Hey, don't rush yourself or anything, I was just telling archi who we were eating for, you don't need to rush. What problem Is there with eh bloodfang order?
OOC: Slyvax's revenge
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Mannfred von Carstein said:
I keep writing out long updates, but then about two-thirds of the way through I think they sound stupid and delete them.
It's getting really bad.
I know where you're coming from, I usually write a lot, delete the stupid bits, but as conservative as possible, then replace them after thinking about it for a day, starting again and again won't help.On the subject, what do you think the quality of my updates is like?
Sir_Jackonan_De_Orage
Grave Guard
Anilar
Wight King
Im thinking you do quite well with the updates, you keep a steady pace on progress in the action and torture. I can't really see much you could do differently. If I think of something Ill try and remember to tell you.
Thanks anilar, dreadgrass posted around 10 hours after my PM do everone give him a pat on the back. 
Will start continuing my post now
Will start continuing my post now
Sir_Jackonan_De_Orage
Grave Guard
To avoid me posting all the story, and you just re-writing it I will outline the plot we need to get through in the next couple of posts (share this out now 
). the human squad leaves the building after the Valkyries have scouted around fkr a bit, with us nearly getting spotted, then the human squad get back in the Valkyries and fly off. Then someone needs to ask me about the thing I took out of Luther
EDIT: Ridiulous posting speed archi :O maybe tomorrow you want to add the Valkyries flying around the place looking for us, unless you want the post to stay like that
). the human squad leaves the building after the Valkyries have scouted around fkr a bit, with us nearly getting spotted, then the human squad get back in the Valkyries and fly off. Then someone needs to ask me about the thing I took out of LutherEDIT: Ridiulous posting speed archi :O maybe tomorrow you want to add the Valkyries flying around the place looking for us, unless you want the post to stay like that
Mannfred von Carstein said:To avoid me posting all the story, and you just re-writing it I will outline the plot we need to get through in the next couple of posts (share this out now
EDIT: Ridiulous posting speed archi :O maybe tomorrow you want to add the Valkyries flying around the place looking for us, unless you want the post to stay like that
THanks for posting darvy
Whoever posts next, of you haven't started writing yet, pleas further the storyline as detailed above
Sir_Jackonan_De_Orage
Grave Guard
We've got a spammer on the rp thread, ill post something up soon hopefully, im juggling this, the other one and im gm'ing a rogue trader campaign on another forum, on top of real life
I will obliterate every last vestige of the spammer who hath dared to post within the hallowed grounds of the Theatre de Vampyre. There will be nought of him left to kneel with after I bring down my righteous fury.
(Yes, I copied a quote from the TVC, but heck, it's cool.)
I won't ban him as he seems to be real-ish, just delete his post from the face of the earth. Carry on.
(Yes, I copied a quote from the TVC, but heck, it's cool.)
I won't ban him as he seems to be real-ish, just delete his post from the face of the earth. Carry on.
Anilar
Wight King
I think our grey knight have allready done that, and I can't ask since I sensible stayed away from your theater of tort... errhhmmmm surgery.
Well one of the others can ask, but if Luther has to, he could say smerhkng like "what did you take out of me anyway?" etc
Anilar
Wight King
Ill try again. Luther have allready asked that question in the game thread. Post 139 to be exact
But if you need someone else to ask, then I guess someone have to come forward.
But if you need someone else to ask, then I guess someone have to come forward.