No, it was not the descriptive nature, more that Vekarin felt it was out of Victarias's character which is fair enough. I do find find it funny that we can all write descriptive and gory fight scenes, but one sex scene that does not even go into full the indepth that many of the fight scenes do raises so many questions.........
Alright, Rask's supplemental thread is finished. He has the Fellblade and is ready to rejoin the Council... Any ideas on why they wouldn't just kill him on first sight? Or should one or two members try to and be forced to stop? Rask is becoming a rather formidable opponent, between that magic-negating gem and the Fellblade I'll probably wait until a new chapter to come back in. I think Rask's arrival could rather mess up the story lines of the current ones.
I feel sorry for Draithon he's got a suicide mission walk into the Cort of the King of Brettonia witch is packed right full of Grail Knights plus the king himself who is a Grail Knight and convince them to go on a Erranty war witch will involve the Fey Enchantress who is a damn powerful magic user.
I am most certainly not going to waltz in to the kings court, though it would make for an amusing scene. I intend for Draithon to begin the seeds of the crusade. The border raids should begin in a few days, Draithon has invited a few of the more friendly dukes representatives for a discussion on strategy for defending their lands during the coming winter, reports will come in from the remainders of the Arabian Reclamation Pact that the undead are becoming restless, Draithon will send a letter to the Kings court documenting the failures in Araby, the undead unrest, border raids on all nearby kingdoms, the corpses of Kemmlers army. Reraised and dropped in a more suitable location. Suggesting a new crusade against what seems to be the rising undead threat of the south. With those representatives signiatures on it. If he is called up he will be away, investigating and the other dukes will be called. Who with their lands continually ravaged will hopefully see it as a good idea.
Yup, that's Ashlotte all right, by far the coolest character in the entire game series (in my own opinion) and also one of the least probable to ever return, seeing as she's only a mere guest character.
Anyway, my responces in the TVC will be in later today.
I was going to wait until the Blood Keep chapter caught up, but its in not fair on those in the Scribe. So tomorrow morning I will be posting the arrival of the Duke & co from the Blood Keep in the Scribe chapter.
Just so we don't get confused, that can be done as the Scribe chapter is ahead timeline wise, so at that point they would have travelled back to Sylvania and onto Drakenhof, we will still need to finish up the Blood Keep chapter.