OOC: Slyvax's revenge

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You're doing fine as a Dark Eldar. It's never explicitly stated that they're all jackass beyond jackass that can't get along with anyone. And to be fair, you can't act too douchey with a freakin Grey Knight standing next to you :D
 
I dunno, I'll email her again :P. Darvy, we are waiting on you in the action tread (and Gaius can post himself arriving, please)
 
Yeh, but I thought gaius hasn't posted himself to the edge of the base yet...

Because my memory is awesome.......

Er o_o
 
Yeah.... the impossible plan I now have to actually think up... xD

EDIT: It's what you get for bluffing. Don't worry, I will make one, and it'll be suitably impossible. :thumbsup:
 
back... For some reason my phone won't let me login but my bf's phone will, anyway much trauma and traveling later I have returned, just waiting on a green (or red) light from the GM.
 
Unfortunately red for now Jasmyn, I'd give it around a week until it'll be green, there's an exact plot point where I'd like you to enter, I'll PM you soon. You can while we are waiting post up your character sheet, if you wan me to discuss it with you PM/email me :thumbsup:

Same for you Dreadgrass, I'll PM you about Gaius (and mr sword) when it is time. ;)

EDIT (ooh what a surprise, an edit): indolently, post your "Mr Sword" here when you are ready Dreadgrass
 
thanks Mannfred (again lol) sheet sent as both PM and Email. I don't mean to sound like an ungrateful bitch, but the week's wait is a blessing, it gives me time for some rest.
Ok on standby, I will log on from time to time so any edits needed will be done, but otherwise have fun and thanks again.
 
Welcome! I'll read through the character sheet and stick it in the first post, and post it here for all the lazy people :P

Could be more than a week of darvy takes any longer (doesn't mean rush the post though)
 
Sure, fine with me. Btw I have no idea hat this plan is, so we've got a bit of impromptu awesomeness :thumbsup: stuff like this is good guys
 
Plans are hard to make when you're juggling 5 A-levels and attempting to get into Oxford university. :(

No PM is necessary, I haven't forgotten about the plan-post, just haven't had the time to do it! :slapface:
 
Jasmyn Von Carstein said:
any news on the action front fellas? Am addicted to reading this story lol any plans on publishing it?

Well if we published it and charged for it, we would be breaking the law and GW would shut down CN. xD And if people really want to read it, they can do just that by going through the thread anyway.
 
Frankly i wouldn't want to charge for it anyway. It probably isn't good enough, and it would be sucky, it'd be better free.

As an outside reader, do you hae any feedback/ tips on the story?
 
Hi all,

So I'm afraid Gaius is bound for the great scrap heap in the sky... a combination of writers block and the story taking turns I had not expected (kudo's to Manny for that though, it's always nice to be suprised) I find myself loosing enthusiasm and thus, in consultation with the dark lord of the roleplay (aka Manny) I would like to submit a replacement character for your perusal.

Name: Dhar'eon the Bound
A.K.A: Jharims lament, Blade of nsjgespjn, Darktooth, artifact 5738D4G, and many more
Age: Undeterminable
Place of Binding: Dhar'eon is a daemon, and as such was never truly "born". He was bound in the form of a weapon in a powerful ritual on an unknown planet far from the eyes of the Ordo Malleus.

Physical description: Dhar'eon takes the form of an edged weapon, though his form warps and twists so it is often hard to truly define what "type" of blade he is at any given moment. He often fashions himself an illusionary "wielder" to make travel and conversation easier as well as to mislead or confuse his enemy.

Brief History: Dhar'eon's first known actions were upon a small populated moon of a system abutting Imperial space. Contact was lost with the colonists and a detatchment of the local garison was dispatched to investigate the situation under the expectation of an Ork or Tyranid infestation. Upon arrival they were met by a terrified child who told stories of uncovering something dark in their terraforming operations and of great beasts killing everyone. The corpses strewn about the site stood mute attestment to the claims, so the commander of the detachment, who was ever a cautious man, decided to abandon the site and wait for further instructions, taking their sole witness aboard.

The "witness" turned out to be Dhar'eon, wearing the guise of one of the colonists children. Once the childs actual body was identified a great search was conducted but the shape-shifting daemon had already concealed himself among the garrison forces and escaped. After a long and bloody chase consisting of Dhar' pursuing powerful men in order to "devour their souls" and thus gain their strength he was finally cornered by a powerful Malleus Inquisitor named Jharim the Soulbound, who restrained the daemon with his psychic might and fashioned him into a mighty sword. Eventually though, the nattering of a daemon undoes the minds of any mortal man, no matter how potent his psychic defences and Jharim the Soulbound became Jharim the Soulless, his mind devoured by the very monster he had wielded in the Emperors name for nie on a century. After his capture and execution by the Ordo Malleus, his daemonweapon was reported purged and destroyed with the Emperors holy judgement...

Basic Stats:

Speed: 4
Agility: 4
Weaponskill: 5
Ballistic Skill: 2
Raw strength: 4
Technique strength: 4
Toughness: 3
Tactical Knowledge: 2

Skills:
Stealth 4
Dhar'eon can adopt te form of a mundane weapon, and can also create illusionary forms or "wielders." However, in his current weakened state these forms are slightly indistinct if scrutinised closely (blurred features, often wearing a cloak or similar to shroud details) and appear smoky/ ethereal in strong light.

Daemonology 4
Dhar'eon is a daemonic entity and as such has a solid working knowledge of the wap and it's denizens. He has however, been out of touch for a long time and may not be up to speed with current events and powerplays

Equipment:

Himself: Dhar'eon is his own weapon, and as such has no true need of armour or equipment. He adapts his form to the situation, in battle extending and retracting, flowing to different weapon styles and forms, though always with a bladed edge in order to draw the "essense" from his kills.

Sorcerous powers: Though not equipment per se, Dhar'eon can call upon a few inherent powers. The most obvious of these is his flowing form and the manifestation of a "wielder" but he can if the situation warrants it, expel black shadowy flames (though this burns through his strength quite rapidly) and can also perform a variety of minor "tricks" as he refers to them.

So there he is so far for your approval. Any suggestions would be appreciated as to how to tweak him but you'll note his daemonic "type" and which god he serves are deliberately absent... Gotta have few secrets don't I? Depending on how Manny writes him into the story you may or may not no much about him at all...
 
...You know, depending on how Mannfred interprets the way I am saying this, this could fit very well into the plot I am heading for with Luther...
 
You know, that is a really, really cool character. It is almost certainly the most unique and interesting creation I have ever come across. Really, really worth the extra effort. Really great job there.

If my opinion carries any weight in the situation, (which it shouldn't really, as Manny is our esteemed GM, but nevertheless...) I would agree wholeheartedly to this addition to our eclectic group.
 

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