TVC OOC (New)

[Trevy the Great]

I think they should both die just to appease me.

 

[Disciple of Nagash]

OK, so here are my comments on the new signups:

Jason Nightwere: His magical skill needs lowering to 8. I can see he is a powerful wizard. So 8 would still essentially make him a level 4 caster. If you was referring to his skills with enchantments, then his skill level with the Enchanter Skill should maybe be an 8 or a 9. Other than that he looks fine to me.

Zaak – I know your character may not know, but for the sake of completeness what generation is he? Other than that he passed with flying colours

Nekhlior – I am going to limit his max skill at 9, even with his staff. That is still stronger than anyone else bar Lesa & V’azrin. I will allow the Necromantic Artificer to stay at 10 considering his bloodline and age. Other than that he is ok.

Arg: His strength and toughness is too high. On orc as basic is as tough as a vampire lord. I understand his toughness might have increased some more but not up to the levels such as Graveclaw, Same with this strength. I think his strength should be dropped to 7, with his Hacka increasing his technique strength to 8 as it should cut apart most armour. His toughness should be dropped to 6 with a bracketed 7 for his enchanted armour.

Völundr – His generation should be 2nd if sired by the first werewolf, please note after this is werewolf generations not vampire to avoid confusion. The electricity power – why? I am not saying no to the idea, but I would like to see a plausible reason why he has such a power. Looking at his history I can’t see why. Other than that he is fine.

Hati Hróðvitnisson Gévaudan – Same as above with his generation. Same with her time skills – why?

Serpino – Firstly, please can you try and condense some of his bio. Every sentence has its own line which makes it seem really long! I think his magic skill should be lowered to 8 at max considering his wealth of skills. What do you mean when by “Chaos Magic” under skill sets. Flesh crafting to be dropped to 8 max considering his again has a lot of skills. His pistols are ok as long as they only do a reasonable amount of damage, no hand cannons! Healing potions – these should be a limited amount otherwise he will be constantly regenerating. I would like you do perhaps loose a couple of the other abilities. Being able to create clones, capture and nullify ghosts, do voodoo, inject paralyzing agents as well as having pistols and being a powerful spellcaster is all a bit too much. I know he has weaknesses, but most are typical vampire weaknesses. I will leave it upto you want skills to drop.

 

[Drog_Manslayer]

Alrighty, changes made!

Thanks

 

[Count Erick]

but I would like to see a plausible reason why he has such a power.

Werewolves cant perform magic, but after several centuries they gain a unique power. These Werewolves are known as Úlfhéðnar among themselves. These powers manifest only in werewolves older than two hundred years and always on Geheimnisnacht.
These powers are apparently random, but also appear to have something to do with the personality of the werewolf or the situation he was in at the time.
For example, Luise d'Arden (the werewolf that dueled Ashlotte) was able to transform his body into complete shadows, while Muller has regenerative powers far in advance of what other werewolves have.

Völundr's electric powers and Hati's time manipulation are their Úlfhéðnar abilities.

 

[Gree]

Serpino – Firstly, please can you try and condense some of his bio. Every sentence has its own line which makes it seem really long! I think his magic skill should be lowered to 8 at max considering his wealth of skills. What do you mean when by “Chaos Magic” under skill sets. Flesh crafting to be dropped to 8 max considering his again has a lot of skills. His pistols are ok as long as they only do a reasonable amount of damage, no hand cannons! Healing potions – these should be a limited amount otherwise he will be constantly regenerating. I would like you do perhaps loose a couple of the other abilities. Being able to create clones, capture and nullify ghosts, do voodoo, inject paralyzing agents as well as having pistols and being a powerful spellcaster is all a bit too much. I know he has weaknesses, but most are typical vampire weaknesses. I will leave it upto you want skills to drop.

Alright, I'll go over it later when I have time. To be honest most of those where situational inventions.

 

[Sweeney Todd]

Mrs. Lovette and Geralt up and ready for review

 

[Fishhead Slackjaw Mcgee]

Revised Huakroataxa up and running

 

[Zanos]

To everyone talking about the possible death of Lesa - Tzeentch: JUST. AS. PLANNED.

 

[Ghouly]

To everyone talking about the possible death of Lesa - Tzeentch: JUST. AS. PLANNED.

Excellent...... Just as planned *takes the same pose as my Aviator*.

 

[Disciple of Nagash]

To everyone talking about the possible death of Lesa - Tzeentch: JUST. AS. PLANNED.

To everyone talking about the possible death of Lesa - Tzeentch: JUST. AS. PLANNED.

Excellent...... Just as planned *takes the same pose as my Aviator*.

Well don't you both just look silly now

 

[Ghouly]

Speaking of witch DoN I'm am wondering is Lesa's Aura Slanneeshi in origin

 

[Disciple of Nagash]

Never really looked into it...........might be something that I have to think of in the future.

Geralt - Fine
Mrs Lovette - Fine
Huakroataxa - Fine

Who is still waiting for the ok. I am aware I may have overlooked some character so please tell me if I have. There have been so many to check...............

 

[Gree]

*after reading latest post*

Mircea: ''What the F***, that god****** f***** w**** survived the f***** blade because that p**** was to f**** weak and whipped to deliver the final motherf**** blow? F***** hell man!''

Vrakian: ''Calm down man, we have decency to maintain here.''

Mircea:'' Screw decency! I'm going to mind Milosh and kick him in the ass.''

Vrakian: ''Hey stop! (huge fight ensues)''

 

[Disciple of Nagash]

*after reading latest post*

Mircea: What the F***, that god****** f***** w**** survived the f***** blade because that p**** was to f**** weak and whipped to deliver the final motherf**** blow? F***** hell man!

Vrakian: Calm down man, we have decency to maintain here.

Mircea: Screw decency, I'm going to mind Milosh and kick him in the ass.

Vrakian: Hey stop! (huge fight ensues)

Lol That made me laugh! So I assume that the twist came as a surprise then.........ah my skills are not slipping then.

 

[Gree]

Yeah it was good.

M.Night Shylaman: ''You call that a twist young padawan? you have much to learn before you can proprly shock audiences-''

(Suddenly a blade appears from his torso)

Mircea: (Hacking savagly) ''That was for Lady in the Water! and the Happening! Enough with the plot twists!''

 

[Zaak the Uncanny]

*Ding!* Knew it!

But yes, multiplicitous kudos. And I'll put Zaak at 4th Generation. Because that'll make my next character 5th, and his get 6th, and that's about right.

 

[Disciple of Nagash]

*Ding!* Knew it!

No ding for you, you said Milosh would kill himself. But Lesa killed him......hmm I might give you half a ding....grudgingly

Would you believe that this plot was designed well over a year ago with GoW and all this has been leading up to it? Admittedly I did get worried at points when GoW kept disappearing............

 

[Disciple of Nagash]

Oh Gree............that plot twist is nothing compared to what I have lined up............

EDIT: and all those that have their characters cleared which is most of you - get bloody posting!!!

 

[Gree]

I have to come up with my onw plot twist soon........

 

[Kaladas Harkon]

Never really looked into it...........might be something that I have to think of in the future.

Geralt - Fine
Mrs Lovette - Fine
Huakroataxa - Fine

Who is still waiting for the ok. I am aware I may have overlooked some character so please tell me if I have. There have been so many to check...............

Sent you a PM about Quezalat review. Worried about being too high on the power level.

 

[Disciple of Nagash]

Yeah, I did post this earlier:

Quezalat: Again, please make sure your bio is laid out as per the first post. His WS should be 8. It still shows he is highly skilled but only the likes of Walach / the Duke are 9 and the only character at 10 is Vekarin. Strength is far too high. Again you should remember that a vampire lord is 5. I appreciate he is older and has vampire blood in him, however Blood Dragons do not gain an increase in S normally unlike Strigoi. 7 should be high enough.His toughness is fine at 7. So realistically a WS8, S7, T7 character is more than strong enough.

@ Gree - I hope you do, I did send you a few PMs trying to get you too If you do don't forget to PM me the details to check it doesn't clash, or if I can help if needed.

 

[Gree]

Really? I'm not sure I got one.

Alright, before I go over the final revisions, I would like some final questions to be asked.

I think his magic skill should be lowered to 8 at max considering his wealth of skills.

I'm pretty sure it is.

I think his magic skill should be lowered to 8 at max considering his wealth of skills. What do you mean when by “Chaos Magic” under skill sets.

I was kind of going to knowledge of daemon summoning.

Flesh crafting to be dropped to 8 max considering his again has a lot of skills. His pistols are ok as long as they only do a reasonable amount of damage, no hand cannons!

Alright

Healing potions – these should be a limited amount otherwise he will be constantly regenerating.

Alright

Being able to create clones,

I'll probably keep this. It's an important plot thing I have in the future.

capture and nullify ghosts,

I added this as a last mintue invention. I never really intented it to be a main power. Maybe in the future it could shot up as an invention?

do voodoo,

I'll probably get rid of this one, unless you have a suibly alternetive. I was kind of wanting to take him into the magical theory and dispellment as a main ability with fleshcrafting as a secondary thing.

inject paralyzing agents

I wanted him to do something with his blood other than clones. Do you have an alternative?

 

[Fishhead Slackjaw Mcgee]

Hey everyone, in reference to Lesa's seduction ability, I understand thats meant to work on both men and women, Human and non blah blah blah but what about lizardmen?

They are completely non sexual beings. They dont reproduce normally, they just arise fully formed from the spawning pools. Whilst described as male, I'm pretty sure their neither male nor female.

How would they react to Lesa's aura?

 

[Gree]

They would be attracted. If zombies and bloodthirsters can they can.

To be honest (No offense to DoN) I think the ability is haxxed. I don't understand how it can work on a mindless creatures or a creature that physically, mentally, and spirtually can't be sexual attracted. Not just won't, it literally can't. Plus Bloodthirsters are resitant to magic. How would it work on blind dwarf wearing a null stone for example?

But it's not really a big issue at all to be honest.

 

[Disciple of Nagash]

I think his magic skill should be lowered to 8 at max considering his wealth of skills.

I'm pretty sure it is.[/quote}

I meant including his magic item, so no 9 in brackets after.

I think his magic skill should be lowered to 8 at max considering his wealth of skills. What do you mean when by “Chaos Magic” under skill sets.

I was kind of going to knowledge of daemon summoning.

I'm ok with that, provided you don't mean Greater Daemons

Being able to create clones,

I'll probably keep this. It's an important plot thing I have in the future.

Hokay

capture and nullify ghosts,

I added this as a last mintue invention. I never really intented it to be a main power. Maybe in the future it could shot up as an invention?

Those inventions can be the ones you drop them. We''ll how things progress, maybe they can pop in the future as a one-off invention.

do voodoo,

I'll probably get rid of this one, unless you have a suibly alternetive. I was kind of wanting to take him into the magical theory and dispellment as a main ability with fleshcrafting as a secondary thing.

Ok, if you want to get rid of this that is fine.

inject paralyzing agents

I wanted him to do something with his blood other than clones. Do you have an alternative?

If you are going to get rid of Voodoo, it should be ok to keep this power.

Hey everyone, in reference to Lesa's seduction ability, I understand thats meant to work on both men and women, Human and non blah blah blah but what about lizardmen?

They are completely non sexual beings. They dont reproduce normally, they just arise fully formed from the spawning pools. Whilst described as male, I'm pretty sure their neither male nor female.

How would they react to Lesa's aura?

Again, firstly you need bear in mind it is magical in nature. Think of in a Slaanesh way, how daemonettes etc can appear attractive to pretty much any creature, how the Siren Song can work on the undead.

On those who are very susceptible to it, such as humans and elves etc, it would work very strongly.

On others such as you say Lizzies, they would be more distracted than seduced as this unknown feeling is in effect forced on them.

Those resistant to magic would feel its effects less, so a Bloodthirster would be be distracted only for a second.

Yes, I concede that someone holding a null stone, and who is blind would not be affected.