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Disciple of Nagash said:
Well to be honest Grammar dictates that whenever someone new starts talking it should go down to a new line:

Lesa started at Simon before replying,
"Your hair is really curly you know," she said,
"Well thank you," Simon replied.

Though if the same person is carrying speaking a new line is not need,

Lesa started at Simon before replying,
"Your hair is really curly you know," she said before pausing for a moment thinking, "do you use curling tongs or something?"

If we all made sure we followed that, would it make it easier for everyone, without using text formats?

I vote AYE! Yes, I HATE when people don't use correct spacing.
 
Disciple of Nagash said:
Lesa started at Simon before replying,
"Your hair is really curly you know," she said,
"Well thank you," Simon replied.

Mircea stared at them both.

''My hair is long, and black, it's better than yours, I use L'oreal every day in order to make it silky smooth and impressive looking when I flick my head around in irritation'' The Marshal explained. He looked at Simon.

''Do you use L'oreal brother?'' he asked pointedly.

''I also wear this badass black wolfskin cloak to look awesome. Badass wolf cloak is badass.......can you dig it Lesa?'' he continued.

''Plus I turn into a goddamn bat, that's right, I can freaking fly', and I don't need a dragon or magic to do it''
 
Gree said:
Disciple of Nagash said:
Lesa started at Simon before replying,
"Your hair is really curly you know," she said,
"Well thank you," Simon replied.

Mircea stared at them both.

''My hair is long, and black, it's better than yours, I use L'oreal every day in order to make it silky smooth and impressive looking when I flick my head around in irritation'' The Marshal explained. He looked at Simon.

''Do you use L'oreal brother?'' he asked pointedly.

''I also wear this badass black wolfskin cloak to look awesome. Badass wolf cloak is badass.......can you dig it Lesa?'' he continued.

''Plus I turn into a goddamn bat, that's right, I can freaking fly', and I don't need a dragon or magic to do it''

Maybe he's born with it, maybe its maybelline.
 
Gree said:
Disciple of Nagash said:
Lesa started at Simon before replying,
"Your hair is really curly you know," she said,
"Well thank you," Simon replied.

Mircea stared at them both.

''My hair is long, and black, it's better than yours, I use L'oreal every day in order to make it silky smooth and impressive looking when I flick my head around in irritation'' The Marshal explained. He looked at Simon.

''Do you use L'oreal brother?'' he asked pointedly.

''I also wear this badass black wolfskin cloak to look awesome. Badass wolf cloak is badass.......can you dig it Lesa?'' he continued.

''Plus I turn into a goddamn bat, that's right, I can freaking fly', and I don't need a dragon or magic to do it''

Sadly I can actually picture Micrea saying all that....with the correct levels of arrogance of course.
 
OK anyone who wants to join Mrs. Lovette in her horror movie audition, please do so now. Venue's Sigmarite Cathedral Main Hall, and the judging panel consists of 45 Templars, If you do, please don't actually start killing people yet. On duty tomorrow so can't post again, and I'd really like a good atmosphere to come back to.

@DoN: I already follow that grammatical rule. I don't care about colored font either way, though I feel it's a waste of time if I do it.

@Mircea&LoR: You guys just reminded me of a shampoo ad playing on my local TV, that consists of dudes in black with long smooth locks slaying dandruff demons.

PS: One Internetz to anyone who recognises that poem
 
Sweeney Todd said:
OK anyone who wants to join Mrs. Lovette in her horror movie audition, please do so now. Venue's Sigmarite Cathedral Main Hall, and the judging panel consists of 45 Templars, If you do, please don't actually start killing people yet. On duty tomorrow so can't post again, and I'd really like a good atmosphere to come back to.

@DoN: I already follow that grammatical rule. I don't care about colored font either way, though I feel it's a waste of time if I do it.

@Mircea&LoR: You guys just reminded me of a shampoo ad playing on my local TV, that consists of dudes in black with long smooth locks slaying dandruff demons.

PS: One Internetz to anyone who recognises that poem

I would prefer it if the fighting was to take place in the corridor we just came along. That will preven the authorities seeing that there are vamps running around.
 
Lord of Ravens said:
Sweeney Todd said:
OK anyone who wants to join Mrs. Lovette in her horror movie audition, please do so now. Venue's Sigmarite Cathedral Main Hall, and the judging panel consists of 45 Templars, If you do, please don't actually start killing people yet. On duty tomorrow so can't post again, and I'd really like a good atmosphere to come back to.

@DoN: I already follow that grammatical rule. I don't care about colored font either way, though I feel it's a waste of time if I do it.

@Mircea&LoR: You guys just reminded me of a shampoo ad playing on my local TV, that consists of dudes in black with long smooth locks slaying dandruff demons.

PS: One Internetz to anyone who recognises that poem

I would prefer it if the fighting was to take place in the corridor we just came along. That will preven the authorities seeing that there are vamps running around.

That can be arranged

EDIT: Well it won't actually be a horror movie if they can see who's attacking them, so if I/we write it in a way such that the Templars never get to see who's in there then it should be fine, no?
 
Sweeney Todd said:
Lord of Ravens said:
Sweeney Todd said:
OK anyone who wants to join Mrs. Lovette in her horror movie audition, please do so now. Venue's Sigmarite Cathedral Main Hall, and the judging panel consists of 45 Templars, If you do, please don't actually start killing people yet. On duty tomorrow so can't post again, and I'd really like a good atmosphere to come back to.

@DoN: I already follow that grammatical rule. I don't care about colored font either way, though I feel it's a waste of time if I do it.

@Mircea&LoR: You guys just reminded me of a shampoo ad playing on my local TV, that consists of dudes in black with long smooth locks slaying dandruff demons.

PS: One Internetz to anyone who recognises that poem

I would prefer it if the fighting was to take place in the corridor we just came along. That will preven the authorities seeing that there are vamps running around.

That can be arranged

EDIT: Well it won't actually be a horror movie if they can see who's attacking them, so if I/we write it in a way such that the Templars never get to see who's in there then it should be fine, no?

What do you mean? None of our characters have the power to turn invisible.
 
So Jason shall have been taken to an upper level so you guys may have to break him out of the slammer twice :(

Again please don't kill Bates I think I want him to become a character now there's so much history after all and hes and interesting character... but maybe ill just kill him is such a fascinating way and turn him into a butler or something.

Any way I think I may be able to get over my writers block now. :mrgreen: Its a disease and I'm taking it days at a time, so flowers and chocolate are appreciated :tongue:
 
Lord of Ravens said:
Sweeney Todd said:
Lord of Ravens said:
Sweeney Todd said:
OK anyone who wants to join Mrs. Lovette in her horror movie audition, please do so now. Venue's Sigmarite Cathedral Main Hall, and the judging panel consists of 45 Templars, If you do, please don't actually start killing people yet. On duty tomorrow so can't post again, and I'd really like a good atmosphere to come back to.

@DoN: I already follow that grammatical rule. I don't care about colored font either way, though I feel it's a waste of time if I do it.

@Mircea&LoR: You guys just reminded me of a shampoo ad playing on my local TV, that consists of dudes in black with long smooth locks slaying dandruff demons.

PS: One Internetz to anyone who recognises that poem

I would prefer it if the fighting was to take place in the corridor we just came along. That will preven the authorities seeing that there are vamps running around.

That can be arranged

EDIT: Well it won't actually be a horror movie if they can see who's attacking them, so if I/we write it in a way such that the Templars never get to see who's in there then it should be fine, no?

What do you mean? None of our characters have the power to turn invisible.

Creative use of lack of lighting.
 
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Disciple of Nagash said:
Wow - superb fight Gree, it was certainly well worth letting you RP the Verdict as well. It's amazing how far Mircea's arrogance can take him xd

Yes, I wanted him to start tapping into Simon's beliefs, to show that he is starting to grow more...unstable.xD
 

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