This is my version of Abhorash please comment and play test...

M WS BS S T W I A LD
5 10 0 5 5 3 7 3 10
Master of the Blade
“Abhorash has practised the art of the
sword for thousands of years and can
block incoming strikes with contemptuous
ease.
Instead of attacking normally, Abhorash may
chose to attack using abilities shown bellow
each ability uses one attack unless shown
other wise. In addition to this he uses a long
sword which may be used as either a great
weapon or a hand weapon for each attack.
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Can't be Bothered....
“Abhorash summons all his strength into
a series of blows with astounding strength,
cutting through armour and flesh with ease..â€Â
Uses one attack, Killing blow on 5+
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Swiftly & with Style.....
“Abhorash uses his speed and skill to quickly
deal with his opponent, knocking aside his
blade, before stabbing him through the throat...
Uses one attack, Enemy's must pass an Initiative
test or suffer one wound with no armour saves...
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I'm enjoying this....
“Abhorash strikes quickly, using his speed to give
his opponent no reprieve, how can an enemy hope
to triumph if he cannot see through a storm of blades.
Uses two attacks, opponent suffers -2 to hit him
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Could This be a Challenge?.....
“Abhorash has found an opponent worth fighting
(at last), with a bellowing shout he rushes into the
fey, using his every undead fibre to attack his foe..
Uses on attack, against models with toughness 5 or above
for this attack may re-roll to hit and to wound rolls