Ordo Cruentus
Order amongst the Dead
Disciple of Nagash said:Ordo - can you link me to your bio and I'll have a look.
Sure thing. It is right in my signature.
EDIT: Ninja'd! twice!
Thanks guys.
Disciple of Nagash said:Ordo - can you link me to your bio and I'll have a look.
Ghouly said:real life is about to go crazy for me I need to get to a boring talking part so it doesn't matter if my characters talk or not
Count Darvaleth said:"Boring talking part"? Ghouly this is roleplay. Talking is one of the most, possibly the most important parts of the TVC. It's where character development and plot advancement comes from, not just a filler to go in between the battles.
Harland said:Feedback for Count Vashra: I must disagree with Shareya in that the background does not seem that incredulous, and in any case, there is nothing wrong with an unlikely bio in this role-play. The only problem I see is that a srudent wouldn't really receive the nickname 'Master of Shadows' ('living shadow' maybe) - perhaps a moniker he received later in his life/unlife. Also, how the Lahmian acted: this is by no means my area of expertise, but I don't think they are particularly prone to sexual desire themselves, and they tend to have more assertive personalities, so it might be better for the Lahmian to force the blood kiss on your character (which seems more likely considering his hatred for vampires). Why the Lahmian cane and why your character hates vampires are both mysteries in your backstory (most certainly a good thing) that can and should be explored later on. Finally, I absolutely love the angle of a vampire against vampires, and I can tell your character will be extremely interesting both to role-play and interact with.
This sounds like a good point, but as I said I don't know a great deal about vampire lore.Ghouly said:only problem I see is Lahmains aren't supposed to turn men, the Lahmain who turned you sounds like a rouge.
From what I can tell, Graveclaw just doesn't like them. This guy wants to destroy them.also Harland Graveclaw has been against Vampires from the start.
I can see that the talking parts would be quite difficult for a character who doesn't say a great deal. Perhaps make him more talkative (understandably, this may simply not be in his character) or just wait for the right moment. But yes, I can see your dilemma.and the talking parts are where Sylvie is at her best, they don't really matter with Graveclaw
Harland said:From what I can tell, Graveclaw just doesn't like them. This guy wants to destroy them.
I can see that the talking parts would be quite difficult for a character who doesn't say a great deal. Perhaps make him more talkative (understandably, this may simply not be in his character) or just wait for the right moment. But yes, I can see your dilemma.and the talking parts are where Sylvie is at her best, they don't really matter with Graveclaw
Ghouly said:Harland said:From what I can tell, Graveclaw just doesn't like them. This guy wants to destroy them.
I can see that the talking parts would be quite difficult for a character who doesn't say a great deal. Perhaps make him more talkative (understandably, this may simply not be in his character) or just wait for the right moment. But yes, I can see your dilemma.and the talking parts are where Sylvie is at her best, they don't really matter with Graveclaw
Graveclaw spends his entire existence hunting down and eating other Vampires, when he is the last he is going to commit suicide
It's not in Graveclaws nature to talk, that's something I've been doing wrong, Graveclaw is my secondary character at least till you newbies catch up