sire someone and not tote him along and teach him the finer things in life.

Is not that much a problem.. my von Carstein is no aristocrat. It all depends on the background and history.

 

[Disciple of Nagash]

The stats are better now, though I think the armour should only increase T to 6 not 7.

Come everyone - POST! I have been waiting to progress now I have finished with the Invocation for the next couple of months - which you all better have read :mad2:

 

[Knightofni]

Come everyone - POST! I have been waiting to progress now I have finished with the Invocation for the next couple of months - which you all better have read :mad2:

Posting..

P.S: Can Lesa not get too mad with Saul over the chair-leg thing.. I'm not in the mood to write a death scene for my characters yet.. just punch him in the face or something

Oh and DoN.. the Invocation was very good.. I enjoyed the tutorial on painting vampire skin, finally I've found a decent way of doing that

 

[wraith]

okay edited the armour, can I play now lol:lol:

 

[Gree]

The stats are better now, though I think the armour should only increase T to 6 not 7.

Come everyone - POST! I have been waiting to progress now I have finished with the Invocation for the next couple of months - which you all better have read :mad2:

I'm kinda busy writing Chapter three of Die Nacht and my college paper.

 

[Knightofni]

okay edited the armour, can I play now lol:lol:

You should bulk out your characters history a little more.. histories are always fun to read, and a more extensive personality would be more helpful.. it's what determines how other characters perceive you.

 

[wraith]

ok tweaked and tweened

 

[Lord of Ravens]

Sorry Tood I just saw that now.

My bad

As for the Sigmarite Holy symbols, I have a few plans. But they will have some effect. This will also be linked into the security.

 

[Ghouly]

hay DoN I am sending you a PM containing Graveclaws disguise could you go over it.

 

[Mr Nightwere]

@Wraith: Here's an idea and please someone feel free to criticize this if they think it wouldn't fit. But if you wanted your character to link in with the Lich king's storyline, why not have the armor turn him. It is entirely possible that this armor and weapon you now have could have been the property of another vampiric master (as yet unknown). Who through his own personal bloodline traits tainted the armor and sword he used in battle and has now tainted you as well.

Could be an interesting idea considering no one really knows too much about the other master's and because its only through transference your vampire wouldn't be 'Uber'.

Or you could just look around the other characters sheets and find a character you really like the sound of and ask if they would be willing to become your sire. Personally I would be your sire (And am still considering the notion if it's OK with you?) but I did just become the sire of Rick and may not want to have to many gets popping out of the wood work.

@DoN: Don't worry DoN I appreciated the Invocation, very nice addition. I'm just chatting to peter right Now as the party doesn't start for a while people are getting dressed.

 

[Fishhead Slackjaw Mcgee]

Strap rockets to your feet and rocket you to Nuln....

Hmm. A good idea, but I'm afraid a Sarus probably wouldnt be able to land to well.

Seriously, could I be shifted there by someones Giant bat or something? Or would you prefer i stay at nexternus?

 

[wraith]

I like the armour thing, and yeah be my sire if you want man I got no objections

 

[Sweeney Todd]

wraith, Nightwere's main character is a 3rd generation vampire thus yours should be 5th generation.

Also, I'd say lower his speed and agility to 5. I can accept that having lived most or all of his (un)life in a suit of armor he is used to moving around and fighting in one, but to have him more agile than some vampires not wearing armor is a bit strange.

@Raven: Holy symbols? Wut?

 

[Mr Nightwere]

wouldn't he be 4th generation??

 

[Trevy the Great]

Seriously, could I be shifted there by someones Giant bat or something? Or would you prefer i stay at nexternus?

"My name is Zosz the forsaken, I'm here to rescue you. I'm here with Vekarin the Dark Bladed!"
"Aren't you a little short for a Necromancer?"
...

 

[Sweeney Todd]

wouldn't he be 4th generation??

wraith's guy should be 5th, as he is stated as a get of Harrindir, who is in turn a get of Jason.

 

[Mr Nightwere]

wraith's guy should be 5th, as he is stated as a get of Harrindir, who is in turn a get of Jason.

O so sorry I thought you meant Jason would be his sire.

Edit: O dear now I have seen the error of my ways, he wrote it in his bio I see.

 

[wraith]

edited

 

[Mr Nightwere]

Best have Jason as your sire, just because it will make your character about equal power to most of the council, a 5th gen get is quite weak, unless you had some crazy added bonus.... hmm that's gives me an idea...

What if I made you this armor as you were trying to defend the bloodlines house and were grievously injured during you gallant fight against lets say... Rival Lahmain's?

Thus you were crafted some of the most powerful Armour in the old world; smelted from the evils of Jason Nightwere's foulest magic's. The Metal has fused into your bones holding your proud yet lifeless form threw the ages moving with both magical enchantment and muscle wrapped around this enchanted metal.
Only your face can be seen as your eyes are a piercing icy glow as dark magic spills out from them.
The enchanted metals glow with a shimmering blue, as they will forever cover your skin from harm, while being unable to remove it it serves as a constant defense. a sword made from the bones of a powerful ice dragon which you wield with deadly skill as an enchantment which can grievously wound any creature with a single gash as it begins to ice over and immobilize them.

Feel free to add anything or deny the idea completely if you desire, but I like it.

 

[wraith]

awsome idea... really cool lol i think Ill go with the jason idea, what gen am i then? I like your idea but i wanna be able to take the suit off, Ive been chaos to long lol

 

[Gree]

Best have Jason as your sire, just because it will make your character about equal power to most of the council, a 5th gen get is quite weak, unless you had some crazy added bonus.... hmm that's gives me an idea...

Not really, generation helps but also does age and experiance. You can't expect a much, much younger second generation vampire to be as strong as a 4th generation vampire who is countless centuries old for example.

 

[Get of W'soran]

I would guess Generation would be the main indicator of power (as it is in other things beside's warhammer).
Although Age and experience help as Gree stated, for example a seven hundred year old third generation might be physically weaker than say a three hundred year old second generation of the same line but the third gen would most likely be a better fighter and/or mage due to the time they spent learning and the experience they earned.


Although the armour idea could make him less weak although as 5th gen he still might not equal many on the council.